. Her name is Becky Vincent and she is 17. She just loves writing and today she sent this to me as her first work in poetry. Unfortunately, I hardly know anything in that field hence I decided to bring it here for the experts in the house to dissect and give their honest advice.
Mods please do the needful to assist this young girl get the true appraisal she needs.



"The fire and the Archer once tame... Scorned by the world and scorched by hell's flame
Consumed by anger and destroyed by blame
Open your eyes young one and see what you'll become if you let the yourself be consumed by the fury of pain"
-Becky Vincent -