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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by masterpiecer(m): 1:04pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
mikuz: 2go most educating and sensible poem i have ever read, i am inspired, yet i shed tears how so much our youth these days has lost a lot in d name of "socialisation" |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 3:41pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
True. The advent of the so called 'socialization' and the incidence of mass failures that has been recorded in national exams in recent times no be coincedence. Imagine, NL is having a peotry contest and the thread is as dry as Cuddlemii ![]() @mod Get this thread to the front page lets start. I dont have time. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 3:57pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
mikuz: True. Yes boss would ask Mukina2 to put it on the frontpage! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 4:12pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Oya oya oya |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 6:48pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
If i suffer write d poem finish... Na who go pay for d date?? Seun ![]() |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 7:00pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Cuddlemii why are you killing my spirit?! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Idowuogbo(f): 7:05pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Hmmm..... Cocoa! am waiting. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Originakalokalo(m): 7:10pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
What is this life?how do i survive? The rich cry,the poor mourn but it was a place of affection a place of warmth and abundance what happened to this place this place called earth now it is filled with pain where people wail we kill ourselves as though we are animals,and rejoice when the innocent blood is spilled oh God,how do i survive in this wicked place called earth. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by pendusky(m): 7:14pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
I wan contest wit Odunu! Hope she d here! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 7:27pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
mikuz: Cuddlemii why are you killing my spirit?! I am here! How can I help you? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 7:27pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
pendusky: I wan contest wit Odunu! Hope she d here! Write her a poem then! 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by ifyalways(f): 7:33pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Iya Tomi Give me dodo Kpelu ewa ati eja Omi nko? Oche jor! Elo? Wait! Give me kpomo For my padi Intestine dey? Oh interesting! Dedicated to odunnu. Lmao 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 8:06pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
What's my role in all this? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by esere826: 8:13pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
To Ileke-idi (that is if u be woman o) 've never seen you, never met you anyways, perfection seems all you do So I'll try to create you into a lovely, yummy dream o mine give you a plum backside, silky skin, elegant limbs and stuff thats fine Admiration and amazement stares me daringly in the eyes when you glide through the glorious past, present and future of our lives I catch my breadth as I watch your elegant hips sway to the sounds of our culture a gentle, little er.ection of mine set off by your mixture of beauty and brainy stature Precious n' fanthomless are those things you've got your coral crown sitting on Also precious n' effortless are those things you've got your coral beads hanging on Ahhhh........, you swirl towards me, ....gently, ahhhhhh....., yes ...............seductively 'still can't keep my eyes off those hips,jeez!! they're fine its alluring pull tells me a lot about babies: yours and mine you do not tarry for long for now I taste your tongue mmmmhhh...the smell of your skin, the fullness of your lips vine, forbiden in the heart of the caliphate but I must sip softness made its home not too far from your heart desire places my hands affectionately on your warmth my eyelids shut, that I might drink you complete nope, changed my mind i must see every bit I always wished I was there at the creation, the begining of all things at this moment, we indeed are, ..carousing na.ked, the creation of loving Eyes opened. Noooooooooooooo.... I should'nt have for now I see that my laptop is all I have ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:14pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
How come I didn't see this thread all this while,give me second Brb |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:15pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
michelin89: What's my role in all this? Someone wins you with literary writing. You also win someone with your write up. Better still just freestyle and blow us away with good poetry. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 8:18pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by esere826: 8:19pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
@cuddlemii Where's my price? and besides, are u taken? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:25pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Ah I'm just seeing this o. I dey come,let me consult and harness my emotions ![]() |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
esere826: @cuddlemii The competition is still on. Too early for a price na! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
For: Freecocoa Title: You make me whole You make me laugh when I feel like crying, You make me live when I want to die, You make me smile when I want to frown, You make me see the bright side of life Believe in me when no one else does You’re my now, my is, my was. You make me whole with your broad smile I'm afraid Nlanders notice I need you so much. When I'm with you my world moves faster. It's like the present is the past. I need you more than you can believe, Your love make me believe in myself Love you more than you can conceive. Think about you every second of the day, And hope my life can stay this way I don't want it to be any other way. Wish I can bring the moon and the sun to your doorstep to show Nlanders what you mean to me There is no me without you, 'Cos you make me whole |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denitro(m): 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
My Friend Days were lonely Nights were cold The words in my heart I have never told I must speak them now because they are due I am grateful, I have a friend like you |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:35pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Btw cuddles,are we allowed to write in pidgin english? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Anvaller: 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Masterpiece's poem is not a love poem though but that is a very good one. I have seen some nice love poems here, but I have not actually figured any that is so so deep... let me read thru some more. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
freecocoa: Btw cuddles,are we allowed to write in pidgin english? Yes! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
chucky234: For: FreecocoaAh me likey,*blushing* |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by edetcnn(m): 8:47pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Curious. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Gaybriel: 8:49pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
You are the one I treasure. For my love for you is without measure. I promise not to tease you. But to always please you. For you are beautiful as a dove. And i'll show you my love! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 9:22pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
I found you I searched for a long while For the one i'll love all my life I traveled far and wide But got nothing from all the rides I concluded love wasn't for me So decided to live my life as it be With just my teddybear to cuddle at night And my pillow to wet with tears One day i found my way to NL And cupid bestowed upon me MEL (my everlasting love) The one i've waited for all this while You turned out to be the best That i can never ask for a next Not even if just for a test Because finally my heart is at rest Having found you my dearest Dedicated to MBJ and Chuky234 |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Vavavoom(m): 9:26pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
[center]How could I not love you? Caring, forward-looking, b-u-tiful and supportive more than 1 year It still feels like I met you late but late I'll take than never to lose your love will be living life a passenger the delicate touch of a tender woman icing my body cold even when alone How could I not love you? you occupy my sleep and kiss me to dream of your heavenly body plump and firm - bonding my unconscious mind like a love portion sweet distance is a weak foe when it comes to me and U INTERMITTENT in its committment but ours is firmer How could I not love you? supportive like a mother willing me on my encouragement for this lifetime assured and sincere I look not to East neither West for my comfort armed with and in your love no such peace to find How could I not...? wait till I see you again then we'll put distance to shame with an enduring kiss[/center] |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by cheddarking(m): 9:31pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
To iya bayo Hot puff puff and akara roasted peanuts and bananas 10 naira rice and some ewa I will love you forever All my savings went to you spent on obe to dun an 8 year old boy on his way to school now a man forever missing you. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 9:32pm On Aug 05, 2012 |
Cuddles,how many are we to write? |
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