Martini101: @ Seun. D way this story is going, it must be a Series!

. Hahahaha. Dis wan na Unilag runs gal season 1 episode 4. Watch out 4 episode 5

UMARI/SEUN, we need this book at the bookshelves immediately, it will help as guide to the innocent and the gullible.
Thanks for the Story

nice Story

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Thank you o, sometimes l wonder whether these peeps that are always complaining about "Epistle", "Summary", "its too long", e.t.c, ever passed through any form of formal education!
And come to think of it, they make the loudest noise in-here once the topic is about "man and divorce"!
They cant comprehend anything longer than 5lines! Their "attention span" is that poor! Wetin?

It sure reflects on their level of upbringing but its not too late, l have advised some to go and buy "Pace Setters Series, Mills and Boon or even Oxford English "Alli and The Angel" English reading book.

Lastpage!

Chei! Hehehe

The story has lost focus. However, i love the part 4. I like her way with words and the way she gives information without being too detailed allowing space for our imagination to grow. She is good.

I can't believe I read all the four parts. It is full of silent suspense which is needed in a good literature.
To the writer, well done and keep up the good work.

Was ok, skipped some lines as I read tho....not as interesting as the 1st three, mayb cos I'm reading in bits...al d same, stil looking forwrd to Part 5! #thumbs Up.

The writer is loosing focus a bit. There is no connection btw scenes, no description to let us knw where we are n feel d place in d story. Its jst becoming a series of dialogues stictched crookedly 2getha. The first part was nice but its not getting better.

Waiting for part 5 .still quite interesting. Burst all these naijas with complaints. Ur right on target.

Great story by Umari Ayim. Kudos to you. Job well done (you've got quite an imaginatn!) I especially love the part where the O.C's brought Patricia n Tola back to earth frm their ascent to cloud 9 (or was it 10.5)! Got me laughing.

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Op abeg i confuse oh!. . Which part be this?. . .

Agluvs9ja: Op abeg i confuse oh!. . Which part be this?. . .

I follow you confuse oo.umari,am not sayin u aint trying,just dat d story is getting so boring and unnecessarily long...abeg i don tire

Agluvs9ja: Op abeg i confuse oh!. . Which part be this?. . .

I follow you confuse oo.umari,am not sayin u aint trying,just dat d story is getting so boring and unnecessarily long...abeg i don tire

heheheh

Nice story. Great writing skills. Waiting for part 6.

Why not make a book??

Umari this ur story no dey end?

Pls jst Patricia's story next time abeg

Ok, Attention shifted to Pero, I read it all. Nice one....Please dnt tell me Patricia caught her Boyfrnd and secretary making out....well, I'll just hv 2 wait 4 Part 6. #thumps up!

Nice storyline, I enjoyed this part 5, it is so real and on point, more ink to your pen Umari!

So, Now what Umari? We have to wait a week for another short part...Itz unfair

Umari, dont mind all the inexperienced critics. You are a fine writer and i love the dynamics of the story.You did not make it all about Patricia. Kudos!

Part 6 pls

Nice story, I was kept on the edge of my bed this mornig reading this part. Its the best part so far and full of suspense. Waiting for part six.

Poor Pero.

is umari paid 2 do dis? if yes den dose critiks 'may' b justified. bt if no y dis unnecesari indirect insults on umari by nairalanders? dia is nid 2 apreciate ppl's efots pls. besides no one is forced 2 rid dis so pls giv umari some breath. aah!

owendei: is umari paid 2 do dis? if yes den dose critiks 'may' b justified. bt if no y dis unnecesari indirect insults on umari by nairalanders? dia is nid 2 apreciate ppl's efots pls. besides no one is forced 2 rid dis so pls giv umari some breath. aah!

I wonder o. Its free reading and not a bad one at that. Some people are never appreciative.

Ope o UP NEPA....ok onto the story..its a very good read,read 1 to 5 at once and its nice. It could make a very good series, novel, play etc..Thumbs up umari

Another master piece Umari, can't wait for part 6. Nice job dear, way to go

Felibaby:

I wonder o. Its free reading and not a bad one at that. Some people are never appreciative.

I tot it was only me that felt pained by the attitude of some NLanders, plz some people shud just giv ds Babe some slack. She's contributing her best (daily or weekly) to make NL more interesting and reclaim some lost fans.
it is not a must to read the story and if you must criticize, plz do it with love. I am just too tired of reading INSULTS here, GOSH!!

very interesting story