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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by masterpiecer(m): 1:04pm On Aug 05, 2012
mikuz: 2go


There's one fact we all know/
About the social evil called 2go/
Is that never let the app/
Attract so much attention from your Nokia, Blackberry or Samsung tab/
Or just leave it alone/
And dont put it on your phone/
90% of Nigerian Juveniles/
Have it as one of their files/
They chat,type and flirt/
Until their fingers hurt/
Months back,we all saw with our eyes/
How a certain girl was raped by a group of guys/
They add,share and send/
All sort of pics,till it becomes addictive at the end/
Till they turn dumb and/
Daft with all the pathetic abbrievations and short hand/
We know it gives them the sense/
Of socialising and keeps them close to friends/
Each time the house gets boring/
They open it and log in/
But have you ever paused/
To review what disaster it has caused/
To sit and listen/
To how shallow the young ones now reason/
It kills dexterity and the ability/
To be creative and subsides the brain's agility/
It turns the smart to a blockhead/
And corrupts the innocent instead/
They waste away their youthful age/
Chatting away crap and garbage/
Before this monster was brought/
They used to read alot/
They used the school libraries and read and read and read/
Have you forgetten 'NO Longer at Ease and 'Sinzwe Banzi is Dead'/
They had shelves that glitter/
With books like 'Eze Goes to School' plus 'Chike and the River'/
We never took classes for a fluke/
When exams came,you hardly see us without a book/
We read plays and tales of all sort/
Tortoise and kings and the number of wives they got/
'Hamlet' and 'Tess of the Dubervilles' our study rooms had/
'Joys of 'Motherhood' and 'The Bottled Leopard'/
We also read 'Robinson Crusoe' ,then 'Abiku' was the poem/
What about Soyinka's 'Lion and the Jewel/
We read of 'Doctor Faustus' and Chinua's 'Arrow of God' was a treasure/
J.P Clark, Elechi Amadi educated, plus reading plays from Ola Rotimi was too much pleasure/
Haba !! Did you forget Obasanjo's 'My Command' ah!/
Back then in SS1 we all loved Gabriel Okara/
The younger read 'Ali and Simbi'/
'Jack and Jill' got us singing - simply/
We read about Abgo and Wakama/
'Violence', 'West African Verse','Without a Silver spoon' and 'Anthills of the Savannah'/
'Lamb Tales from Shakespear' was bought by a few/
But what lovely books back then we knew/
But it's so late, so start/
By deleting your 2go chat/
And use the space it took/
And install an e-book/
Download books,books,books,from pdfs to quotes from Aristotle/
You can get help from Amazon or google/
At first your peers will laugh at you/
But then give them a month or two/
They'll come back to seek/
How you managed to get to the peak/
They'll be so pained/
At the mass of knowlege they should have gained/
They'll see the darkness they've been in/
Having 2go on their phone sreen/

most educating and sensible poem i have ever read, i am inspired, yet i shed tears how so much our youth these days has lost a lot in d name of "socialisation"
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 3:41pm On Aug 05, 2012
True.
The advent of the so called 'socialization' and the incidence of mass failures that has been recorded in national exams in recent times no be coincedence. Imagine, NL is having a peotry contest and the thread is as dry as Cuddlemii cheesy
@mod
Get this thread to the front page lets start. I dont have time.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 3:57pm On Aug 05, 2012
mikuz: True.
The advent of the so called 'socialization' and the incidence of mass failures that has been recorded in national exams in recent times no be coincedence. Imagine, NL is having a peotry contest and the thread is as dry as Cuddlemii cheesy
@mod
Get this thread to the front page lets start. I dont have time.

Yes boss would ask Mukina2 to put it on the frontpage!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 4:12pm On Aug 05, 2012
Oya oya oya
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 6:48pm On Aug 05, 2012
If i suffer write d poem finish...

Na who go pay for d date??

Seun Or d contestant??
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mikuz(m): 7:00pm On Aug 05, 2012
Cuddlemii why are you killing my spirit?!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Idowuogbo(f): 7:05pm On Aug 05, 2012
Hmmm.....

Cocoa! am waiting.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Originakalokalo(m): 7:10pm On Aug 05, 2012
What is this life?how do i survive?
The rich cry,the poor mourn
but it was a place of affection
a place of warmth and abundance
what happened to this place
this place called earth
now it is filled with pain
where people wail
we kill ourselves as though we are animals,and rejoice when the innocent blood is spilled
oh God,how do i survive
in this wicked place called earth.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by pendusky(m): 7:14pm On Aug 05, 2012
I wan contest wit Odunu! Hope she d here!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 7:27pm On Aug 05, 2012
mikuz: Cuddlemii why are you killing my spirit?!

I am here! How can I help you?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 7:27pm On Aug 05, 2012
pendusky: I wan contest wit Odunu! Hope she d here!

Write her a poem then!

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by ifyalways(f): 7:33pm On Aug 05, 2012
Iya Tomi
Give me dodo
Kpelu ewa
ati eja
Omi nko?
Oche jor!
Elo?
Wait!
Give me kpomo
For my padi
Intestine dey?
Oh interesting!


Dedicated to odunnu. Lmao

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 8:06pm On Aug 05, 2012
What's my role in all this?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by esere826: 8:13pm On Aug 05, 2012
To Ileke-idi (that is if u be woman o)

've never seen you, never met you
anyways, perfection seems all you do

So I'll try to create you into a lovely, yummy dream o mine
give you a plum backside, silky skin, elegant limbs and stuff thats fine

Admiration and amazement stares me daringly in the eyes
when you glide through the glorious past, present and future of our lives

I catch my breadth as I watch your elegant hips sway to the sounds of our culture
a gentle, little er.ection of mine set off by your mixture of beauty and brainy stature

Precious n' fanthomless are those things you've got your coral crown sitting on
Also precious n' effortless are those things you've got your coral beads hanging on

Ahhhh........, you swirl towards me, ....gently,
ahhhhhh....., yes ...............seductively

'still can't keep my eyes off those hips,jeez!! they're fine
its alluring pull tells me a lot about babies: yours and mine

you do not tarry for long
for now I taste your tongue

mmmmhhh...the smell of your skin, the fullness of your lips
vine, forbiden in the heart of the caliphate but I must sip

softness made its home not too far from your heart
desire places my hands affectionately on your warmth

my eyelids shut, that I might drink you complete
nope, changed my mind i must see every bit

I always wished I was there at the creation, the begining of all things
at this moment, we indeed are, ..carousing na.ked, the creation of loving

Eyes opened. Noooooooooooooo.... I should'nt have
for now I see that my laptop is all I have


grin me date, touchy , touchy grin ?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:14pm On Aug 05, 2012
How come I didn't see this thread all this while,give me second
Brb
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:15pm On Aug 05, 2012
michelin89: What's my role in all this?

Someone wins you with literary writing. You also win someone with your write up. Better still just freestyle and blow us away with good poetry.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 8:18pm On Aug 05, 2012
smiley Ok!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by esere826: 8:19pm On Aug 05, 2012
@cuddlemii

Where's my price?

and besides, are u taken? wink
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:25pm On Aug 05, 2012
Ah I'm just seeing this o.

I dey come,let me consult and harness my emotions cheesy.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012
esere826: @cuddlemii

Where's my price?

and besides, are u taken? wink

The competition is still on. Too early for a price na!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012
For: Freecocoa
Title: You make me whole


You make me laugh when I feel like crying,
You make me live when I want to die,
You make me smile when I want to frown,
You make me see the bright side of life
Believe in me when no one else does
You’re my now, my is, my was.
You make me whole with your broad smile
I'm afraid Nlanders notice I need you so much.
When I'm with you my world moves faster.
It's like the present is the past.
I need you more than you can believe,
Your love make me believe in myself
Love you more than you can conceive.
Think about you every second of the day,
And hope my life can stay this way
I don't want it to be any other way.
Wish I can bring the moon and the sun to your doorstep to show Nlanders what you mean to me
There is no me without you,
'Cos you make me whole
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denitro(m): 8:30pm On Aug 05, 2012
My Friend
Days were lonely
Nights were cold
The words in my heart I have never told
I must speak them now because they are due
I am grateful, I have a friend like you
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:35pm On Aug 05, 2012
Btw cuddles,are we allowed to write in pidgin english? undecided
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Anvaller: 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012
Masterpiece's poem is not a love poem though but that is a very good one.

I have seen some nice love poems here, but I have not actually figured any that is so so deep... let me read thru some more.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012
freecocoa: Btw cuddles,are we allowed to write in pidgin english? undecided

Yes!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 8:36pm On Aug 05, 2012
chucky234: For: Freecocoa
Title: You make me whole


You make me laugh when I feel like crying,
You make me live when I want to die,
You make me smile when I want to frown,
You make me see the bright side of life
Believe in me when no one else does
You’re my now, my is, my was.
You make me whole with your broad smile
I'm afraid Nlanders notice I need you so much.
When I'm with you my world moves faster.
It's like the present is the past.
I need you more than you can believe,
Your love make me believe in myself
Love you more than you can conceive.
Think about you every second of the day,
And hope my life can stay this way
I don't want it to be any other way.
Wish I can bring the moon and the sun to your doorstep to show Nlanders what you mean to me
There is no me without you,
'Cos you make me whole
Ah me likey,*blushing*
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by edetcnn(m): 8:47pm On Aug 05, 2012
Curious.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Gaybriel: 8:49pm On Aug 05, 2012
You are the one I treasure. For my love for you is without measure. I promise not to tease you. But to always please you. For you are beautiful as a dove. And i'll show you my love!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 9:22pm On Aug 05, 2012
I found you

I searched for a long while
For the one i'll love all my life
I traveled far and wide
But got nothing from all the rides

I concluded love wasn't for me
So decided to live my life as it be
With just my teddybear to cuddle at night
And my pillow to wet with tears

One day i found my way to NL
And cupid bestowed upon me MEL (my everlasting love)
The one i've waited for all this while

You turned out to be the best
That i can never ask for a next
Not even if just for a test
Because finally my heart is at rest
Having found you my dearest

Dedicated to MBJ and Chuky234
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Vavavoom(m): 9:26pm On Aug 05, 2012
[center]How could I not love you?
Caring, forward-looking, b-u-tiful and supportive
more than 1 year It still feels like I met you late
but late I'll take than never
to lose your love will be living life a passenger
the delicate touch of a tender woman icing my body cold even when alone

How could I not love you?
you occupy my sleep and kiss me to dream of your heavenly body
plump and firm - bonding my unconscious mind like a love portion sweet
distance is a weak foe when it comes to me and U
INTERMITTENT in its committment but ours is firmer

How could I not love you?
supportive like a mother willing me on
my encouragement for this lifetime assured and sincere
I look not to East neither West for my comfort
armed with and in your love no such peace to find

How could I not...?
wait till I see you again
then we'll put distance to shame with an enduring kiss
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by cheddarking(m): 9:31pm On Aug 05, 2012
To iya bayo

Hot puff puff and akara
roasted peanuts and bananas
10 naira rice and some ewa
I will love you forever

All my savings went to you
spent on obe to dun
an 8 year old boy on his way to school
now a man forever missing you.

cry cry cry cry

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 9:32pm On Aug 05, 2012
Cuddles,how many are we to write?

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