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Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by luuvbuuh(f): 3:43pm On Aug 31, 2007 |
Hey pips! i remeber while growing up that i loved to write short poems and short stories this was one of my first poems: No one else looks or acts like u do No one talks like u No one else smiles and walks like u do No one feels for for you No one else who tries can be 'cos none but you can be you! , Duhh! rite? well i was really proud of it back then. Share yours with us, please no matter how silly it seems, but short poems please! |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 10:03am On Nov 22, 2008 |
now girl there are more poems forum on nairaland and not even Amateur type they are really lovely threads portraying lovly poems so we will see if your attracts them ![]() why am i even telling you this it is more than a year now |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 4:05pm On Nov 28, 2008 |
I TITLED MINE MATRICULATION, IT GOES THUS MATRICULATION! MATRICULATION!! A GREAT INITIATION. AS A DUCK LONGS FOR A FLOWING STREEM SO CRAVE MY SOUL FOR THEE. MY SOUL THIRST FOR THEE FOR MANY YEARS NOW MY PRAYER HAS BEEN WHEN SHALL I COME TO BEHOLD THY FACE I REMEMBER,YES I REMENBER FRIENDS ALSO SAID TO ME WHEN SHALL YOU BE INITIATED WEAC AND JAMB WHER NOT FRIENDLY AT ALL ALL THIS I REMEMBER AS I POUR OUT MY SPIRIT, MY GREAT SOUL, AND LEAD THEM IN PROCESSION INTO THE HALL OF MATRICULATION. WITH GREAT SHOUTS AND SONGS OF THANKSGIVING I WILL WALK TO THE ALTER, SAYING TO MY PEOPLE REJOICE AND SING THE SONGS OF ZION FOR A JAMBITE U ARE NO MORE. |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:25pm On Nov 28, 2008 |
thats lovely sha ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by randombee: 12:36pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
Here is mine: You were born a princess and you are meant to lead a life worthy of a goddess who only came into this world as an adventuress. |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 1:45pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
short nd nice |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:16pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
this is mine, i hope its short as can be judging by the way she walks you'd think she's the mistress of the gods or a force no one can stop the indispensable puzzle to the odds you wouldnt know she's lost a son and wanders alone come rain or come sun and her people have left her to run mad, hopeless, deviod of all fun, she bears her brunt so perfectly well you wouldnt know her lot nothing is there for you to tell since facial smile conceals her hurt. but get a little closer not stand afar and judge you'd sense a crashing world close by whoo needs everyone support ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 2:36pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
heyaaaa! from the plot of ur poem, she really needs greatest surport. can i give mine? nice poem jari |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:48pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
its the little thing that matters, show some love this christmas ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Tgirl4real(f): 3:50pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
Nice one princesa ![]() What happened to ur rants naa ![]() ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:09pm On Dec 13, 2008 |
i just dint have who or what to rant about ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Cayon(f): 11:43pm On Dec 13, 2008 |
i'm walking to the rhythm of my own slow song. dancing to the beat and feeling so strong. like hearing it for the first time, but that's all wrong, cause my melody has been playing all along. |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by protocol(m): 8:03am On Dec 15, 2008 |
dats j.p clearks pattern of writing ![]() i like the ryme |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:04pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
Cayon:did you forget to add that, cos if you did, it woulda made much sense to me ![]() overall, it's nice sha ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 4:33pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
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Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 4:43pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
are you afraid someone might steal your amateur poems ![]() i don't think anyone has that intention ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 4:49pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
Amateur as it may seem, it's my MASTERPIECE. ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 5:02pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
thats what YOU think, let others peruse it and tell you what they think, if it gets high commendation then its a masterpiece so stop being the way you are and post some good/bad poems ![]() ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by Cayon(f): 6:52pm On Dec 15, 2008 |
princesa:its obvious that I am talking about myself if you read the first sentence (i'm) By putting (am) sounds redundant to me But then again, my French is better than my English so maybe you are correct. Peace |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 12:34pm On Dec 16, 2008 |
peace ![]() |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by damjop: 2:05pm On Dec 16, 2008 |
thats what YOU think, let others peruse it and tell you what they think, if it gets high commendation then its a masterpiece so stop being the way you are and post some good/bad poems i think i could do a poepm on you, my princess (are u one?) |
Re: Written Any Short Poem? Please Share With Us by princesa(f): 2:50pm On Dec 16, 2008 |
my username say am a princess ![]() just post the poem am waiting ![]() |
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