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Reloaded; Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisimd Are Welcomed by Switup: 10:21am On Sep 23, 2016
It takes two to tango On a thread that is narrow And when beset by arrows They shall conquer their sorrows Be it in a deep hollow Or just a road in a row; Their war shall not be known. But whence a man grown And a damsel blown Have chosen not to head for the unknown Hence, merry in the known For which even the poor heart bleeds for more; Their days, one in many is filled with bore. And though they let their egos soar Above nature's loving roar for care Alas! It is indeed that along with them they bear The burden of loneliness so near. But you there, beware That he, when at sixty-eight and a year Will he beget for himself a maiden so dear... And for him shall she bear A son and a pair. And volia! He gets buried the next year Only to leave behind a weeping widow there And children all so tender. So why merry for so long in that lonely known? When I know That it takes two to tango?
Re: Reloaded; Pls See Through My Poetry; All Criticisimd Are Welcomed by Switup: 10:27am On Sep 23, 2016
To d mods; pls am having issues portraying my poetry in its right form. it keeps showing up as a prose; pls help do d needful. thanx


to all; pls feel free to comment n criticize. I've been writing poems but this is the first time am actually showing it to d world. (whispers ) am nervous...

thus all comments are appreciated. thanx

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