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Roller-coaster by johnglefury(m): 9:34am On May 08, 2018 |
FEELINGS There are times when I am As lively as the alarm tone, Like the morning sun glistering Through with thick thorns passing Through every tavern that stands In it's way. Trodding forward One stride at a time like a little Child taking baby steps. Until I fall With a heap into the sea, Unsure, and sadness pressed Down upon me, Threatening To crush me With it's unbearable weight, Squeezing out all of the little light That was left. Then the clouds came, Dark and deepening and heavy with purpose, Anger building up from within Like a balloon being pumped with air And then... It burst out of it's cage Releasing with it torrential pains, And sorrows and regrets. Taking it's time before subsiding. Oh! What ecstasy! Then the rainbows appear Out of the blues, each colour Completing a spectrum as the Sky brightens, itching For the cycle to begin all over. It's a rollercoaster. . (c) John Jodah Adah 08/05/2018, 9:20 AM
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Re: Roller-coaster by johnglefury(m): 9:38am On May 08, 2018 |
I'm a newbie.
Just 2 months writing.
Aggressive but constructive criticisms are welcomed. 1 Like |
Re: Roller-coaster by johnglefury(m): 9:42am On May 08, 2018 |
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Re: Roller-coaster by Sarang(f): 6:43am On May 18, 2018 |
I know that feeling.. nice one long John ![]() 1 Like |
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