Honey, you've come when I'm Hot

knocking on my door like an angry soldier

yesterday you passed without even a wink

your glowing masculinity placed in face

your shirtless bod' visits my dreams

now you've come to knock on my door

your lips so full and red for your beautiful dark self

honey, I know I'm with another

honey, I know another owns you

but honey you've come when I'm Hot

surely you can't leave me in a hurry

I've had you several times in my mind

but right now in my rivers you must swim

come in honey and lock the door

my lover is away

tonight you're my dinner

honey, you've come when i'm Hot

sure you must delay in returning.

You call this poem?

loool

if u're talking about d arrangement of the lines and the piece...it appears difficult to do with my phone...if u're talking about diction...there's nothing wrong with a simple free verse. otherwise...maybe u're d one who doesn't know what poetry is.

Ornez:
if u're talking about d arrangement of the lines and the piece...it appears difficult to do with my phone...if u're talking about diction...there's nothing wrong with a simple free verse. otherwise...maybe u're d one who doesn't know what poetry is.

You can check my topics and comment back who doesn't know knw what poem is #Thanks