daretodiffer:

When did you become so mean?

I'd call that 'fair'.

morganacanta:

Oh shut it tramp ! You might have an affiliation with mediocrity but I don't .So don't disturb my mention again. There should be no constructive criticism with this embarrassment to literature .

Who is this dumb dumb spitting trash all over poetry?
Is it attention you seek or you are just plain silly?

llaykorn:


Can you see the one who told another person to stop writing poetry because he didn't write a sonnet or an ode?

When I saw you trying to critique other people's works in your rude and arrogance-filled style, I thought you would be able to write poetry without flaws. You're a big joke! You don't even know how to punctuate correctly.

You can't spell shrieking correctly.

You can't even spell encountered correctly.

You don't even know how to spell thorns.

You can't spell untattered correctly.

You can't spell tear-filled without error.

You don't even know when to use the comma or the full stop, or where to even place them.

You've been jumping around all day and you don't even know the difference between 'is' and 'it is'.

I'd severely punish my 12 year old brother for these mistakes. You should just stop trying to write poetry already. You won't get anywhere for all great poets were known with the most extreme of humility. You're an embarrassment to poetry and all the poets of the world; the living and the dead of them, if this is all you can offer. I can already see Robert Frost covering his face in shame for this balderdash you just posted.

The dude just had to open his incinerator. Damn!
Llaykorn you just made My day.

During my early years of sojourn on the internet,
As I to and fro the World Wide Web
I stumbled upon a castle called Nairaland
So impressed by the work of the Architect-Seun Osewa
I decided to pitch my tent thereby!

As I peruse the front page for captivating news'
Here comes an attention catching topic'
"Poetry Class for Begginers"
With enthusiasm I signed up,
A platform to finally achieve My dream,
Alas! become a poet.

In rubbing mind with great minds,
The likes of Ray,Laykorn, Everest,Oma4U'
Fhysx was made fit!

Firestar's rebelling on papyrus really got me thinking.
CCM_Poet's inking trickles me.

Yusjet, Donifez, Olumide amidst otherS,
All kept the ship from sinking when the tides arouse.
Light Mark's dedication to the course amazes me.

Texanomaly, omo Oyinbo to n so pidgin.
Great friends like Adenike,Bolakale and others
Y'all made the ride worth it!

Great memories still rings,
Will the light be douse?
And the ship be sunk?
Johnbright, Youpele52,Mrsealiners,Vickie,Emaculate Ife
and other giants, Where art thou?
My brothers in ink I AWAIT YOUR ROUSE!

My Library needs updating.
Hallos! YUZJET
JIGSAWKILLAH, How's you Bro

#Runs in breathing heavily#
Traffic was mad.
Oga no vex abeg, rep just called to inform me class was holding.

Picks a seat towards the back.
I tire no be small.

What a Class!
What a lesson!
Thanks Prof. Yuzjet and Prof. cisse7575

Grabs a sit by Texanomaly.
So excited to see her.
Qaisar1. Hallo!
gloriaz. hi!

Bamibor:


I love this piece, quite evocative

Thanks Partner.

texanomaly:
Anybody got one?

Simile:

Metaphor:

Personification:

Her embrace is haven to me. : Metaphor

#whew
That was really cool.
Teaching sweet ooo
#chai.
#takes a bow#