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Saying Goodbye by Labans(m): 5:56pm On Jan 17, 2007
So soft
the brief touch of your lips
on my cheek.

Was I almost intruding?

"Look after yourself "
should have been
"I love you!"

Then the Jumbo flew over
my head
and I shouted my love
above the roar
and thundering thrust

. . . as if you'd hear.

Through the clouds in my eyes
I watched you fly away
and wished I'd been born with wings
.
Re: Saying Goodbye by Lalas(m): 8:09am On Jan 20, 2007
kai, that good bye musta hurt!! i liked it very much, cos it coincisely depicts all the emotions felt at once,

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