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Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 11:01pm On Feb 18, 2007 |
Sometimes i wonder, why im so fond of you I've seen so many faces and met so many people But none quite like you Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen But definitely the most stunning Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard But definitely the most alluring Maybe its your smile which brightens me up Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby Wanting that voice to be near all the time Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me Making me come alive like the dawning of a new day I can't really tell I don't really understand But i can tell it happens when you come around And i want you to come some more There are a thousand and one reasons people give for the things they do But i just can't explain why i'm so fond of you |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by hotangel2(f): 11:16pm On Feb 18, 2007 |
This is just beautiful. I love it. Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen. That's my favorite part. I Love that part. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 2:55pm On Feb 19, 2007 |
thanks Hot-angel if feels good to know that a gurl actually appreciates that poem i have another one it's called "The Inner Man" check it out hope you like it |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by hola2ng(m): 4:59pm On Feb 19, 2007 |
Really captivating. Well done!! |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 7:28pm On Feb 19, 2007 |
Thanks man |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by thimbook2(m): 9:02am On Mar 12, 2007 |
/Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen But definitely the most stunning Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard But definitely the most alluring/ /Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard But definitely the most alluring Maybe its your smile which brightens me up/ Nice, really nice. captures the feel and texture of the fabric of love. and the "ordinary everyday" simplicity of tone makes it click home instantly, personally, reminds me of my cutie, a lovely piece really, keep it up bro! |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 10:01am On Mar 17, 2007 |
Thanks men |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Yusufadeto(m): 8:47pm On Mar 31, 2007 |
wow it so lovley, i really love it and it really something that happens, just felt like u talking about me |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Nobody: 8:54pm On Mar 31, 2007 |
Sean25: Fantastic poem! Can i borrow it for use when i propose? |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 8:55am On Apr 05, 2007 |
No Problem bro i'm sure lots of people have already borrowed it without my permission pls go ahead |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by RuuDie(m): 1:09pm On May 15, 2007 |
The simplicity of it is absolutely true, pure & enchantling stirring! smacks of an intense feeling from well within & the presentation is near perfection! |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by mekoyo(m): 2:39pm On May 15, 2007 |
This is really nice man. I like it. It's really really nice. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by dumi(f): 2:54pm On May 15, 2007 |
In fact that was amazing and fantastic.I really do appreciate you man for such poem that is so mind glowing and touching. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by monshege: 3:10pm On May 15, 2007 |
@ poster, this is a beautiful poem, but i could swear i have read the exact poem (with same words) somewhere online. you might wanna check if they have copyrighted your work. and sure enough, i read it from one of the numerous naija websites online. kudos! |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by worldismy(m): 3:13pm On May 15, 2007 |
guys do any one have any ideal to my request |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Okejazz(m): 3:44pm On May 15, 2007 |
I love poems like this, very romantic But I must confess On reading the 1st few lines i almost dismissed the credibility of its originality. Simply because it reminded me of Teddy Pendergrass's "You're my latest, my greatest inspiration" ( an oh so lovely piece) On further reading, i was quickly enraptured in a daydream right in my office with a beautiful Nigerian lady with an alluring ambience and a bodacious curve Talk of wishful wanting, till i spilled my coffee all over my desk Anyway, i love it , keep it up. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by teepy(f): 3:51pm On May 15, 2007 |
Awesome poem,very real.Do keep it on and hoping to read more of such. Very nice,kind of speaking my mind to my Fiance. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by yelum(f): 4:00pm On May 15, 2007 |
[quote][/quote]Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me[color=#770077][/color][i][/i] this part is so so true. love it. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by kemoade(f): 4:09pm On May 15, 2007 |
l love this so much it reminds of someone special. please keep it up. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by joey22(f): 4:23pm On May 15, 2007 |
nice poem |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by pmdaboh(f): 4:50pm On May 15, 2007 |
I loved your poem, for it was very beautiful. Keep writing, for we may be purchasing your book one day![b][/b] |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by 2dye4(m): 4:57pm On May 15, 2007 |
the poem is so cool, who or what inspired it? |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by laraba(f): 5:16pm On May 15, 2007 |
beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, where did you pull this out from? I love it. Do you have more poems you'd like to share? |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by temmyabby(f): 5:36pm On May 15, 2007 |
aawwww, so sweet, but the word should be deeper than fond |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 6:04pm On May 15, 2007 |
laraba:YES i do this is one of my favourites but my number one can be found on the LITERATURE/POETRY BOARD it's called "The Inner Man" its not romantic O but very very deep i hope you'll like it https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria?topic=41129.msg899949#msg899949 |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 6:13pm On May 15, 2007 |
2dye4: A girl i fell in love with in SS3 she did not know i told her after we graduted university and we both had a laugh she's getting married soon though |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by FactorChic(f): 6:45pm On May 15, 2007 |
awwwww, that was so sweet and u know, sometimes its good to tell some people how much you care about them, u'll realise how relieved u will be when u do so that poem was beautiful, too bad she's getting married NICE POEM! |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by olawa20(m): 6:48pm On May 15, 2007 |
Sean25: this is just beautiful. it immediately conjures the memory of a loved one. funny where inspiration originates from atimes |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by hotchic1(f): 7:14pm On May 15, 2007 |
Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen But definitely the most stunning Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard But definitely the most alluring Maybe its your smile which brightens me up Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby Wanting that voice to be near all the time Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me That was so sweet.That part was really lovely,your gurl must be really lucky that if you display those qualities.Kudos. |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Nobody: 9:18am On May 16, 2007 |
There’s something about u, Your beautiful, exotic features Your endearing smile, Your soft, honeyed tones, Your sweet, charming disposition, I just don’t know. . . But it makes me think about u. . . All the time an old one of mine. . . . |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by junegirl(f): 11:36am On May 16, 2007 |
@Sean25: Very very nice. But why did you wait until after university to tell her? Things might have turned out differently between you two. Maybe |
Re: Fond Thoughts (An Original Poem) by Sean25(m): 12:38pm On May 16, 2007 |
junegirl: Yeah i know but i was naiive, young and inexperienced Besides,sometimes you gotta let a good thing go to get a better thing You should see my girlfriend of today She gets all the poems and "MORE" |
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