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it has happened to me.i went thru all his tests u can think of.after almost 10 years,he told me that he wont marry me & i shouldnt expect him to commit to me.they dont marry, so that when u've reached an expiry date,they can just get rid of u & move to the next hot thing.so marriage/commitment puts a limitation to their lifestyle.it's a need for them to maintain things that way.it's not what i could have done to pass his every test, he was still going to get rid of me anyway, and he knew in his heart that he'll never marry me, but i didnt.but what they dont realize is that their own consequences will eat their emotions alive, cos their souls will never be at peace, |
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![]() what's going on with the story? @jellybean, what's really up here.i think i lost it, |
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the door he never opened was now wide open |
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the rain outside was still beating against the windows in vengeance |
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his cat Simon came from under the bed,making him |
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he grabbed the baseball bat and tip-toed towards the |
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the loud bang came from the house next door |
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@slap1, the topic IS indeed captivating, u started off well, but stanza 4 is not solid, creativity just left you there. the poem is fine even if it could end on just stanza 3.the whole thing on stanza 4 about sugar just intoxicated the rest before it. @amever33,yo poem is not solid at all.it's like a cildren's poem.sorry but this is an honest critique.i can see where it's going,but there's no depth in creativity. |
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Sweat ran down his spine as he clentched his fists in terror ************************************************ SORRY U GUYS.I EXCEEDED THE 10 WORDS & SOMETIMES IT'S DIFFICULT TO WRITE WITHOUT USING THE WORD "THE" AND OTHER PENALTIED WRODS, BUT CAN'T WE JUST TAKE IT EASY, ? |
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He was startled when he heard movements coming from |
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a distance though a thick bush behind a tree he was leaning against |
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he had no idea his foot has been bleeding from |
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![]() WELL SAID, |
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![]() i heard the comments.all of them are advisory.at some point i got the same comments,until i went to the doctor cos i was doing all that,yet, errh. anyway, he dignosed me with IBS (IRRITABLE BOWEL SYNDROME).after googling all about it, i found out what to eat, plus the execrise, and where is the stomach:, out of the way! i'm not saying it will be the case with you but better to check, |
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i've heard all comments and what have u, i agree with the scepticism going about & also apologise for being another statistic but meanwhile, can we have at least a website where we can check what this wand has been wanding, ![]() |
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