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My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 12:37am On Apr 05, 2006 |
My daughter, whom I so loved You can spread your wings & fly like a dove Shake the mud & dirt with a shrugged Without anger nor a grudge. You can fly as high as you can For you are a very strong woman Blow them like a fan To stay away to do any more harm. My daughter, I will be in your side Together we will swim the tide If you're in the dark, I will hug you so tight To give you comfort throughout the night. Have courage for you're surrounded by lights It is so bright it will restore your sight To make sure your path is right I can assure you, everything will be alright. |
Re: My Daughter by Zahymaka(m): 2:40am On Apr 05, 2006 |
Go on. (Loud applause) |
Re: My Daughter by uzygirl(f): 1:21pm On Apr 05, 2006 |
wow, that was nice. but is that a father or a mother's point of view? |
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 6:45pm On Apr 05, 2006 |
@Zahymaka Thanks. @uzygirl It can really be both but in this case, it is from a mother to her daughter. |
Re: My Daughter by ogamike: 6:19pm On Apr 06, 2006 |
that is so touchingĀ You go niom niomĀ I really like it! |
Re: My Daughter by ogamike: 6:20pm On Apr 06, 2006 |
this poem is so |
Re: My Daughter by Nobody: 9:48pm On Apr 06, 2006 |
This is the best poem I have ever read. I love it |
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 11:03pm On Apr 09, 2006 |
@ baby Queen Glad you like it. |
Re: My Daughter by uzygirl(f): 4:06pm On Apr 10, 2006 |
Thanks. the poem is really insightful. Thinking about it now, how often do we really tell that special woman in our lives(our mothers of course) thank you. |
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 6:43pm On Apr 10, 2006 |
@uzygirl yeap. |
Re: My Daughter by Z4M4eva(f): 7:25am On Apr 13, 2006 |
Aww. What a Sweet Poem. |
Re: My Daughter by agatonaa(f): 7:25am On Apr 15, 2006 |
@Z4M4eva Thanks. |
Re: My Daughter by Fimmy(m): 10:34pm On May 08, 2006 |
cool i love my daughter also she matters alot to me |
Re: My Daughter by Oracle(m): 2:44pm On Jul 17, 2006 |
This sounds like a true life story |
Re: My Daughter by SMC(f): 4:31pm On May 13, 2007 |
I LIKE!!! [However, there are some grammatical errors/typos in the poem but still, I quite like it]. |
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