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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by kalajina(m): 6:41pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
maria would die, Rhoda would live and peter would marry her |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by cassbeat(m): 7:13pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
I feel Peter didn't put the diamond in the backpack.... |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by francium001: 8:36pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
Thanks |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Ann2012(f): 8:57pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
Maybe Yinka too the diamond or Peter gave it to him..... Maria must not die ooooo Thanks for the update |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Kaycee9242(m): 8:59pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
I said it dt Maria is still alive, at least am a bit relieved for now. Peter too smart abeg, where could d diamond be? Larry thanks so much |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by EkopSparoAyara(m): 11:14pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
I had lost all hopes, I thought Maria was gone, how she survived that is still a miracle.. Peter Black, always one step ahead of everyone, he knows how to play his cards well.. Officer John Balewa, I just don't know what to say about you anymore, your mother has said it, you're emotionless, blinded by myopic and self centered ideology.. Nonsense and Ingredients.. BRAVO LARRYSUN.. |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 11:42pm On Aug 16, 2020 |
I wish Larry would just post all the remaining chapters at once. This suspense is nerve-racking. 2 Likes |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by okeyben10: 7:17am On Aug 18, 2020 |
I've hated basky for a while now. And all LarrySun has done about that passion is fuel it some more wt ds last chapter. Peters child can die so maria should live and marry a better man. His own son should not die for something that was partly Rhodas fault. Afterall he can always marry another woman. I don't understand how basky dey rationalise o? It seems he wants maria for himself that would be d perfect revenge. Cold cold bastard 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by OPC90(m): 5:17pm On Aug 18, 2020 |
When you think that the story is ending, that's when it is beginning. Looking forward for more episodes. Thanks dear |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by jadeliyi(m): 9:39am On Aug 21, 2020 |
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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Creeza(m): 1:43pm On Aug 21, 2020 |
Maria may not survive this one. It's very difficult to survive a gun shot bullet to the neck. Lucky she didn't get hit in the aorta, that would have been instant death. But the windpipe, very rare and still deadly. |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 2:28pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 3:02pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
[quote author=LarrySun post=93135517][/quote] Larry, your pronouns in relation to Rhoda's child is a tad confusing. Towards the end, Rhoda referred to her child as a "she", while John's mom referred to the same child as a "he". Pls, clarify if Rhoda's child is a boy or a girl. |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 3:11pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
dejavuh0007:Ohhhhhh! I'm so sorry about that. It's a he. They're both boys. |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Ann2012(f): 3:17pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Thanks for the update I just pray Blacky’s son doesn’t suffer |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Nmezor(f): 3:51pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Thanks for the lovely update n more Ink to your pen |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by doctorbrainy(f): 6:05pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
You are doing a good man. Keep it up |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by jadeliyi(m): 9:29pm On Aug 23, 2020 |
Thanks man for update |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by dejavuh0007(m): 9:59am On Aug 24, 2020 |
LarrySun:Good. You've been doing a good job so far. |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by OPC90(m): 4:06pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
It's well... Basket is now a proud father of two |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Kaycee9242(m): 8:22pm On Aug 24, 2020 |
Nice one Larry |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by kalajina(m): 10:32am On Aug 26, 2020 |
so emotional but I wish their plan don't work out. yinka and bros could appear in the scene, they should take the baby. peter would escape as usually . Pls oga Larry put them in the pics . thank youu 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 11:57am On Aug 26, 2020 |
kalajina:Who is 'bros'? |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by IgweBUIKE1(m): 8:27am On Aug 28, 2020 |
Oga larrysun I cried when Maria was wheeled in...you re good bro and thanks for the amendment |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Creeza(m): 3:24am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Damn. Basky ends up raising an alpha's offspring. WOMEN AND the SISTERHOOD!!! Basket would have stayed a while longer but what did he do? He allowed his anger get to him and NOPED the f out of there. Larry sir, a quick one: you used 'in' twice instead of 'on' as prepositions. maybe a little bit of mistake but I felt urged to tell you like here '...they watched her play tennis (English is crazy if you ask me :/ but we learn everyday dont we?) EDIT: thats btw though and tbh you are a wonderful storyteller |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 4:20am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Creeza:Can you kindly cite out the part? Thanks. 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Creeza(m): 4:58am On Aug 29, 2020 |
LarrySun:1. As much as he wanted to return to the station and grab Peter in the neck. 2. They knew Maria was a girl who gave women hope; they had watched her tennis match in the televison. *this one is a bit like saying they entered the tv set but since we see movies most times on a screen even at a cinema its a bit off) My little observation though, and i welcome a good criticism everytime, on that note i say all the best sir. 1 Like |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 5:29am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Creeza:Thanks. The first should be by, not in or on. You're right with the second. Thanks again. I'm usually too lazy to reread what I've written. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by Creeza(m): 5:40am On Aug 29, 2020 |
Yeah. by the neck echoes better. thanks for the correction too. Still i follow ![]() |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by LarrySun(m): 4:56pm On Aug 30, 2020 |
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Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by jadeliyi(m): 5:09pm On Aug 30, 2020 |
I don't really know the direction of this but you are wonderful I would say |
Re: Black Maria: Legends A Story By LarrySun by pelvicky(m): 5:16pm On Aug 30, 2020 |
Weldone Larry |
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