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The Man Below: A Poem by Aloofaa(m): 7:45pm On May 16, 2007 |
The Man Below I remember that day When you aborted my sleep with your philtred scent First to wake was the man below whose startling alertness could cause riotous ripples in a sea of bathing maids The man above, beholding the lofty swaying hips, the sensuous lips, dashed after you like a beast at a flirting prey these restless fingers are now bored of cupping those frontal lobes I'm even sick of those lusty lips When will you shuck off your iron pants ? |
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by jesusfreak(f): 5:56pm On May 17, 2007 |
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by RuuDie(m): 10:57am On May 22, 2007 |
i know a whole lot of people don't yet dig what your poem is all about that's why it ain't been getting so much reviews. but its so, so OUTRAGEOUS --- really dig your flow man; your imagination is top-notch & i particularly love this -- "philtred" -- great ingenuity, modify words 2 suit your needs! boy, was that ending shrouded in some funny mystery! doff my hat for u man --- really do! |
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by SMC(f): 6:27pm On May 22, 2007 |
RuuDie: I'm sure almost everyone (if not even all) who read this poem understood it. It doesn't take a genius as the message is quite clear. Maybe they have not commented because it isn't their cup of tea. |
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by iice(f): 2:51pm On May 23, 2007 |
SMC: Shebi oooo @Poem erhhh cool |
Re: The Man Below: A Poem by denex: 11:32pm On May 29, 2007 |
I think you're really fly man. Meanwhile, keep the man below in control. |
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