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Once "Beaten" by omeira: 3:42pm On Mar 17, 2017
It was our first ever
'Started out calmly
Then it became heated
Gradually
His eyes got red
He was blazing with fury
I was irritated
And I did respond slyly
Then I heard a clap
But it wasn't really a clap
Two palms didn't strike themselves
So change the see to hess
A thick graft of brawny phalanges
Smacked bliss out of my rosy cheek
It felt frenzy at first
Like a bell was ringing in my ears
My vessels pulsed like they would burst
And life seemed everly blur
Stars still hovering around me
I picked my bag and made to leave
His softened frame blocked my way
Soberly, he began to plead
Without a word I walked away
Lest someday he'll make me bleed
Once beaten, run for your life my dear
Is a quote I once told a friend
A slap before saying "I do"
Means flowers on my tombstone for honeymoon
That's if I last long enough for a wedding party
Cos no matter what, a gentleman never hits a lady...
Re: Once "Beaten" by Iamlordroman: 9:59pm On Oct 31, 2017
Nice write up with an interesting subject matter. The emotions embedded in each line is superbly placed.
Re: Once "Beaten" by omeira: 10:18pm On Oct 31, 2017
Iamlordroman:
Nice write up with an interesting subject matter.
The emotions embedded in each line is superbly placed.
Thank you sire
Re: Once "Beaten" by Iamlordroman: 11:24pm On Oct 31, 2017
You're welcome. When next do you plan on writing something like this?
Re: Once "Beaten" by omeira: 11:41pm On Oct 31, 2017
Iamlordroman:
You're welcome.
When next do you plan on writing something like this?
Soon enough..

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