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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:26pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: Cuddlemii wetin I go do without na,Nne thank you for bring my cocoa butter back oooCold no go kill you my love,no be when i still dey alive. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:31pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: Oh my loveMy Ecovin,its been hell without you around My soul was almost running away from my body,now that you are here body and soul is together again. Good thing you were able to satisfied pupsyman,pupsies can be over stressing at times but we got no choice than to give them respect they duly deserved. My love,thank God you back So how has your day been? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:32pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: Cold no go kill you my love,no be when i still dey alive.Did you look outside your house? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:40pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: Did you look outside your house?If you mean last night,yes i did. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:43pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: My Ecovin,its been hell without you aroundThoughts of you helped me get through the day Just knowing that you'll be here when am back Gave me hope and strength to face the day I'm so glad you are in my life For i don't know what I'd do without you. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:44pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: If you mean last night,yes i did.This night,right this very moment there is a rare white dove waiting for you outside |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:50pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: Thoughts of you helped me get through the dayI was patiently waiting for you to come I needed to see your angelic smile To hear your heart beat against mine I thought I have lost you but something in me assured me that you'll be back for me Your warm embrace and melodious voice minister to my soul Its impossible to live without you As life itself will be meaning without your love I'm glad I found you,Nlanders are envious of our love I love you and forever will no matter what time brings. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:50pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: This night,right this very moment there is a rare white dove waiting for outsideHmm oboy hope say you know say na naija we dey,if i go outside and see a white dove waiting for me by this time of the night,na to run find where i go go sleep this night o . 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:53pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: Hmm oboy hope say you know say na naija we dey,if i go outside and see a white dove waiting for me by this time of the night,na to run find where i go go sleep this night o .The white dove is my love for you and exist only in your imagination of me,I love you still. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 11:59pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
freecocoa: Hmm oboy hope say you know say na naija we dey,if i go outside and see a white dove waiting for me by this time of the night,na to run find where i go go sleep this night o . 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 12:04am On Aug 07, 2012 |
chucky234: The white dove is my love for you and exist only in your imagination of me,I love you still.Okay my prince I love you much more than words can tell What i feel is deeper than a well And With you is where I'll dwell Because you my dear makes my head swell |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 12:24am On Aug 07, 2012 |
freecocoa: Okay my princeThis I know is the begining of a perfect union The begining of our love story I pray to God that we part no more Wish I can bring the moon and the sun to your doorstep to show you how much I care I will do my best to love you Treat you like a queen that you are Walk beside you and not behind you I'll kiss away your tears in time of sorrow and share in your happiness My prayer is that you love me the way I love you That our love grows each passing day without ceasing I love you more than you can ever imagine,more than words can say Good night my angel,sweet dreams as you sleep. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 3:52am On Aug 07, 2012 |
esere826: To Ileke-idi (that is if u be woman o) Lol. Wow! And if i tell you that I'm a man nko? Sofrey sofrey. nice poem tho. And you described me to the T |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 7:04am On Aug 07, 2012 |
Is this still a poetry contest or an outbreak of romance section ? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 7:33am On Aug 07, 2012 |
mikuz: Is this still a poetry contest or an outbreak of romance section ? Poetry is expressive like that. It can also accommodate any subject matter. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 7:47am On Aug 07, 2012 |
O Cuddlemii, it's u i want to cuddle For u i'd even go over a thousand hurdles. Yes, I'd go through all dis trouble. I'd hustle, and even if i hav to, i'd burgle jus to maintain my mtn bundle. Cos dat's d way i'll keep seein u. Pls my luv don't leav me alone in dis struggle, high me up (reply me) wit those words dat are subtle, so i can do away wit these bottles.... It's really u i want to cuddle! 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 7:58am On Aug 07, 2012 |
firestar: Haaw ma looy waxx ni? 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:22am On Aug 07, 2012 |
SimplySEA: O Cuddlemii, I dare not leave you alone! How would I start that which I can't finish How would I lift you from the shackles of loneliness Only to return you to a life of unholiness When I promised to be loyal, I meant it with all absoluteness! I see in the concept of love, you are accustomed to the law of directness. It is these qualities that endeared me to your bigheartedness My love, you are so full of sweetness You have restored my youthfulness! But first of all, lets talk business How do we maintain solidness? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Freiburger(m): 9:47am On Aug 07, 2012 |
i'm sorry i'm just seeing this one you know i know Nl is still the number one coz everything about it is just full of fun bad boyz try to pull it down, but they gonna run see my peeple doing all things just to stay online we gonna be somewhere, someday if we stay alive To be continued |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 10:14pm On Aug 07, 2012 |
Cuddlemii: whenever yr thoughts cross my mind, The wind whispers a melody, The colours of d breez becomes visible, Shivers pass through my spine And my silly heart jigs and jives in dancing...... ..... My purpose on earth becomes clear: Loving u anywhere and everywhere Even if Nlanders guys de tear, i no care Cos to you i've lost my head lik a man who drank beer. ...... O cuddlemi, my dear if u stil want to maintain solidness, i no fear! Even if na to walk down d aisle, i no care! Infact i'm tired of bein single, i wan pair.....! .... .... smiles...... Jus returned from work. stressful day! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by REMMEI(m): 12:26am On Aug 08, 2012 |
Was told i shouldn't cling ta u.. was told ma adhering will leads ta blue.. but i careless bout their word.. cos in u i've found a new world.. with u boo,imma forever clasp.. honey,i'll never let u go outta ma grasp.. 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by REMMEI(m): 12:46am On Aug 08, 2012 |
Kinda long,but maybe someone will just let me know what he/she feel about the scribble below..thankz HMMMMMM! He was awake all night,couldn't sleep,couldn't blink an eye.. waiting for her to come back,cos she said she'll be right back.. he waited an hour 2,3,then he knew he was lack.. he rushed back hoping to find her there.. but her absence caused him a great fear.. he picked up his phone,her number he rang.. but her sweet voice caused his anger hanged.. i'm sorry she said,he couldn't say much cause of the weakness felt.. with ma friends,ta d club we head.. he prayed for her to have God lead.. she said go to bed honey,'tis only you i love.. and he always think to him she was sent from above.. hours later,he came online to check.. to give her a kiss and bless her with peck.. but alas! a gruesome news he met..a news that makes him severely wept and melt.. how could that happened to you,he cried.. his heart beating slowly,soul already dried.. to himself he muttered,why can't i have this accident.. why can't i carry all her predicament.. SHANIA,If i could turn back the hands of time..would have carried your cross with mine and die for u to live..i hurt here too and i do pray fa you. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by REMMEI(m): 1:05am On Aug 08, 2012 |
WHEN DEPRESSION HIT ME HARD_YOU ARE ALWAYS THERE TO IMPRESS THIS LAD_ GOING THROUGH SOME SLEEPLESS NIGHT_YOU ARE THERE TO BE MY ABSOLUTE MIGHT_ WHEN I THINK AM IN MA DARKEST FEAR_U CAME THROUGH AND EVERYTHING YOU CLEAR_ WHEN AM KNOCKED DOWN BY PAIN_YOU CAME BY TO COMFORT MY BRAIN_ WHEN THING TURN UPSIDE DOWN_YOU EASE MY REALM N CALM ME DOWN_ WHEN I THINK LOVE HAS LEFT ME_ON YOUR SHOULDER YOU MAKE ME LEAN_ TURNIN MA LIFE AROUND WIT A SINGLE WORD_GIMME D REASON WHY I SHOULDN'T MAKE U MY WORLD_ THANKS FOR THE LOVE,THANKS FOR THE CARE_THANKS FOR THE AFFECTION,THANKS ALOT MA DEAR_ |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 7:04am On Aug 08, 2012 |
..... 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 7:06am On Aug 08, 2012 |
Like a ray of light In d height of d night D fantasies of yr smiles brings me great delight! .... Wen my night is lonely and cold And i need someone to "cuddle mii" and hold i close my eyes and it's yr name i behold in bold. ..... Then i paint a picture of u and me in d future Venturing into an adventure in fulfillment of d scripture "...and he shall cling unto his woman and they shall become one.." with all pleasure.....! 1 Like
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:14pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
In my opinion, crowning a winner would not be fair as a lot of members participated in this & it turned out successful. Agreed, some of the poems were not compliant with the rules but it was still a beautiful read. So its difficult to disqualify posters just because they didn't dedicate their poems to any of the contestants. That being said, the contestants can now choose the poster that won their heart with the poetry he/she wrote. Let the actual dating begin!!!!!!!!!!!!! If viewers want to vote, click the "like" button on the poster's poem, that would automatically show whose poetry was flawless and the ones that need improvement. Congratulations to all the writers for taking out time to do this, you are highly honored & appreciated. 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 2:16pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
ah ah, no 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 2:19pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
mikuz: Is this still a poetry contest or an outbreak of romance section ? That is the original intention By the way, this thread has official turned to freecocoa and chuky love poem thread |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:21pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
REMMEI: Kinda long,but maybe someone will just let me know what he/she feel about the scribble below..thankz I got the message, I give you 6/10. As far as I am concerned, Poetry should be short concise and rich in meaning. Your verses shouldn't be too long- this isn't prose. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:22pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: No be small thing. I suppose as long as there is poetry, we have to accept it. #LOL |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 2:24pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
Awwh, remmei, just reading your post. Is that about you? What happened? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 2:26pm On Aug 08, 2012 |
maclatunji: Really . . . What have I been writing? Anything close? |
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