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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 10:28am On Jan 19, 2023
iamL:
I have never liked Rhoda since she betrayed Basket, I want her to loose on both ends.





Me too, But if you had been following the Story from the Start, you will understand, Rhoda Betrayed Peter, will Basket was the first to Stab pater, by going all out after Rhoda,

Peter had to let it go for the Good of their Friendship, That's why he can't reject Rhoda seduction to sleep with him then,

Buh I do know of now, Maria may even had knew of their history through Pater, Hence Entrus8the safety of her Son on Rhoda's care
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by iamL(f): 12:37pm On Jan 19, 2023
do4luv14:






Me too, But if you had been following the Story from the Start, you will understand, Rhoda Betrayed Peter, will Basket was the first to Stab pater, by going all out after Rhoda,

Peter had to let it go for the Good of their Friendship, That's why he can't reject Rhoda seduction to sleep with him then,

Buh I do know of now, Maria may even had knew of their history through Pater, Hence Entrus8the safety of her Son on Rhoda's care

People should stay faithful to their spouses under any circumstances.
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by do4luv14(m): 4:22pm On Jan 19, 2023
iamL:


People should stay faithful to their spouses under any circumstances.


That's the thing, It was supposed to be Pater,
big Basket put his hand in it, And Peter seeing that it makes him more happy, Decide to give up, for his friend happiness,

Thing is the damage had been done already, And Rhoda, as much told Peter, he was the one he wanted, So it's no Surprise the fire is still there
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Nmezor(f): 12:26pm On Jan 20, 2023
Thanks for the update oga Larry.
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by iamL(f): 12:30pm On Jan 20, 2023
do4luv14:



That's the thing, It was supposed to be Pater,
big Basket put his hand in it, And Peter seeing that it makes him more happy, Decide to give up, for his friend happiness,

Thing is the damage had been done already, And Rhoda, as much told Peter, he was the one he wanted, So it's no Surprise the fire is still there

That's why she should leave peter alone .it was with her full consent she cheated with basket betraying peter.

So whatever comes out of their betrayals is their problem. People should take responsibility their actions.
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by TAYO124: 4:08pm On Jan 21, 2023
iamL:


People should stay faithful to their spouses under any circumstances.

Really and end up like Osinachi go ON without your Brain.
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(m): 7:43am On Jan 22, 2023
Post removed.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Ann2012(f): 9:43am On Jan 22, 2023
Thanks for the update boss
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Potterone(m): 10:23am On Jan 22, 2023
Women are always true to their feelings nothing concern them with who e go hurt. Long as they got what they want anything can burn for all they care.
Vulcanheph:
This is an interesting update...

Anyone wondering why Rhoda is still looking for a means to get back with Blackie or why she's still not over Peter despite being married to Basket for over 10 years has not understood women.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Nmezor(f): 11:31am On Jan 22, 2023
Thanks for the update oga Larry

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 1:51pm On Jan 22, 2023
iamL:


That's why she should leave peter alone .it was with her full consent she cheated with basket betraying peter.

So whatever comes out of their betrayals is their problem. People should take responsibility their actions.

I am sorry to say you are wrong, she didn't cheat on Black, Rhoda and Peter first met after the pharmacy incident when she helped Peter after Peter was beaten and later on helped in nursing Basket back to health after then they were separated for a long time because Rhoda left PortHarcourt to stay with her mother in Lagos.

It was when Black and Basket started schooling that Basket met Rhoda(which was not the name Black knew her with) who he was always telling Black about until Basket invited her to their rented apartment and Peter seeing that the relationship is making his friend happy and decided to let go but Rhoda don't want to let it slide and have been trying to have Peter all to herself which led Peter to the incident that broke the beautiful friendship

So Peter was not betrayed by anyone at the beginning, it was just coincidence that Basket met her first the second time, remember OJB didn't get to see her before she left for Lagos because he was sick and unconscious for days from the beating he got from a fight

I don't know if I narrated it well, someone should correct me if I am wrong to avoid unnecessary misleading, but that's the best I can remember

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 2:08pm On Jan 22, 2023
[quote author=LarrySun post=120274672][/quote] thanks for the update Boss
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by sulorog(m): 3:16pm On Jan 22, 2023
Thanks again for the update
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 8:44pm On Jan 22, 2023
francium001:


I am sorry to say you are wrong, she didn't cheat on Black, Rhoda and Peter first met after the pharmacy incident when she helped Peter after Peter was beaten and later on helped in nursing Basket back to health after then they were separated for a long time because Rhoda left PortHarcourt to stay with her mother in Lagos.

It was when Black and Basket started schooling that Basket met Rhoda(which was not the name Black knew her with) who he was always telling Black about until Basket invited her to their rented apartment and Peter seeing that the relationship is making his friend happy and decided to let go but Rhoda don't want to let it slide and have been trying to have Peter all to herself which led Peter to the incident that broke the beautiful friendship

So Peter was not betrayed by anyone at the beginning, it was just coincidence that Basket met her first the second time, remember OJB didn't get to see her before she left for Lagos because he was sick and unconscious for days from the beating he got from a fight

I don't know if I narrated it well, someone should correct me if I am wrong to avoid unnecessary misleading, but that's the best I can remember


You got it right, you even tried to still remember the story clearly like this. Me dun forget oooo

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 8:45pm On Jan 22, 2023
Larry you too much
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(m): 9:04pm On Jan 22, 2023
francium001:


I am sorry to say you are wrong, she didn't cheat on Black, Rhoda and Peter first met after the pharmacy incident when she helped Peter after Peter was beaten and later on helped in nursing Basket back to health after then they were separated for a long time because Rhoda left PortHarcourt to stay with her mother in Lagos.

It was when Black and Basket started schooling that Basket met Rhoda(which was not the name Black knew her with) who he was always telling Black about until Basket invited her to their rented apartment and Peter seeing that the relationship is making his friend happy and decided to let go but Rhoda don't want to let it slide and have been trying to have Peter all to herself which led Peter to the incident that broke the beautiful friendship

So Peter was not betrayed by anyone at the beginning, it was just coincidence that Basket met her first the second time, remember OJB didn't get to see her before she left for Lagos because he was sick and unconscious for days from the beating he got from a fight

I don't know if I narrated it well, someone should correct me if I am wrong to avoid unnecessary misleading, but that's the best I can remember
Contact me. I'll send you the next 10 updates for free. Only you.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Vulcanheph(m): 3:58pm On Jan 23, 2023
Potterone:
Women are always true to their feelings nothing concern them with who e go hurt. Long as they got what they want anything can burn for all they care.
I swear... What you said is true.

Ever since I started learning about The Redpill , nothing about the female gender surprises me anymore.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 5:17pm On Jan 23, 2023
Thanks Boss, I will do that right away, the offer is too enticing to begin acting modest

LarrySun =120298900:
Contact me. I'll send you the next 10 updates for free. Only you.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 5:31pm On Jan 23, 2023
SING THAT RAP FALL. BUY A CHINA BEECH



This is it

Larrysun

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Damilgodwin(m): 6:15pm On Jan 23, 2023
This is beautiful, but tbh ehn love no be anybody mate oo
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by monalicious(f): 11:41am On Jan 25, 2023
francium001:
Thanks Boss, I will do that right away, the offer is too enticing to begin acting modest


You have proven yourself to be a true fan. I can only imagine how proud larrysun would have felt
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by iamL(f): 4:19pm On Jan 25, 2023
TAYO124:


Really and end up like Osinachi go ON without your Brain.

The concept we are discussing here is infedility between couples not domestic abuse and what have you.

Try dey get sense before you reply person.
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by iamL(f): 7:06pm On Jan 25, 2023
francium001:


I am sorry to say you are wrong, she didn't cheat on Black, Rhoda and Peter first met after the pharmacy incident when she helped Peter after Peter was beaten and later on helped in nursing Basket back to health after then they were separated for a long time because Rhoda left PortHarcourt to stay with her mother in Lagos.

It was when Black and Basket started schooling that Basket met Rhoda(which was not the name Black knew her with) who he was always telling Black about until Basket invited her to their rented apartment and Peter seeing that the relationship is making his friend happy and decided to let go but Rhoda don't want to let it slide and have been trying to have Peter all to herself which led Peter to the incident that broke the beautiful friendship

So Peter was not betrayed by anyone at the beginning, it was just coincidence that Basket met her first the second time, remember OJB didn't get to see her before she left for Lagos because he was sick and unconscious for days from the beating he got from a fight

I don't know if I narrated it well, someone should correct me if I am wrong to avoid unnecessary misleading, but that's the best I can remember

Rohda two-time? Yes or No.

She slept with Peter while she was in a relationship with basket? Yes or No.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by francium001: 2:07pm On Jan 26, 2023
iamL:


Rohda two-time? Yes or No.

She slept with Peter while she was in a relationship with basket? Yes or No.

Yes, she did sleep with Black thus betraying Basket and not Black.

So Black was never betrayed by Rhoda.

From my personal view of the story, she didn't know Basket and Black were friends until she visited and found out.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by iamL(f): 4:03pm On Jan 26, 2023
francium001:


Yes, she did sleep with Black thus betraying Basket and not Black.

So Black was never betrayed by Rhoda.

From my personal view of the story, she didn't know Basket and Black were friends until she visited and found out.



Good.

So we can all read from basket perspective (the reason I don't like her).

The reason he turned crazy couple with what she did with isreal and still been in love with Peter while been married to basket for 10 yrs.

Continuous betrayal from someone you love wholeheartedly will drive a human crazy.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by NurHadejia(m): 11:41am On Jan 29, 2023
Larry, today na Sunday oo
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by LarrySun(m): 1:49pm On Jan 29, 2023
Post removed.

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by sulorog(m): 5:31pm On Jan 29, 2023
Thanks for the update
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 10:07pm On Jan 29, 2023
Nice one Larry
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Damilgodwin(m): 11:45pm On Jan 29, 2023
Master piece
Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by IgweBUIKE1(m): 9:10pm On Jan 30, 2023
Nice story but too much explanation, it is making the story boring and tiring cos we are still not getting close to the end of the story, and you must understand that everything that has a beginning has an end

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Re: Black Maria 5 - Retribution (The Final Book) by Kaycee9242(m): 9:30pm On Feb 05, 2023
IgweBUIKE1:
Nice story but too much explanation, it is making the story boring and tiring cos we are still not getting close to the end of the story, and you must understand that everything that has a beginning has an end

The problem is that he has finished writing the book and there is nothing he can remove there again. Larry is today not Sunday?

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