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''take A Walk''. I Really Nid Ur Comments. by michaelok(m): 1:08pm On Oct 06, 2011
Take a walk down d lane, in my shoes, only then shall u feel and know dat its d big toe dat pinches. Those nights filled with thoughts of uncertianties. D lonely walks in d park with no flashing smiles and d uninteresting routine. So u see why my hands remain stuck in my pocket!

Take a look through my spot, through my window and u will see why I write like this. D days of broken promises and nights without d moon. D days of long waiting only but to behold shadows, d laughter heights then silent cries. So u see why I wear the shades!

Take a ride into my world, a trip through my sphere and u will feel d writhe and cold, then would u know why my sun rises so late. Those times in d blind spot wishing u would come, days even weeks of long silence and cold, holding u close only to wake from a dream. Times I wished could be erased from d leaves of d calender, even from d heart of time. So u see why this picture still graces my wall!

Take a glance through my stuff, a look-see into my closet, then would u see why its blue. Times when loneliness seeks my arm of friendship. Days when the only friends i've got are my CDs, when I take solace in the speech of my speakers. When my world is in my hand-held, connecting me to those friends far ashore. So you see why its nokia!

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Re: ''take A Walk''. I Really Nid Ur Comments. by BiafranFirstSon(m): 1:50pm On Oct 07, 2011
I have read some poems here and i'm impressed. More effort will make u better. God bless
Re: ''take A Walk''. I Really Nid Ur Comments. by michaelok(m): 10:35am On Oct 08, 2011
BiafranFirstSon:

I have read some poems here and i'm impressed. More effort will make u better. God bless
Thanks man!

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