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Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Mavelshee(m): 7:55am On Sep 28, 2016 |
RolaDiva: Amebo Guild of Nairaland (AGN) |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by PopoolaTaiwo(m): 8:04am On Sep 28, 2016 |
waiting for d next episode |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by exalt2009: 8:08am On Sep 28, 2016 |
yes, Olamide baddo...very interesting..pls don't keep me waiting |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by legendgalas(f): 8:56am On Sep 28, 2016 |
Where is this babe na, I am waiting for more. Mind you, my brother is single oooooooooooi ![]() |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by girlhaley(f): 9:23am On Sep 28, 2016 |
Excellent piece Waiting calmly for d next update 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by temmiesexy(f): 9:36am On Sep 28, 2016 |
excellent...nice 1 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by akintho(m): 11:12am On Sep 28, 2016 |
making my day... waiting for the next episod |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by akintho(m): 11:12am On Sep 28, 2016 |
making my day... waiting for the next episode |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 1:23pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 1:24pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
akintho:. . Thanks, would update when I get home, am at work |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 1:25pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
legendgalas: . . Hope ur brother is rich, if yes...no problem...lol |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 1:26pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
octacore: Thanks sweet....... Programmers for life..... |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Akubuo100(m): 3:58pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Wow!!!
Nice one..
Keep it up.. |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by tooblessed123: 4:14pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
We are patiently waiting Ma'am.... |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Tamzblaze(m): 4:18pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
RolaDiva: Madam ooooo...I'm still waiting for the continuation MUST C d end o... Nice one with a good suspense |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Ikigia: 4:56pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Following on 3D ![]() Nice one RolaDiva 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by frankcris(m): 5:05pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
[quote author=cyber5 post=49731388] Like her! You want make i break your head not that kind of like...just physically i have a gf already. 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by cyber5(m): 6:28pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Everybody listen up, no more updates till after 9months, when she gives birth. I don't want Rola stressing herself ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by cyber5(m): 6:59pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
octacore: We are Family #ProgrammerTeam |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Holashikemi(f): 7:35pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
come and update o |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by pwettyesther(f): 8:02pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
Nice one at poster #grabschair 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 12:48am On Sep 29, 2016 |
I hurriedly type this story this midnight, so I didn't check for my errors. I would cross check when I resume to work early in the morning. Am gonna reply ya'll early in the morning, I wanna sleep. Thanks for understanding. * * * * *_* * * * * Episode 5 "Am dropping here." Olamide muttered. "I know" he replied. She didn't like his attitude towards her. She knew it was about what happened the other day. She didn't want to bother over unnecessary things. She was late already. . . "Good morning" she greeted the Security man. "Morning" he replied her. "Please do you know where the Manager's office is." she asked politely. "Who are you? He eyed her from Head to toe. She was putting on a white blouse that had high neck line and long sleeves with black skirt suit and also with a low-heeled close-toed black shoe. Her hair was packed in a professional way. Her nails was trimmed and well manicured. "Olamide Martins". She replied. "Oh am so sorry". He apologized for his manners and directed her to the manager's office. She knocked slightly on the door waiting for a response. "Come in" she heard the authoritative voice. "Good morning sir" she greeted him. She guessed he was the Manager. She sensed it through his mode of dressing. He was clad with a business suit that is navy blue, that has an inner long -sleeve white shirt with a red silk tie without patterns. "You came late" he didn't even take a glance at her. "Yes sir". She was clueless on what to say. "You are going to work as a Cashier. I wanted you to be a customer representative but your dad told me you don't like interacting with people." he told her. "Titi is gonna put you through, worry no more. You can take your leave." he said while putting a call through Titi. She heaved a sign when she left his office. "So close, she muttered. "Who does that? I wasn't invited for any interview, I didn't submit any C.V and am getting a job. That old man got it covered." she reasoned. She was taken aback from the sweet angelic voice she heard. "Morning, am Titilayo. She stretched her hand forward to give her a hand shake. "Am Olamide" she welcomed Titi's tiny hands. "I know a lot about you" Titi smiled. "Really" she was liking this girl already. "Lets get back to business". Titi told her. . . . Hours later she was familiar with the banking system and the way the bank operated. "Next" she looked up to attend to the next customer. Her eyes traced his slender slim body. She felt this flip flops in her stomach. Her heart did a little skip. He looked like he just arrived from the state. He was six feet four inches tall with dark curly hair. He was clad in a V-neck long sleeve t-shirt with a Two zipper buckle jeans. She was still checking him out when she heard him speak. "Take." she noticed he has an American accent as he handed the slip to her. She thought he made an error while he was filling the slip. For someone dressed like this, he worth more than this. 'Sir, you made a mistake." she gave him the slip to cross check. "Yeah, I know" he felt a little bit embarrassed. "It is nothing sir, we operate on zero account here. She smiled. She collected the slip and chuckled when she saw the sum of six hundred naira only. As in who does that, after queuing for more than an hour to collect such amount. She wondered. "Yeah is not what you think" he said like he read her mind. "I was robbed, on my way. I never knew the driver was a thief. I tried contacting my brother but he is not picking up. I don't know anybody here in Nigeria except from my brother. I remembered my brother and I had joint account back then, but he stopped making use of it when I left. The account is dormant and I guess the money in there is not up to a thousand." He explained. "Am really sorry for your loss sir". She apologized. "Its nothing, you can call me pete, the sir of a thing is making me look Old" he corrected her. She looked at the name written on the slip. Peter Andrew. Was he related to Lucas Andrew. We have many Andrews' he can't be related to him. Am just stupid. She thought. An elderly woman from the queue shouted from the back. "If una wan toast una seff, why una no kukuma book hotel. Una don see fine man wey una go chop his money abi." she angrily accused Olamide in pidgin. She apologized to the elderly lady and attended to Pete. . . . "This Job is not as bad as I thought am enjoying every moment. Just like an adventure. She thought. She was happy, she couldn't say if it was her newly found job or the new guy she meant. Tbc.... You guys should start picking your team now o. #Tunde_badmus #Teju_Adewale #Peter_Andrew.... More update...... 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by billynoni(m): 12:50am On Sep 29, 2016 |
You've gat to fight for what you cherish...... #team Teju_adewale |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by cyber5(m): 2:20am On Sep 29, 2016 |
Rola, I sent you a mail kindly check |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Olabantu(m): 3:51am On Sep 29, 2016 |
Me no cum understand Olajide again ooo...how guys she wan dey control at once and pls wat does Tito knows about her |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Perfectionist11: 6:21am On Sep 29, 2016 |
Nice write up..but everything is happening "too fast"..and b4 you know it d story would become predictable..its a disease that affect most stories based on romance on this platform..except d likes of First Night,To love & leave,Silent seduction..The photographer e.t.c.. 1)She didn't have 2 meet pete on her 1st day @ d job..she could have used that to get familiar wt d job. 2)Teju didn't have 2 tell his mum he loved Ola so early.. 3)The Olu & Ivy scene happened too fast too.. You need to be more meticulous and descriptive..give us details rather than jumping from 1 twist to another.. You're doing a nice jon thou..maybe it d perfectionist in me that's blabbing. 2 Likes |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 7:54am On Sep 29, 2016 |
@perfectionist11 Thanks so much. Am gonna work on that. Buh your name ehn, e get as e be. Come share me some so I go perfect na ![]() ![]() |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by RolaDiva(f): 7:55am On Sep 29, 2016 |
cyber5:. . .lmao....lol...am not pregnant o |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by Holashikemi(f): 9:25am On Sep 29, 2016 |
team #peter Andrew 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by mattyboy007(m): 10:31am On Sep 29, 2016 |
Make me slf buy land here 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by girlhaley(f): 11:45am On Sep 29, 2016 |
#teju_adewale all the way Nice story you've got here ma'am 1 Like |
Re: Heart Of A Broken Girl by cyber5(m): 8:44pm On Sep 29, 2016 |
RolaDiva:Ok, mo ti gbo oo, have u read my mail 1 Like |
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