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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 10:26am On May 11, 2017 |
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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 4:19pm On May 12, 2017 |
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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 9:00am On Jul 12, 2017 |
MY MISTAKES ALWAYS MAKE MME STRONGER STEP BY STEP Amanda drove to a huge looking furnished apartment,but to ade this was heaven on earth. as they steped out of the car into the compound ade felt jolt of electricity ringing through his brain, all his inner gift tormented him not to enter this house, but ade being a stubborn brat decided to enter, Amanda noticed the changes in ade mood and tries to light him up amanda___pls feel at home while i go get my dad ade____thanks amanda leaves to get her dad, ten minutes later wen amanda dad walk into the room, ade sees a spiritual tattoo written on his face with BLOOD, the mark was 666,, ade shivered in fear nd instantly tapped into his inner self, shango speaks to his son shango__ this is your first mission, that evil man has imprisoned a lot of innocent souls, you have to save them ade__hell no, i want no part in this shango__you don't have a choice, (shango waves his finger and ade realize he is back to earth, he then then frown as amanda dad congratulates him on his bravery 2 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 1:52pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Toyin223(f): 2:34pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
WELCOME Back |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 5:15pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
Toyin223:thanks |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 5:37pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
Ade smiled at the devil incarnate, as he offered him a job in the household, amanda dad__ i hereby appoint you as a personal bodyguard to my daughter ade___sir that won't really be necessary amanda dad___my son, wat are those muscles for, beside i will pay you 150k monthly and u would be in charge of................. ade quickly cut him off and accepts his deal, i would rather live a day in glory than a thousand years in poverty ade thinks to himself ade was give the ten commandments of the household but wat that caught his eyes is the 10th law, flirt with my angel and i will cut your joystick and feed it to u ade thought it was a joke until rumors spread through the community that amanda boyfriend was found dead and multitated without his joystick 3 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Sylva2147: 6:51pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
op you have a very nice story but your delay in update is driving your readers away, please be consistent. Anyway thumbs up keep the good work going. NB: I notice that in some cases the story seems as if someone is the one narrating while in some cases as if Ade himself is narrating, please just use either of the two in order not complicate the story. please do mention me when you update. |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by chisiudeh: 7:20pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
Nice concept. I remember reading the first chapter over a week ago. Consistency is vital though I know its not easy considering ur schedule. Anyway, 1 ship load of ink to ur biro |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 7:57pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
Sylva2147:I will try to update regularly from nw |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 7:57pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
chisiudeh:thanks |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 8:55pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
A big shout out to Toyin223, Sylva2147, and chisiudeh, your comments are encouraging A good reputation is better than wealth My new boss wealth was so much that even the rich called him riched and the poor call him a ritualist, His reputation was so tarnished to the extent that no one accept his money. it was them against the world, which I was mad enough to indulge myself into, but I have experience worst from a mosquito sacking vampire so I forced myself to enjoy my life for now. it was midday when amanda walked up to me beaming with smiles, she shyly wrap her hands around me , amanda____(beaming with smile) dear i want us to go swimming ade______(frowns) you are definitely not in danger in your own house, so go and swim then amanda______you are my bodyguard and anywhere I go, u go too ade__________ well don't think you can order me around like trash amanda_______ ok pleeessssssss (she pleads) we walked up to the pool and she changed into her swimming pants, my head scatter at the beautiful shape before me but I remembered the 10th commandments nd i looked away amanda started narrating her life story of how she lost her mother at 10 years, two year after both of her brothers died mysteriously and she has ever been alone since then, I acted as if I was compassionate towards her but wat that was getting my attention was her sexy shape. I decided to play Rev Francis, nd i comforted her that she should put her trust in god, while I was a die hard worshiper of shango but I could not tell her that As I was comforting her she pulled me to her and hugged me tightly, I knew the hunger that she was feeling but I tried to lessen her hug, all to no avail. She then free her grip and stares into my eyes with last boldly written in my head i wanted to kiss her but I felt a heavy slap on my face, I stumbled into the swimming pool and I started screaming help, help, help ade_____ amanda pls help I can't swim amanda____dear u are really funny funny stop joking and swim out ade_______(sinks into the water) I can't swim................. water echoes boooooooo amanda stood outside the pool laughing, this guy is even more funny than AY but unknown to her ade was not joking at all 2 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Sylva2147: 9:45pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
johnfa466:thanks for the mention and the wonderful update |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Toyin223(f): 10:14pm On Jul 12, 2017 |
TANK U For Mention |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by kelvinhilton(m): 1:22am On Jul 13, 2017 |
Nice story line u gat here, forgive me for being blunt I think the way u narrate is kinda childish. I'll advice u work on that aspect.. Kudos to u... 1 Like |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 8:51am On Jul 13, 2017 |
As minutes tickets by, Amanda realized that ade was not joking, so she quickly jumped into the water, and rescued him, amanda pumps his stomach while ade spits out water unconsciously,. ade felt a slight change in the surroundings, then he looked around and discovered that his spirit has left his body, he sees amanda administering pvr to his body then he felt the jolting arrival of shango ade_______ (kneels in obvilion) sango the great among great , your humble servant awe at your might of your glory, shango_____my child I slapped u as as u were about to flirt with half my vessel, despite our differences it pains me to tell you this, your mother just passed away ade_______you are joking right shango______i don't sympathize, neither do I joke ade________(cries) wat is the cause of her demise shango________sometimes it is better not to dig where u ought not to ade_______she is my mother for crying out loud shango_______(sighs) dats why i decided to grant her, her last request which was to see you A shadow slowly drifts in, and before ade could realize it, his mother was standing before him ade mom_____ my love, how much I wished to see u before my demise ade_____(rushes to hold his mum, but they were cut aside by a huge barrier) wat is the meaning of dis shango____ you have the taint of life in you, so you can't be allowed to touch a spirit ade__________maami, who do this to you ade mom_______ i was unjustly murdered my love ade________(angrily speaks out) by who ade mom_____ i was killed by your uncle tunde ade__________(roams about angrily) how dare him, I will reap his throat out, and feed it to the dogs, I will destroy everything he love, I will make sure he dies a broken man, I will______ ade mom____(cuts him off) The hunger for vengeance could be you own downfall, my love sometimes it is better to leave matters for God to judge ade__-_____mom I don't believe in God stories, they are for bedtime stories, I don't believe in karma (as they were speaking, angel of death walks in, the whole surrounding smoke with the blackness from the depth of hell itself) 2 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by kelvinhilton(m): 1:35am On Jul 15, 2017 |
Mehn its getting hot in here.. More update plz |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Toyin223(f): 10:48pm On Jul 15, 2017 |
johnfa466:WAITING |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by kelvinhilton(m): 3:25pm On Jul 16, 2017 |
See her small eyes... U too like story too much |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 8:39am On Jul 17, 2017 |
the whole area smoked with blackness from the depth of hell itself, the angel moved with light stroke that could send chills towards the spine, ADE looked around for sango but discovered that he was no where to be found angel of death____(opens his mouth to speak with stink sulfur smoking through his lungs) (speaks to ade mom) come my child, it's time to go home ade mom(cries silently) ade pls don't ever doubt yourself, always believe in yourself and I love you ade___ (rushes forward bt is being blocked by the barrier ) mom I won't let u go without a fight angel of death (hisses at ade) you dare to defy high principality of power, it is quite unfortunate that you have the taint of life in you ade______am not afraid of you angel of death_____(laughs) you should be, someday I will come for you and i will take you through the paths of ancient beast, and chain you there till the coming of yeshua, dis I promise you 2 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by kelvinhilton(m): 9:02pm On Jul 17, 2017 |
Nice but quite short. |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by joshuaboss9: 4:25pm On Jul 18, 2017 |
update oooo |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 12:51am On Jul 26, 2017 |
BEFORE CREATION , HE WASN'T CREATED BUT THE DAY , ADAM ATE THE APPLE, DEATH WAS BORN AND HAS BEEN IN EXISTENCE SINCE, FEW HAS CHEATED HIM, EVEN MOSES THE GREAT PROPHET , FOLLOWED HIM WITHOUT A WORD, WHEN JESUS CHRIST CHEATED HIM MORE THAN ONCE , HE WAS ANGRY AND SWORE NEVER TO JOKE WITH MORTALS AGAIN, SO LOOKING AT A MERE MORTAL DISGUST HIM UPDATE LOADING.................................. |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Toyin223(f): 12:35am On Aug 20, 2017 |
WAITING |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by Nobody: 6:18pm On Aug 20, 2017 |
bobo calm down,read wat u type b4 u post,ur update are not frequent,i check everyday nothing & kelvinhilton is right by d way u are doing a great job dear |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by marvin902(m): 10:58am On Aug 29, 2017 |
cool |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by francis6611(m): 11:48am On Aug 29, 2017 |
guy wetin the hold this story nahhh |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 10:06am On Sep 03, 2017 |
Am really sorry for the delay in update, currently typing nw |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 12:15pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
Ade was not afraid of the fear striking ghost but unknown to him sango was. Angel of death----------(ignores ade and sniffs like a wolf) I smell the presence of a demigod Ade-----------(excited and boasts) my god will destroy you and save my mom Ade mom tries to speak but she was lips struck by death Ade-----------(screams) sango the faithful, the unique god among all gods, destroy this being from the face of death Sango refuse to appear because he could not do anything against the laws of nature Angel of death ----------(smiles ) it seems like you underestimate me ade, the only power capable of destroying me Is from the throne of mercy, and I have not broken any rules yet, but except for Jesus the self proclaimed Messiah whom cheated me Ade-----------you said no power is capable of destroying you, then whom is Jesus Angel of death--------he remains a mystery to me but at the mention of his name, principalities of powers bow Angel of death was not a fool, he realizes that he has given ade a tool to fight him with so he walk up to ade and was about to wipe out his memory before the earth shakes and behold the glorious archangel Micheal appears 2 Likes |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 1:25pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
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Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 1:28pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
Ade never in his life felt what he feels now, behold he couldn't speak at the mighty presence of the glorious archangel Micheal, the great general of the mighty host of heaven, Archangel micheal----------(angrly points at death) how dare you try to manipulate a mortal Angel of death---------(fears) sir I just wanted to take away my words from his head, only that sir and nothing less Archangel Micheal ------------ (draws his immortality sword which is capable of destroying both the body and soul at once) your power could be easily taken away from you, Angel of death--------- but that is for father to decide, not you Archangel Micheal ------------yes of course, but for battling words with a mortal and trying to tamper with his brain, I think you shall be gracefully fit to to limp with a wound for a thousand year Angel of death ------(tries to escape) hell no Archangel Micheal rushes and stab the demon leg before he could disappear and he simply toss him aside like trash, then the angel gracfuly touches ade mom and sanctified her Ade mom--------(smiles) I feel so different and strong Archangel Micheal--------you are pure of heart dear, and father has decided that you are fit to come to heaven Ade-------------thanks sir for saving my mum Archangel Micheal -------(stares at ade) little one, it is quiet extraordinary for a mortal being like you to see me with your ordinary eyes, unless you are a nature being possessing both side. Ade------------they say I am an epic being of the great sango Archangel Micheal---------do you worship him Ade---------yes I do but are you a brother to him Archangel Micheal------ no, I am a humble servant from heaven Ade------(laughs) you are joking right, I mean if you are a servant then whom is your master Archangel Micheal ---------my master is the creator of all beings and powers, he is called by many names but he remains I am that I am Ade------------so is that where you are taking my mum to Archangel Micheal-----yes Ade------------i would like to meet with your master and talk to him, face to face Archangel Micheal------------- firstly, you have to die first and most importantly you have to be pure and holy, by following the wisdom of Jesus Christ which is the easiest way to above Ade mom------------but how come am I chosen to go there Archangel Micheal --------------i have inflicted pains in him whom should put you to rest so father asked me to bring you along with me after this Ade------------(happily cries) mummy it is quiet a blessing for you to finally have eternal life Time was far spent, words were exchanged more than words , and archangel Micheal opens the path to heaven, ade looks with his mortal eyes as he caught glimpse of a city in which it's city was as pure and sparkle like diamonds, he awes at its glory And he hears archangel Micheal final words before the portals closes Archangel Micheal -------------- clear your path, ade and prepare yourself for what shall it profit a man to gain the whole world and lose his soul 1 Like |
Re: Ade Son Of Thunder( A Tale About Love, Destiny And Betrayal) by johnfa466(m): 1:34pm On Sep 03, 2017 |
Ghost readers pls nd pls your comments are more appreciated, pls encourage me to continue |
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