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Literature / Re: <<<The Tri-Paternal Son>>> by AgboOG: 9:10am On Apr 10, 2013 |
[quote author=Mynd_44] Erm......... **grabs a dictionary*** what was not clear to my brother -mynd |
Literature / Re: <<<The Tri-Paternal Son>>> by AgboOG: 2:22pm On Apr 09, 2013 |
You've done a nice job; but a lot needed to be done. Perhaps i should wait and see the end first. |
Literature / Re: <<<The Tri-Paternal Son>>> by AgboOG: 2:09pm On Apr 09, 2013 |
Are we at the end of this story? Please say... so i can comment. I don't want my criticism here now; but i'll like to advice you to bind this together as a book, after it's been completed and edited -i think there're people (a lot of readers), who would love to read a piece like this; but seriously: the work needs a lot of typographical and syntactical re-arrangement. |
Literature / Re: On The Passing Of Chinua Achebe By J. P. Clark & Wole Soyinka by AgboOG: 11:30pm On Mar 22, 2013 |
TO CHINUA ACHEBE'S MEMORY From afar, is the sound i heard; Sounded from the Iroko that Fell. Alas! The finest Gold has melt, Like the beautiful ship that recked. Sure; you can't be buried with your name. Your great and wonderful name, will never seize to reign. The fall of a great Iroko Forms dyke for its river to flow. To a journey, went the light; And closer, comes the night! The red sand owns the cover to the life and death border; but your work can't be covered but will alway highly hover. Adieu, prof. Chinua Achebe It's a call everyone obeys |
Literature / Re: The Bleeding Heart. by AgboOG: 7:16pm On Feb 12, 2013 |
I've decided to finish reading the story before commenting on it; and these are my observations: * You have a poor syntactic arrangement -but this doesn't mean you have a poor story; * punctuation is another important tool which seemed to be missing out of this story; and * You need to spell your word(s) completely. * My criticism is not aimed at discouraging you; it is aimed at improving your writing. I don't want to say much, but i think you have a very nice story. Keep it up! |
Literature/Writing Ads / Re: Poetry Contest by AgboOG: 7:33pm On Feb 01, 2013 |
**Unstopable Move** With my brain in my hands, there must be progression; and like the unstopable move of buldozer, no retrogression. The fact that our ballot box is the content of our leaders' travelling box does not stop the beauty of star light even in the most darkest night. The government coffer is our leaders' platter; and our nation's project plan has died a misterious death in the hands of that wicked sword of that fist of the flipant crown. Our safety has travelled very far, leaving our helpless souls on the blades of that favourable slotter! Speedy was the discription of mr. Justice's relocation from my lovely nation and still in that speedy motion and here comes a great mansion accomodating mr. Corruption. Those past beautiful hours now taste so sour. I patiently await the rebirth of that crown that had melt in our wrong leaders' net. |
Literature/Writing Ads / Re: Poetry Contest by AgboOG: 1:30pm On Jan 31, 2013 |
I have a few lines of poetry, but not until i have commended everyone's efforts! ******************** **The Waning Soul** Shiny like the sun, was the beauty of her song! Calm like a gentle flow of stream, was that beautiful dream. The memory of that beautiful smile can never fade, like the beauty of the dale's dhalia had never wane. In the city of thought i wondered, like the helpless mad man meandered. Like the glitter of the shining star, was that smile that never last! In front of the red sand i gazed, in awe of that gentle soul that's waned! (may your soul RIP) |
Literature / Re: <<<The Tri-Paternal Son>>> by AgboOG: 12:51pm On Jan 27, 2013 |
It's a very nice story. Keep it up. |
Art, Graphics & Video / Re: Can You Design Certificate? by AgboOG: 4:49pm On Jan 26, 2013 |
My name is Agbo O. Gabriel, the owner of AGTech Computers - a small place though. I am a good graphic designer and also a printer. My phone numbers: 07038137963 or 08092664294; you can also mail me: gabrielagbo@rocketmail.com. I shall design a sample and send it to your mail if given the job. |
Literature / Re: Making Money As A Student? by AgboOG: 10:50pm On Jan 22, 2013 |
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Literature / Re: Making Money As A Student? by AgboOG: 9:21pm On Jan 22, 2013 |
If you're a good writer, you're self-employed already my brother! The whole money anybody needs in this wide wicked world is all in the pocket of men; all you need do is provide the service and they will beg on their knees to give you the money - not you asking! Have you ever thought of why MTN, Etisalat, Airtel, Globacom and other GSM network provider never beged you to buy their air-time? The simple answer is because they had provided the service; and you pay in turn to subscribe! The beginning of every successful journey is tough though! Endure the heat life hits you with; it will soon cool off! What exactly do you write on - may i ask? |
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