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Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:09am On Nov 30, 2017
hi
Re: United In Betrayal by puregrace(m): 8:45am On Nov 30, 2017
Wetin I wan talk sef,dem don shatter this gal heart,(I meant Clair's heart) no be small.
She doesn't even knw who to trust again. Clair Sorry ehn.
Re: United In Betrayal by LaDoughMoney: 9:08am On Nov 30, 2017
PamelB:
No part of this work should be copied or reproduced in another form without the author's notice and confirmation.

#pamelb





The voice of the man could be heard at the gate as the house helps listened, at the same time, pretending to be occupied with their chores.

"You're too lazy, what's wrong in waking up early to prepare me a decent meal? I go out every morning and come back late because I'm struggling to keep this family in line with whatever is in vogue, all I expect is your loyalty and submission but no, you lie in bed and ask the maids to prepare my meal and you know I don't like it."

Claire didn't say a word. She was battling with morning sickness and she doesn't even know why. She suddenly has the urge to throw up at the smell of food, she feels weak each morning or is it the saliva that has started forming a lake in her mouth. She watched her husband shout, he deserved to be angry. For the two years they've been married, she'd singlehandedly prepared all his meals, he doesn't eat out except snacks so she gives him breakfast, takes his lunch to his office and then makes dinner before he returns. She only goes to her mall during the weekend when she gets new supplies. She left the mall in the care of her younger sister who just graduated from ANSU last year.

Her marriage has been perfect until she started feeling strange two weeks ago so she understood that Michael, her sweet husband has the right to be angry.

"You can lie in bed all day if you want but I'm not eating that food. Don't make me eat out because if I do, Claire Njama if I eat out, you won't like it."

Claire sat up at once, she tried to speak but her mouth was filled with saliva so she ran into the bathroom, washed her mouth and came out, only to meet him about leaving the room.

"Baby, I'm sorry okay, I've not been feeling too good and ...."

"That's what you've been saying for two weeks now Claire. If you're tired of being my wife, tell me." Michael interrupted angrily.

"I love you Michael and I won't get tired of performing my duties but look at me nau. You know I'm not like this biko.'

Michael looked his wife over. She had added weight and he didn't like it. Topping it, she's started ignoring him. She must be seeing another man.
He hissed loudly, opened the door and walked out.
He went downstairs and walked to the dinning where he met Amara who was dishing out from a bowl of egg sauce. Beside her was a plate of white yam.

"Good morning bro Mike. How was your night?" She asked with face full of smile.

"Morning Amara. Who made that?" He asked eying the egg sauce which was so inviting, with the tiny pieces of liver he could see sleeping in it.

"Oh! I brought the sauce from the deep freezer, sister Claire must have made it sometime, then I boiled the yam"

He smiled and sat down, signalling to Amara to serve him. What is white yam? It doesn't mean anything since its his wife that made the sauce. Hr finished just as Amara was about putting away her plate.

"You're ready to leave for the mall right?"

"Yes bro Mike. I'll just clear the dishes and leave immediately."

"Alright. Hurry up so I can drop you". He said, picking his briefcase and walking out.
Amara smiled. She was tired of trekking to the bus stand. Maybe if she wakes up early everyday, he would help her by dropping her at the mall which was in the centre of town.
She carried the plates to the kitchen where the house helps were gossiping and cleared her throat. They scampered to different corners of the kitchen.

"Its still not 9 and you're already gossiping, useless things."
She jammed the plates on one of the girl's hand before dropping them and walking out.

"She is just a sister to madam and she's like this, chukwu ekwekwala ihe ojoo (God forbid bad thing)". One of the girls said

"Upon say she fine like this" another one added.

"Beautiful girls are the ones with the disgusting attitudes". Gertrude, the head maid said. " let's just go back to work, she's not worth the time".

Claire watched from the window as her husband and younger sister got into the car and drove off. He had taken time as she had been standing there since he walked out. Maybe he drank tea or was just waiting for Amara so he can drop her. She sighed and sat on the bed, bringing out her iPhone to send him a text.

"I'm sorry baby, tell me what you want for lunch and I'll bring it to you okay, don't be mad at me for long. I love you to the moon and back."

She sent it and hoped for a reply. Tomorrow, she would go to the hospital and get some tests done. She won't ruin her marriage because of some illness.
She laid on her back, hoping to get some rest only for her to fall asleep.
It was that bad.



She is obviously pregnant and the Husby would be so dumb yo have an affair wot the sister. Just saying tho�
Re: United In Betrayal by LaDoughMoney: 9:57am On Nov 30, 2017
Honestly,this guy is driving me nuts but I love the way Claire is handling him
Re: United In Betrayal by yhungbrowhne(m): 3:25pm On Nov 30, 2017
madam come and xontinue ooopo
Re: United In Betrayal by Frederick555: 11:08pm On Nov 30, 2017
Madam pameib please come and finish what you started even though we ve know what will happen next. My team clairemicheal# has lose already while team clairephil#is about to take home the crown. Pamelb couldn't even give Michael that started well on a brighter atmosphere of love with Claire a little space to change and turn a new leave. She make sure that Micheal do more than what the devil himself can not do. Infact am not happy with the way you condem Micheal beyond forgiven. Or how are we sure that this wolves in sheep clothing of this Phillip of a guy won't suddenly change just like Micheal. Well their destiny is in your hand which ever way you want it so will it be. We are following till the end.

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Re: United In Betrayal by sweetdude001(m): 10:22am On Dec 01, 2017
I feel this story should end already, even doe am team Micheal, its looking like Phil d get d price.
D only tin rong with dis story s D Micheal character, d author wanted him hated so bad that some tins he did didn't jus add up...
Great story though.
Re: United In Betrayal by Frederick555: 11:47am On Dec 01, 2017
I tire oooo. The rate at which the writter hardened the heart of Micheal is quite alarming. Only Michael sleep with his secretary sleep with two househelp and also sleep with his wife younger sister and also wanted to sleep with his wife freind. Are you trying to tell me now that Micheal is a IndecentStar now or what. While Kelvin that sleep with Sarah Micheal secretary all in the name of saving Micheal's marriage who later sleep with Claire sister is now been portrayed as saint all because he supported Claire and Phillip dating. Is Kelvin also trying to save Claire and Micheal marriage when he sleep with Claire sister? Pls take it easy with this guy.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 5:47pm On Dec 01, 2017
Welcome back sis and thanks for continuing the story.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 9:34pm On Dec 01, 2017
Abeg you people should allow the writer to finish her story. No matter how you see it, shits happen these days, take it or leave it. What people do nowadays is even worst than what Michael is doing in this story. Until we learn to take responsible for our actions and not apportion blame to people, we might even do worst things. Pamelb pls keep it up and don't be discouraged. The story is already passing the lessons its meant to pass, and those who will learn from it will do. Remain blessed. Waiting for more update.....

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Re: United In Betrayal by bernarddean: 11:45am On Dec 03, 2017
captivating story. its a story full of lessons.I await the concluding part. thanks
Re: United In Betrayal by Ritajovy(f): 3:59pm On Dec 04, 2017
Chai!!!!
Ogbuo mm ooooo!!!
Ewooooo!!!!!
This story or should I call it movie got me screaming. Do I love it?? ''Of course i do! is that even a question?''
PamelB ma!! Thank you for sharing!!
Re: United In Betrayal by oly0511(f): 7:57pm On Dec 04, 2017
I don't know what wrong with some of here it her story for Christ sake and more so it do happen in real life
Re: United In Betrayal by oly0511(f): 7:58pm On Dec 04, 2017
I don't know what wrong with some of you here it her story for Christ sake and more so it do happen in real life
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 12:13am On Dec 05, 2017
Trust me on this but I have a premonition dat even Phil is not a saint soon you all would experience Phils own betrayal

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Re: United In Betrayal by Kpumie(m): 3:06pm On Dec 05, 2017
Pamelb, i love ur literary prowess u r the chiamanda of your generation, female version of wole soyinka, may idea to your ,medulla oblongata.
Re: United In Betrayal by talk2saintify(m): 8:47pm On Dec 05, 2017
Op Get Plenti Plenti Fans ooo..
Chai
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 8:01am On Dec 06, 2017
PamelB , continua.
You are an amazing writer and you are doing a great job.

As I said before, I choose to remain silent on the issues on ground.
Re: United In Betrayal by Dessydemmy: 8:26am On Dec 07, 2017
My Pam!!! where are you again o? loving you always.Dessydemmy cares.

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Re: United In Betrayal by tomgab(m): 6:09pm On Dec 07, 2017
From a silent reader and follower

PamelB, wherever you are, whatever you are doing, I pray that God bless abundantly.


I now have this request: please in the name of God, come and complete this story. Thanks....

"Expectations not met makes the heart grow sick" our heart is growing sick o

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Re: United In Betrayal by AndyGlobal: 7:21am On Dec 08, 2017
Frederick555:
I tire oooo. The rate at which the writter hardened the heart of Micheal is quite alarming. Only Michael sleep with his secretary sleep with two househelp and also sleep with his wife younger sister and also wanted to sleep with his wife freind. Are you trying to tell me now that Micheal is a IndecentStar now or what. While Kelvin that sleep with Sarah Micheal secretary all in the name of saving Micheal's marriage who later sleep with Claire sister is now been portrayed as saint all because he supported Claire and Phillip dating. Is Kelvin also trying to save Claire and Micheal marriage when he sleep with Claire sister? Pls take it easy with this guy.
Some people sef,,,,,does it mean dat you read without understanding? Why not go back and get some points?
Kelvin is only trying to save his best friend's marriage that is hitting rocks already.Remember,Kelvin got more determined to forge ahead with the plan after he confronted Mike for going after a cheap slut like Sarah saying dat she's incomparable with Claire so y d cheat?And Mike replied dah he can v his wife Claire dat he's enjoying Sarah.The statement infuriated Kelvin more and he resolved to frustrate Sarah.It was his encounter with Sarah dat ignited the fire in him and he went to a club hoping to find olosho to quench it.So he cudnt find his taste in d club so he went home to drink it out ,after getting drunk as he mistakenly staggered to Amarachi's room and d deed was done.The stupid Amarachi after dat encounter requested for more wen he asked her to beg Claire to stop the policemen from arresting her bf sinx he's the one that committed d offense unconsciously.There and then Kelvin lost interest in her.Remember he reluctantly accepted the offer in a hotel .....so read right .All dat Kelvin did was for good coz he sees Claire as his goddess for saving him in Skul and thereby he cudnt watch her going thru all that.We didn't like him coz he accommodated Phil and Claire's r/ship no!it's coz he wants her happiness so he supports anything dat makes her happy

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Re: United In Betrayal by Daisyben(f): 10:55pm On Dec 08, 2017
Rose come update nau
Re: United In Betrayal by acupikin: 10:02pm On Dec 09, 2017
PamelB:
No part of this work should be copied or reproduced in another form without the author's notice and confirmation.

#pamelb





The voice of the man could be heard at the gate as the house helps listened, at the same time, pretending to be occupied with their chores.

"You're too lazy, what's wrong in waking up early to prepare me a decent meal? I go out every morning and come back late because I'm struggling to keep this family in line with whatever is in vogue, all I expect is your loyalty and submission but no, you lie in bed and ask the maids to prepare my meal and you know I don't like it."

Claire didn't say a word. She was battling with morning sickness and she doesn't even know why. She suddenly has the urge to throw up at the smell of food, she feels weak each morning or is it the saliva that has started forming a lake in her mouth. She watched her husband shout, he deserved to be angry. For the two years they've been married, she'd singlehandedly prepared all his meals, he doesn't eat out except snacks so she gives him breakfast, takes his lunch to his office and then makes dinner before he returns. She only goes to her mall during the weekend when she gets new supplies. She left the mall in the care of her younger sister who just graduated from ANSU last year.

Her marriage has been perfect until she started feeling strange two weeks ago so she understood that Michael, her sweet husband has the right to be angry.

"You can lie in bed all day if you want but I'm not eating that food. Don't make me eat out because if I do, Claire Njama if I eat out, you won't like it."

Claire sat up at once, she tried to speak but her mouth was filled with saliva so she ran into the bathroom, washed her mouth and came out, only to meet him about leaving the room.

"Baby, I'm sorry okay, I've not been feeling too good and ...."

"That's what you've been saying for two weeks now Claire. If you're tired of being my wife, tell me." Michael interrupted angrily.

"I love you Michael and I won't get tired of performing my duties but look at me nau. You know I'm not like this biko.'

Michael looked his wife over. She had added weight and he didn't like it. Topping it, she's started ignoring him. She must be seeing another man.
He hissed loudly, opened the door and walked out.
He went downstairs and walked to the dinning where he met Amara who was dishing out from a bowl of egg sauce. Beside her was a plate of white yam.

"Good morning bro Mike. How was your night?" She asked with face full of smile.

"Morning Amara. Who made that?" He asked eying the egg sauce which was so inviting, with the tiny pieces of liver he could see sleeping in it.

"Oh! I brought the sauce from the deep freezer, sister Claire must have made it sometime, then I boiled the yam"

He smiled and sat down, signalling to Amara to serve him. What is white yam? It doesn't mean anything since its his wife that made the sauce. Hr finished just as Amara was about putting away her plate.

"You're ready to leave for the mall right?"

"Yes bro Mike. I'll just clear the dishes and leave immediately."

"Alright. Hurry up so I can drop you". He said, picking his briefcase and walking out.
Amara smiled. She was tired of trekking to the bus stand. Maybe if she wakes up early everyday, he would help her by dropping her at the mall which was in the centre of town.
She carried the plates to the kitchen where the house helps were gossiping and cleared her throat. They scampered to different corners of the kitchen.

"Its still not 9 and you're already gossiping, useless things."
She jammed the plates on one of the girl's hand before dropping them and walking out.

"She is just a sister to madam and she's like this, chukwu ekwekwala ihe ojoo (God forbid bad thing)". One of the girls said

"Upon say she fine like this" another one added.

"Beautiful girls are the ones with the disgusting attitudes". Gertrude, the head maid said. " let's just go back to work, she's not worth the time".

Claire watched from the window as her husband and younger sister got into the car and drove off. He had taken time as she had been standing there since he walked out. Maybe he drank tea or was just waiting for Amara so he can drop her. She sighed and sat on the bed, bringing out her iPhone to send him a text.

"I'm sorry baby, tell me what you want for lunch and I'll bring it to you okay, don't be mad at me for long. I love you to the moon and back."

She sent it and hoped for a reply. Tomorrow, she would go to the hospital and get some tests done. She won't ruin her marriage because of some illness.
She laid on her back, hoping to get some rest only for her to fall asleep.
It was that bad.
pls can i share this story on my blog metrodailies.com
Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:44am On Dec 11, 2017
updates o
Re: United In Betrayal by danyCEO(m): 7:14am On Dec 13, 2017
Pamela B where are you? This thread has been silent for days. Pls come back and round up the story.

I just hope you are safe.
Re: United In Betrayal by phranq30(m): 9:16am On Dec 13, 2017
...and that's how PamelB abandoned the story...
Re: United In Betrayal by lovlea07(m): 5:23pm On Dec 13, 2017
I got 2 say his have fallen in love with u pamela,this meal of urs is quite delicious...... love u more and more each time i read new update of this story.... muaaaahhhhhh
Re: United In Betrayal by cbella(f): 3:22am On Dec 16, 2017
I hope PamelB is fine wherever she is.

Say Hi so we know you are fine ma'am.
Re: United In Betrayal by Kanshi1(m): 4:29pm On Dec 18, 2017
pamelB and chumzypinky are same but different monikers....whenever chumzypinky updates, same time pamelB updates.

And if u take notice, both are MIA in their threads.

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Re: United In Betrayal by AryEmber(f): 9:57pm On Dec 18, 2017
Kanshi1:
pamelB and chumzypinky are same but different monikers....whenever chumzypinky updates, same time pamelB updates.

And if u take notice, both are MIA in their threads.
Hmm, so TBM is actually married to a single woman he considered two?
Re: United In Betrayal by Paradise163(f): 8:12am On Dec 19, 2017
Kanshi1:
pamelB and chumzypinky are same but different monikers....whenever chumzypinky updates, same time pamelB updates.

And if u take notice, both are MIA in their threads.

I have always wanted to say this but am glad someone else took note

Whenever Pamel posts,that's when Chumpzy posts too
Re: United In Betrayal by FloraEC(f): 10:28am On Dec 19, 2017
Kanshi1:
pamelB and chumzypinky are same but different monikers....whenever chumzypinky updates, same time pamelB updates.

And if u take notice, both are MIA in their threads.

They're not the same, PamelB lives in onitsha/Enugu but Chumzypinky is Asaba. At least I've seen their pictures

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