Justmellow, thanks for the detailed review of your understanding of the note.

I would put all of what you gave highlighted in consideration towards my next application to address the one reason. But I feel it's too late to make a reapplication now as initial September fall resumption is close and people with initial applications are yet to get responses.

So I am looking at getting another admission for winter intake, tackle the suggested areas and give it another shot.

Thank you

JustMellow:


Hello DanSunday93,

This notes is generic with similarity to other May/June refused applicants based on my observations from notes I laid eyes on this period.

The VO concern was about your SOP, maybe it didn't clearly emphasize on the areas of your finance, employment prospects, current employment, economic incentives/benefits of your prospect course, level of establishment etc

Also, personal assets and financial status can also come from the side of the sponsor.

My advise:

1. Re-write your SOP, and demonstrate the aforementioned likewise addressing the refusal reason (given its just a r. reason which which is less complicated to answer) OR write a separate LOE (as your preference might be).

2. Pay at least your first semester tuition fees (if you've not done so)

3. Include your personal acct statement (if not added before)

4. Include personal property (if applicable or any)

5. Include any financial documents that gives you a reward etc.

Good luck!

For the first application

olalemii:



Are these the docs you submitted for the first app or the ones you intend using for the second app?

APPLICATION REFUSED

@ makano frankrobbn justmellow ralfudoh and all other Gurus in the house who understand this note attached below can share.

My study visa application was refused June 28th last two months and I immediately requested for gcms note that is attached in the image.

Timeline
Application submitted - May 30th
Background Check - June 7
Review of Eligibility - June 25th
Final decision - June 28th

On 26th of June I received Biometrics validation correspondence, so I kinda knew what was next.

BASIS OF REFUSAL
Just one reason was stated in the refusal notice which was based on PERSONAL ASSETS AND FINANCIAL Status.

Immediately I saw the refusal, I contacted the school for a deferment to winter intake which unfortunately was not available, they have just one intake for the 1year fall program. They guaranteed admission but I just have to pay application fee, University of Prince Edward Island. It's was difficult for me getting an admission to different schools applied to because of my GPA of 3.3/5.

Now I am looking forward to securing admission for winter intake which has bin challenging.

Documents/Funds Submitted include - Birth certificate, siblings document, parents documents, letter from Dad (Sponsor), landed property documents, my nysc certificate, British project management academy certificate, CAC documents for Sponsors business, my employment letter and other necessary documents.

Financials
Total funds needed - Tuition and other expenses - $7,800CAD
My account closing balance - #5,000, 000
Sponsors closing balance of naira account - #10, 000,000with domicilary account of $15,000USD

How can this note be addressed. Thank you, further clarifications can be enquired.

NOTE DETAILS