[quote author=Luizkid post=52023026]just like someone said before, if i have read like this during my skool days, nothing would have stopped me getting 1st class cos the story is so Captivating. I read frm page n zero just yesterday. was almost moved to tears with the events of Nancy's mum death. But why kill Nelly when u were going to give Nancy to Kelvin?? (dia is God oo).
My only Criticism of the story was your exaggeration in the description of Nelly like a carbon copy of Nancy.

lol. na d story u go write 4exam? .
@luizkid..ahbeg no exaggerate d story dway Nelly's resemblance was exaggerated.
hehehe

Luizkid:
just like someone said before, if i have read like this during my skool days, nothing would have stopped me getting 1st class cos the story is so Captivating. I read frm page n zero just yesterday. was almost moved to tears with the events of Nancy's mum death. But why kill Nelly when u were going to give Nancy to Kelvin?? (dia is God oo).
My only Criticism of the story was your exaggeration in the description of Nelly like a carbon copy of Nancy (to the extent her teachers couldn't tell the difference btw the two) especially as they were not blood related, that's not possible.

lol. na d story u go write 4exam? .
@luizkid..ahbeg no exaggerate d story dway Nelly's resemblance was exaggerated.
hehehe

I think das Nancy's uncle. av been willing to ask about dem, tank God dey even show up dis time. its time for nemesis 2catch up wit dem

author=Angelinastto -- em really enjoying ur stuff... feed me more. am eagerly waiting 2see hw d story ends....I just wish it shouldn't b tragic story
nice work

author=Angelinastto. hmmmmmn nice work. u deserve mordan I thought. more wisdom and knowledge

u did well dropping dis today..... lemi settle and see d new dimension.. nice work

my whole body system is following... nice work