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Where them critics at? by estrella(f): 10:41am On Apr 19, 2010 |
You're a rather quiet enemy that much I dare say, Once you were so dear to me but my feelings have gone the other way. You're a rather quiet enemy but you're all up in my space; I walk and you walk along with me stuck to me as i move from place to place. You're a rather quiet enemy but you were once a noisy pal; like twins we rode life all wild and free and you made me such a sexy gal! But now youre a sagging lump of flesh a smile turned upside down with two kids I should feel so blessed but all i feel like is a frigging clown. I hear the sounds of gleeful laughter ringing in my ear I hear the sound of gibberish voices spelling out my fears. You used to make me feel so good but that's all in the past I should be thankful,I should,I should but my gratitude is fickle and hardly lasts. Each night you climb with me into bed the lines, 'turn out the light' start in my head till it becomes a bellow of embarrasment that makes me startle But him,it hardly seems to rattle He climbs in with us and cooes quite nicely reaches down and caresses you reassuringly 'I love you Sarah,I love you' 'I love you and I love your tummy bulges too' You quiver,I sigh and fall into his embrace you're a rather quiet enemy but at least you don't bring me disgrace! |
Re: Where them critics at? by vescucci(m): 2:41am On Apr 20, 2010 |
Cosmetic surgery is a very loud friend. Nice projections. You portray feelings you don't really feel very well. Bravo |
Re: Where them critics at? by estrella(f): 10:40am On Apr 20, 2010 |
@vescucci, Lol, cosmetic surgery is indeed a loud pal! Thanks for the compliment.Coming from you,that means a lot! |
Re: Where them critics at? by 9japple(m): 12:45pm On Apr 27, 2010 |
hi folks lets start a poetry contest! the lines must rhyme and they must be original. ready? |
Re: Where them critics at? by vescucci(m): 1:49pm On Apr 29, 2010 |
Go open your own thread then |
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