rite where? am the only one here doh!

I prefer to donate the lyrics from one of my love songs to you to comfort your sweetheart.

If you want to record it in a studio and make the CD, just do so to let her treasure it.

I see the glints in your beautiful brown eyes
I see your charming smiles and dimples
I feel your throbbing heart
As you lie on my chest
We are entwined in our arms
As we are enraptured in our erotic charms
I have never felt like this before
And I am feeling you more and more
Loving you is so exciting
Deep inside you is so thrilling
This is a moment I will always remember
How I wish this moment will last forever
What an extraordinary love

we lesbians have such an easy life,
whew!!!

shame on you all
give a brother a song to put his name on
he's broken hearted and spoke about it
here's some glue pls someone help patch it
don't use this medium to show your lyrical prowess
though i admit some of u sound like tetuilla in his truest
but pls show some love to this dawg
b4 he goes to town buys himself a gun
who knows he just might have ur adress
i guess its safer to put his heart at rest

@ benb

Is that your song? good job but horrible choice.

whats going on in here? felia,benb,gaylordess and orikinla?

gaylordess:

we lesbians have such an easy life,
whew!!!

what the hell is going on here?

what happened to our song na

Gbade i hope you are not at Iya lasisi's place

Po deep . where you dey o

they have left the thread for but i kinda like orikinla's effort

lol . . .

Hey I ain't left yet, don't trip.
HOW FAR?!

Ok, gbade back in this,
had to take a break from iya lasisi's,
took a pound o' yam,
plus some groupie l.u.v worth a million kilograms,
them wackos stepped back n took heed,
couldn't get they mack on my one and only muki,
watching as your curly hair flies past,
gotta keep that body in high class,
signing out, like cloth stains gbade on spot,
keepin' the ink bleedin'//lyrics steamin to avoid writer's block

@ gbade

I am not the gf.

@ Odada

I thank too we are not together!

@michelin
I thank too TOO that we are not together

and where the hell have u been? @gbade

aiight po deep and muki its time to finish this song and play it out for my sweetheart

@ Gbade that was tight


@ Po deep drop some na

@ Odada i have heard

Steady tryna get back in ya arms/
This is hardcore gone soft, its like I'm rappin' a psalm/.
U ain't know how it feels to be like this/
b4 I get off, I betta blow u a goodnite kiss/
but u know this is 50% ur fault, u pushed me to act up/
but now that's all part of d past, u need to come back, luv/.
Damn, I'm tired. Been workin' all day. See y'all l8r.

@ Po nice nice

rest well o

be original, make it personal

To: Odada

Tell me why should I back to your arm again/
Don't you understand why I suffer waiting for phone ringing everyday/
Nothing happen passing too long overdue, no communication/
My love for you just dying just like dying flower no water/
Flower buds fell down on the table/
The leaves turns wrinkled dried leaves/


Tell me why should I back to your arm again/
Don't you understand why I suffer waiting for phone ringing everyday/
Nothing happen passing too long overdue, no communication/
My love for you just dying just like dry desert no rain/
Grab the sand blowing dust in the air/
I feel so empty inside of me/
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Tell me why should I back to your arm again/
Don't you understand why I suffer waiting for phone ringing everyday/
Nothing happen passing too long overdue, no communication/
My love for you just dying just like calm sea no wave/
Feel no wind blowing right at my face/
My tears drop feeling sad.


Tell me why should I back to your arm again/
Don't you understand why I suffer waiting for phone ringing everyday/
Nothing happen passing too long overdue, no communication/
But you chose to hang out all your favorite paroles with your boys/
Never let me know in advance where you are/
No time to talk with me, feel me left out.

**Communication is a must for me under deaf culture with communication
technology tools you don't understand. Not the same as hearing culture, and Nigeria culture.
**

*the thrashy has spoken,,,mieehhn* I guess that sums it up guys sadly we all failed in our quest to 'WRITE ME A SONG' cause what I didnt envisage was the best song of all which i was looking for was actually going to come from who the person this thread is directed too ,now you all know the story!its been a wonderful experience with y'all and as i bow out i would like to thank you all for your contributions in this thread,for all the effortless-effort to get my baby back but its obvious my baby's gone many thanks to;Muki,po deep,gbade,omo',michelin and everyone that contributed to make this thing actually work!Now i gotta go post some more shit in "Songs That Make Me Cry"cause the one up there brought me to tears

@uspry1
I guess its too late to saw am saawwry?!

U'VE GOT TO BE FUCKING KIDDING ME, MAN!!!!!!!!!
All those rhymes for nuthin'??

Uspry1 give him a second chane na

we all make mistakes

Po Deep:

You'VE GOT TO BE FUCKING KIDDING ME, MAN!!!!!!!!!
All those rhymes for nuthin'??

not really mate,ur rhymes rock and i still consider doing something about it!

@muki
so good to be your friend

Odada no case jare

Po deep and Gbade we can still carry go with the song na

ours is tha bomb

carry go----------------------- ;d ;d ;d

We felt wat yall said
Now Close the thread
Git a time out and go to bed
He still didnt git his girl back wit ur tite rhymes
OD U Git sum n lose sumtimes
Dnt reminisce n git sick
Dere still lotsa B!tches who nid dat d!#k
Life's a learnin field were u gotta learn more
Jst Do ur thang and dnt mess up like b4
Mistakes are meant 2 mk u grow better
so da next time u rep do it like a go-getter

I aint here 2 show rhymes
Jst givin u words dats worth ur time

hmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn *stunned* @drered

Po Deep:

You'VE GOT TO BE FUCKING KIDDING ME, MAN!!!!!!!!!
All those rhymes for nuthin'??

@Po Deep, your rhymes is the bomb as what Muki says!

Don't stop, keep going hearing some more rhymes!!! Write up just like "The Most Beautiful Girl in the World" by Somze.

Odada and I are staying friend.

what! @ drered

Ok

Ok

you heard that po' she says we are friends so you can keep on posting all those phat rhymes of yours---cause after all it wasnt all in VAIN didnt get my gal back!but i got someone something better in return?and me and uspry1 remain friends sometimes you can eat your cake and really have it?!

Yea but d song's over, gotta switch lanes n' take my rhymes elsewhere.
One.
Shalom.