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| I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by Midolan: 3:33pm On May 04, 2020 |
So, I wrote this song yesterday and it's clearly a work in progress. I hope you enjoy it and it sounds like stuff you'd probably want to hear on the radio or enjoy. I'd really appreciate your feedbacks in the comment section. Thank you �! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iq_asaRQplo Lyrics Don't you think that you deserve the truth Though it stares you right in the face Your heart's hid beneath all the sheets that you Pulled over your face when you stopped to try I walked on egg shells Shone through the dark Oh, I bled to death for you I rose, I came to You with the goody bag All that you'll ever need... 2 Likes |
| Re: I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by Nobody: 5:45pm On May 04, 2020 |
Nice song bro ..but it's too  Oyinboish...try to come down to naija level if u wan blow ..u Sabi sing..just try to infuse some naija phrases or local dialects into your next song..1 Like |
| Re: I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by Midolan: 9:52pm On May 04, 2020 |
Heistman: Ok sir. Thanks for your input.�♂️ |
| Re: I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by IamMichael(m): 7:37am On May 05, 2020 |
Nice one bro... Keep it up, and modify only when necessary. By the time you record, mix and master the song, you will have a treasure in your hands. |
| Re: I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by Joemetry(m): 2:26pm On May 05, 2020 |
Midolan: Nice one bro, although genres like this don't get real recognition if you put in power, you might just be getting your low key pay like Johnny Drille, Ric Hassan, etc. But if you can tweak your sound to be more Afro it would help you a lot. Afro Pop or RB has potential in the market. Don't underestimate Afrobeat, many African Artists are richer than their western counterparts. |
| Re: I Need You To Critique A Song I'm Writing. It's A Work In Progress... by sharpwriter(m): 5:23pm On May 05, 2020 |
Midolan: Awesome .... but don't ignore the first advice ...Africa can never be removed from our blood. Keep up the good voice. |
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