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Purest Living Thing by Nobody: 1:27am On Dec 24, 2010 |
i see the image appear like the rising of the sun i marvell the creature like the twinkling star she glow the moon kisses me on the street behind her shadow i walk thinking how to put this in divine my heart beat by her speaking what is it behind the siege her speaking is eloquent my smile ceased as our eyes meet our voices lay quiet,silent,waiting into her eye i look can i come with you in a crying voice i speak take me to the street where mankind eye divide let me embrace you like a newly forge gold let me lead you through the freezing snow to the crystal springs where i have found the purest living thing**** you will be the pioneer of the land where the sun never set and the road never end. |
Re: Purest Living Thing by Zeta(m): 1:41am On Dec 29, 2010 |
I am not fit to be a good critic of peotry, but I thought it was very nice. Vey nice. As I read the poem, I actually visualized the moon coming down to the poet, but the image disappeared as I read on. Poems are great. I like the way there is no mathematical formula that one can follow to write a poem(if there is it should be burned, or sent off to outer space). lol. One only has to know what the purpose of the poem is, and to let the feelings in the heart of the poet form the words. At least that's the way I write. I write little poems mostly to spice up my short stories. Do you write short stories? If you do how do I make my characters come alive. There are some novels I read, that I get so engrossed in the story that i actually think the characters are real people. That's the kind of effect I want to cause in the readers of my short-stories, screenplays, or hopefully novels. |
Re: Purest Living Thing by enix2dmix: 12:08am On Feb 09, 2011 |
great poem u gat dere, |
Re: Purest Living Thing by Orikinla(m): 6:13pm On Feb 09, 2011 |
Good choice of words to illustrate your subject. I liked it. |
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