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Mirage by denex: 11:08pm On Jul 10, 2007 |
Pretty wide-eyed little thing yet a canker deep within sugar coated killer bee, thy guile reveals too true to me. I greet ye out consuming dream my loving friend thou art indeed. Ye done crafted me the perfect sting I call thee out with a plotted script. Lips glossed in choicest honey, yet therein lay thy poison kiss. And thy bosom calls to wanton sleep, but wisdom beckons and I leave. With smiles we meet, in tears of bliss yet not one gesture either means Thy hug is napalm to my skin gift of ashes wrapped in silk. Ye chose me wrong thy next victim calamity clothe in heavenly mink the look on you, O so naive yet my very soul do ye solicit. NEX. |
Re: Mirage by iice(f): 12:00pm On Jul 12, 2007 |
Cool |
Re: Mirage by denex: 2:59pm On Jul 12, 2007 |
gee thanks. Most people find it offensive. My ex girl friend said I was referring to her, and I can't deny that I wasn't. |
Re: Mirage by iice(f): 5:07pm On Jul 12, 2007 |
Yeah well my taste doesnt usually run to the cookie cut/candy wrapped types. . .i like it |
Re: Mirage by RuuDie(m): 2:32pm On Jul 13, 2007 |
Beautifullly crafted . . . i just love the blend of ancient, pre-historic civility and pure neo-anglo vocab. gives your poem a generous tinge of "exoticism"! Denex, I DOFF MY HAT . . . you be tha MAN |
Re: Mirage by denex: 11:18am On Jul 16, 2007 |
Okay, thanks you guys. I really haven't written anything spectacular in the past 2 years. I'll drop some other stuff I've got. |
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