I created this video and would like feedback on it, is it any good?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPsRf0__tLM

OK. I don't know maybe this is your first, Any way it is good. 0.33 Min: There was a little repetition there. 1.33Min: I see no reason why you should zoom the picture. Also the word "federation of construction ........ " was repeated too many time especially in the first clip. Overall, on a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest you score 7.

much appreciated

olawalebabs: OK. I don't know maybe this is your first, Any way it is good. 0.33 Min: There was a little repetition there. 1.33Min: I see no reason why you should zoom the picture. Also the word "federation of construction ........ " was repeated too many time especially in the first clip. Overall, on a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest you score 7.

I get what you mean but I felt helpless. The Federation of Construction Industry organises the Construction Industry Exhibition is quite a mouthful but I needed to pass across the name of the body organizing the exhibition as well as the name of the exhibition itself.

@Lisa1, thank you very much.

Good effort! I'm with what Olawalebabs said - far, far too much repetition of the name of the organizing body. Also please, please don't use computer-generated voices; instead grab a couple of friends to do the voices.

Wouldn't that be fun.

maclatunji: Wouldn't that be fun.

Yeah, it's totally cool. I do it too and sometimes use my own voice lol.