After been insulted by some people I decided to create some kind of new logos...if I still need to improve pls tell me my mistakes..cause I need to learn more

Op don't take comments you received here as insults please, they're just constructive criticisms.
It wouldn't look well if your works aren't up to standard and everyone told you they are. you won't improve that way.


You're making progress, be persistent you'll be just fine.
First thing you need to do is to understand what logo is all about, it's more than just putting objects and texts together on whatever softwares you're good at.