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this is solid , but there is a room for improvement ... but like all nairaland stories they don't end

bizza45:
this is solid , but there is a room for improvement ... but like all nairaland stories they don't end

I actually had to cuz no one seems to be following. it's pointless.

BiadeFolar:

I actually had to cuz no one seems to be following. it's pointless.

Then you don't give up

I just stumbled on this story, and i'v been impressed with it so far. Please continue it

BiadeFolar:

I actually had to cuz no one seems to be following. it's pointless.

pls don't stop ... or rather can u send it to my mail...I will b so glad ... I really want u to complete this story

This story has interesting perks in it and should be continued.

bizza45:



pls don't stop ... or rather can u send it to my mail...I will b so glad ... I really want u to complete this story

your e-mail address?

Obisteve42:
This story has interesting perks in it and should be continued.

I guess I'll continue then. expect update on Friday, tomorrow

BiadeFolar:

your e-mail address?

bizza2005@gmail.com

Kudos to the writer, your pencilmanship is one of a kind

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Welcome back, your story has never been dry and you sure have a lot of followers. I have been a silent follower but had to comment this time. This update has set the right tone of more exciting drama to come. Continue writing bro, you have wet my appetite one again. You write very well, well structured, good command of English and you keep your audience engaged. Kudos.

Biadefolar, welcome back. More of this and in no time the crowd you anticipate will come running.

drewbar:
Welcome back, your story has never been dry and you sure have a lot of followers. I have been a silent follower but had to comment this time. This update has set the right tone of more exciting drama to come. Continue writing bro, you have wet my appetite one again. You write very well, well structured, good command of English and you keep your audience engaged. Kudos.

Thanks senior, I needed that

genius43:
Biadefolar, welcome back. More of this and in no time the crowd you anticipate will come running.

Aiit then, I am not stopping until the story ends. I promise

When you stopped updating, I was pained but concluded it was one of the numerous abandoned stories on Nairaland.The only way to grow your followers is to keep updating.
I will have to say, this story is one of the few well structured stories on Nairaland and one doesn't have to deal with poor illustrations, confusing storyline and frequent typographical errors usually seen in literature threads. Keep up the good work.

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Nice one

Nice one. Lessons learnt

I hope he learns his lesson

Thanks for the update

Curious to find out how you were able to escape this. The NPF can act efficiently when it suits them ooh

Nice. Ride on.

Thank you

Yemluvkid:
Nice one

let's see if Hakeem learns tho

Obisteve42:
Nice one. Lessons learnt

I honestly hope so too

genius43:
I hope he learns his lesson

I am as curious you are. let's wait and see

drewbar:
Curious to find out how you were able to escape this. The NPF can act efficiently when it suits them ooh

yeah bruh, I am on it. New update in a bit

Hamid7:
Nice. Ride on.

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nice

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