MOSflame:
Life is a game you win some you(jew) lose some/see this(cd's) niqqa back then he was a coward he took him many years to build up some courage but now he has grew some(gruesome)/if you think you can blow me off my niqqa am not candles on birthday cake/getting in this battle you're putting your life  at stake/once I stab your right(rite) eye(hi) in the(Hindi) future you gonna be called the Nigeria version of fetty wap/its like you got some(sum) spaces in between your teeth(tit) well my punch will fill the gap(s)/



since(sins) you are a Muslim once you get killed in this battle I won't inform your parent but carry on the funeral and bury you with a mat/the sad scenario of your lifetime is that none of your songs has ever top d chart/ur bitcch is a d controller she's always on my niqqaz dick/cus she sees(cease)you like an impotent prick/Rapacme might be too broke but he has to pay for is sins/i will make your heart fails once I tears apart your blood veins/



overhead your niqqaz saying the only time you feel hornny(honey) is when u see dog's mating/before you were eighteen have been blazing and thats why you hating/since I gat beef with blood then you will surely swim in it/i write bars sitting  near the sun(son) for you niqqaz to feel the heat(hit)/splitting bars into two like Moses did to the red sea/d only time you think you have been to America is when you are on mountain top and you oversee(oversea)/



Have barbeque many mcs brain for lunch so yours is not not an exception/am so ambitious as devil am d niqqa that killed jude before he could see revelation/the last time I walk into your rap show I was the only one in the crowd/when I say am superior niqqaz think am proud/ur bars is suffering from kwashiork u better start taking vitamin k/i will make your whole family go gaga like chuddy k/




am not a fan of John cena but you niqqaz can't see me cus your eyes are hung on my scrotum/why are you mad at me maybe you are just been discharged from asylum/am not claiming the best,but am superior to the rest while stepping on the vets/ur flows so disgusting you better feed them to the birds in their nest/i Will make this battle hotter for this g know (geno) like titanic engine room(rum)/u must be apc supporter cus you always go all about with a broom/



lets bullets rain and leave em red here like nunu bells though/no matter how hot your bars are I will still claim the deal though(diildo)

RapAcme:
Quick freestyle at mos...



Leqqo
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MORE TECHS BLAST THROUGH /so when I'm launching-basukaz /it's a total wreck on the g's zone without touching-kakouda/..next.. I "place the 9 on his arm "...Fernando TORRES TATTOO!!!! /(gzone )
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Sure you can't wreck "my hope here" when I'm LIFTING FOUR NINES /"a Po low" your CHICKS WITH JAWS DYKE /fact is.. You are in a tour where your flows can only be "SICK IN YOUR EYES "!!!!!!/(myopia, apolo )

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Mos claims he ball hard and REP ALL GREAT
TEAMS IN POLAND /plus he's known in Uruguay
THEREFORE BLAZING WITH FORLAN/so my
thugs-had-this nd got-angry /it was a "transfer of
aggression " as they make their macs "place
bids on his head " like DECORATING A
MONARCH!!! /

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I WRITE RHYMZ THAT KILL DUDES /'TIGHT LINES AH BRING TOO/plus I ain't cool-
with-techs/i pen barz that 'kill sh1t'..poo-sees-
death! /if e imitates me and 'pen his'?,,he'll end
up like yetunde idowu as he DIE BY A PISTOL!!'/
wait!!!.. I said he'll end up as another yetunde
idowu as he DIE BY A PISS TOOL!!!!! /

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Your dirty bars can't be compared to mine.. Cos I
"DROP CLEAN THINGS " GEE/put a blade
between your thighs.. Now he's she,,
MOCKERY FITS HIM PLS/next ..his two hands in the air like I ROBBED HIM IN HIS CLICK/
See!!!!.....no matter what the judges "decides to
state"...I'll still "win this bitch"
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I'm TRUMP IN THIS SH1T!!!!.....
(Clinton)
# Ac_WhatsUp

DarkRebel101:
MOSflame's so-called wordplays made me cringe. You have a long way to go, son; and obviously you need a thoroughgoing understanding of what wordplays are and how they should be used.

It's better that you steer clear of wordies and that you don't use them at all than that you should use a forced and bad wordie. A bad wordie reduces points, just like bad metaphors and bad rhyming do.
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I expected more from Rapacmne but he disappointed. This is 2016 -- no battle MC should still be playing pistol with piss tool. Get creative guys!

MVGT: Rapacmne -- largely because he didn't cram so many forced wordies in his verse, because he at least attempted polysyllabic rhyming, and also because his verse had a better structure.