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Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 5:44pm On Jun 02, 2020 |
Winter whelming breeze postboxes covered in white flowing rivers freezed #folorunsho_Iyanuoluwa |
Re: Snow [haiku] by joseph1832(m): 10:23pm On Jun 02, 2020 |
Aiyamrex:how is this a haiku? |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 6:48am On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832: i posted this same poem in allpoetry some minutes before i did here without the inscription 'HAIKU' Kevin himself and 5 others made a comment using the word haiku. . . same applicable when i posted it in FFP forums, Davidf and 2 others used the word haiku to compliment the poem. so to your question. . . its an haiku because it follows the mora of 5-7-5 phrases. howbeit, nt all haikus follows the 5,7,5 procedure, nt all. . . So can u tell me why its nt an haiku please? |
Re: Snow [haiku] by joseph1832(m): 8:20am On Jun 03, 2020 |
Aiyamrex:obviously from what you've just said, the people who told you it's a Haiku know little or nothing of what a haiku poem is. Before I tell you why it's not a haiku, can you please show me the 5,7,5 syllable structure in your supposed haiku? Thank you. |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 9:06am On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832: thank u sir you said kevin who lectures people on poetry knows little or nothing about haiku. . . I concur, it may be true. but u got all wrong when u called a 'mora' syllable |
Re: Snow [haiku] by joseph1832(m): 9:09am On Jun 03, 2020 |
Aiyamrex:guy. You did not write a haiku. End of story. http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html Read and learn and know your Kevin or whatever his name is knows jack sh1t about haiku. |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 9:19am On Jun 03, 2020 |
Thanks for the critism,
lets check out what your shadowpoetry stores in its containers. . . :p |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 10:12am On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832: dear teacher, after surveying your shadowpoetry. . . I have the courage my poem "winter breeze postboxes covered in white rivers freezed" is a haiku. . . if you do nt concur, tell me why its nt then i will tell you why it is from the article on the website you gave. . . i urge you to go learn more about haiku sir, those articles ain't enough for you sir |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 10:17am On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832: from the example given from the link u shared "Winter sun a cyclist pedals against the wind" show me the 5-7-5 syllable structure. . . then i'll continue why my poem is a haiku |
Re: Snow [haiku] by joseph1832(m): 10:20am On Jun 03, 2020 |
Aiyamrex:go and sit down. You obviously don't know anything and you can't even comprehend simple things. |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 12:54pm On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832:dear sir, don't give savage replies 'cus a typical human who probably is not thinking from their belly down deep below will understand my question |
Re: Snow [haiku] by Aiyamrex(m): 1:01pm On Jun 03, 2020 |
joseph1832:dubiously correcting what you obviously know zero about. . . if you are not afraid of your obvious failure and won't wait to sink in your stupor of ITK then answer where the progression of 5,7,5 syllables is used in your example (winter sun a cyclist pedals against the winds) if you have another point from this syllable thing, say it. . . But i bet your failure is strangling you now |
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