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Romance / Re: When A Man Doesn't Want Commitment In A Relationship by DENISE17(f): 8:38am On Feb 25, 2010
it has happened to me.i went thru all his tests u can think of.after almost 10 years,he told me that he wont marry me & i shouldnt expect him to commit to me.they dont marry, so that when u've reached an expiry date,they can just get rid of u & move to the next hot thing.so marriage/commitment puts a limitation to their lifestyle.it's a need for them to maintain things that way.it's not what i could have done to pass his every test, he was still going to get rid of me anyway, and he knew in his heart that he'll never marry me, but i didnt.but what they dont realize is that their own consequences will eat their emotions alive, cos their souls will never be at peace,
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 12:23pm On Feb 24, 2010


what's going on with the story?
@jellybean, what's really up here.i think i lost it,
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 12:18pm On Feb 24, 2010
the door he never opened was now wide open
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 11:16am On Feb 24, 2010
the rain outside was still beating against the windows in vengeance
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 10:58am On Feb 24, 2010
his cat Simon came from under the bed,making him
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 10:44am On Feb 24, 2010
he grabbed the baseball bat and tip-toed towards the
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 10:13am On Feb 24, 2010
the loud bang came from the house next door
Literature / Re: Hell is My Home by DENISE17(f): 8:49am On Feb 24, 2010
@slap1, the topic IS indeed captivating, u started off well, but stanza 4 is not solid, creativity just left you there. the poem is fine even if it could end on just stanza 3.the whole thing on stanza 4 about sugar just intoxicated the rest before it.

@amever33,yo poem is not solid at all.it's like a cildren's poem.sorry but this is an honest critique.i can see where it's going,but there's no depth in creativity.
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 7:09am On Feb 24, 2010
Sweat ran down his spine as he clentched his fists in terror
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SORRY U GUYS.I EXCEEDED THE 10 WORDS & SOMETIMES IT'S DIFFICULT TO WRITE WITHOUT USING THE WORD "THE" AND OTHER PENALTIED WRODS, BUT CAN'T WE JUST TAKE IT EASY, ?
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 1:46pm On Feb 23, 2010
He was startled when he heard movements coming from
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 11:10am On Feb 23, 2010
a distance though a thick bush behind a tree he was leaning against
Literature / Re: Let's Write A Book! by DENISE17(f): 8:45am On Feb 23, 2010
he had no idea his foot has been bleeding from
Health / Re: Stretch Mark Palava by DENISE17(f): 4:07pm On Feb 22, 2010
grin

WELL SAID,
Health / Re: Help! Protruding Stomach by DENISE17(f): 3:24pm On Feb 22, 2010
smiley
i heard the comments.all of them are advisory.at some point i got the same comments,until i went to the doctor cos i was doing all that,yet, errh. anyway, he dignosed me with IBS (IRRITABLE BOWEL SYNDROME).after googling all about it, i found out what to eat, plus the execrise, and where is the stomach:, out of the way! i'm not saying it will be the case with you but better to check,
Literature / Re: Get Your Book Published, For Free! by DENISE17(f): 4:01pm On Feb 03, 2010
i've heard all comments and what have u, i agree with the scepticism going about & also apologise for being another statistic but meanwhile, can we have at least a website where we can check what this wand has been wanding, grin

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