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Check Out This Beautiful Poem by deezoneclu: 2:58pm On Dec 01, 2010 |
Poetry is beautiful. It is divine and natural. The splendor of poetry is greatly appreciated by Wordpress as this: "coding is poetry". I love to write poems. This poem carefully depicts a pregnant woman who suddenly feels her stomach turn and cries for help. Luckily, her husband comes to her rescue. On getting to the hospital, the doctors and nurses (green and white masquerades) asks her to push. Eventually, the boy comes out crying. Even though I am not a lady, I do feel for pregnant women who go through the pain of delivery. Obviously, this poem is dedicated to them. Here it goes: Swiftly it came like a thief in the night Legs seized – heavy burden to carry Stomach turned – new boy cannot tarry Sweats slide hurriedly on the body; pain flows through the soul Expression was lost, only one word remained- Help! Gathering all strength she yelled out Grabbing the knob and constantly refusing to be overcome by this terror of Eve In a moment that seemed like eternity Alas! Unbearable eternity Honey rushed in to assist; hauling her to the metallic machine And receiving the unwelcome rewards of wails and howls Suddenly, green and white masquerades walled her "Push!" to the pain-bearer they say This poem is a sonnet (14 lines) and I wish you enjoyed it. Please feel free to tell me what you feel about my poem. To read similar articles, please visit my website www.davexpression |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by yachtsman: 1:40pm On Dec 12, 2010 |
this poem's really nice.keep up the good work coz the victory is ours so never rest on your oars, check dis out it can be painful even though meaningful it can be something even though it seems like longthing a grown woman nagging, wailing a mature man panting, crying nurses, hurrying, mumbling |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by lindalee(f): 2:54pm On Dec 12, 2010 |
@deez your poem's great its really imaginary and the rhyme scheme is okay. everything is just perfect. keep up the good work. @yatchs, those didn't really look like a poem to me, i feel they were more of rhymes without any particular message. hope u don't mind me criticizing your work. |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by snthesis(m): 10:42pm On Dec 12, 2010 |
@deez Niice @yatch Cool- incomplete, but then good poetry shud leave d reader guessin |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by lokya(f): 5:14pm On Dec 16, 2010 |
really lovely |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by porasog(f): 7:04pm On Dec 16, 2010 |
Grabbing the knob and constantly refusing to be overcome by this terror of Eve lovely line Suddenly, green and white masquerades walled her OMG really hilarious @poster, I love ur piece but its not complete. They joy of motherhood is not expressed. |
Re: Check Out This Beautiful Poem by deezoneclu: 7:36pm On Dec 16, 2010 |
Thanks sooooooooo much guys. I really appreciate your posts. I am really glad you read it. I am a guy and its not easy at all when one considers the kind of pain mothers go through. I pray they will be able to eat the fruits of their labour. Its true that its not complete and i will finish it anytime from now. I am a law student in unilorin and you can visit my blog at www [dot] davexpression[dot] co [dot] cc Take care guys |
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