Venzal:
Is this the only account you're operating on Fiverr?

Yes for now, but I'm planning going into graphics because I have experience on graphics.

Venzal:
Wow bro! You do such a terrific job in reviewing people's profile. Do yo offer proofreading services?

I tell you, he is just too good in what he does

khassy:


wlc
one more things, work on your response rate

I sent you a msg to check how quick you respond (sta......k...)

Buyers prefer buying from people with prompt reply, gives them assurance they would get their deliveries promptly tooo.

MODIFIED
Got your reply. You tried but try to sound a little more convincing next time. Wanna know how??

Msg top sellers in your niche and see their reply, structure yours after them.

$30 is low for 3000 word ebook to me (not in that niche so dont judge by my pricing ooo)

Next time also, it helps to ask questions on an ambiguous order except you want to be dealing with cancellations.
you could have asked if you would be book cover or just writing.

[size=14pt] USE THIS AT YOUR OWN RISK [/size]
Hi St...k... and thanks for contacting me.
I would be able to do (whatever d buyer ask here).
You can count on me to deliver a (perect, unique blablabla) ebook in (state your time.)
I am assuming I'll only need to do the writing, if thats correct, You will have to pay XXXX amount. Kindly let me know if my assumptions are wrong and if this is within your budget.

Kind Regards,
XXXX



gracias

Again I say thank you dear. You have been a great helper.
gracias

khassy:

I understand that feeling, its FRUSTRATING.

I think your ABOUT has a problem. It doesn't portray you as a writer. In trying to impress, you went off the mark and focused on your achievements alone without recourse to how that would help in your writing.

Hi, I am Leila. A professional writer/Resume consultant/Editor/Proofreader/Photoshop Expert. A holder of masters in Mass Communication and English with solid understanding of [s] high-tech industry, strategic business development initiatives, and Human Resources Management experience.[/s]

this is right but not advisable (only people that have been banned can understand why)

You tried combining many skills together and it portrays you as a jack of all trade, master of ...\

A holder of .... sounds incorrect to me (THIS IS MY OPINION AND NOT A FACT)

Leave that for the tech guys
[size=14pt] USE THIS AT YOUR OWN RISK [/size]

Hi,
Thanks for checking out my profile. I am a PASSIONATE (DEDICATED, PROFESSIONAL, SKILLED, EXPERIENCED etc) writer with over 5 years of experience on content writing spanning diverse topics. In 24 hours, I would craft a MASTERPIECE and READER ENGAGING content for you.
Don't hesitate to contact me today.

2nd correction
I will create captivating and relevant title for your book
make CAPTIVATING capital letters (this is your meta tag)

I will create Business Name,avilable domain,slogan, logo and business card
I will BRAINSTORM..... sounds better

I will research and write a 500 word seo optimized article
RESEARCH

I will translate English to Spanish 500 words or vice versa
I will PAINSTAKINGLY or CAREFULLY....

I will write you a SUCCESSFUL ebook on any topic of your choice
that successful is dull, use something like UNIQUE, CAPTIVATING, anything sha sweet that people want in their ebook sha

I will professionally rewrite, edit or design your resume and cover letter
PROFESSIONALLY

will design a professional LETTERHEAD


PROFESSIONAL should be in capital not LETTERHEAD

3rd. Use a profile that shows your face more visible, not half body portraits

4th. have a heading on your home page after the HI, I am.....

5th. Your language is set to basic. You'r from the US so use NATIVE


work on this, I'm sure you'll hit your level 1 in less than 2 weeks

Wow!

Thank you very much for taking out time to review my profile and gigs. I really appreciate it dear. I will make adjustment as you have suggested. Thanks for helping with those lines. They are just perfect. Once again dear, THANK YOU VERY MUCH

Hi guys, is been frustrating out there. Since I created my gigs no single order has been recorded.

I tried my best to create some nice gigs but no sale is coming.

I would appreciate it if you guys can review my gigs and tell me what could be wrong.

Here is my profile link https://www.fiverr.com/seoleila


I would appreciate it more if anyone can order my gig, at least let me have one review.

Thanks.

Hi guys, mind checking my gig please //www.fiverr.com/s2/3a283fb69b

Gracias

Sard:

For a start, you did a good job with your gigs. Just few mistakes spotted.
As a writer, you need to work a bit on your preposition e.g. "targeted at", not " targeted to". There are few other ones you need to change too.
Your proofreading gig has not been proofread because "test" appears where "text" should have appeared. You should work on your punctuation marks and reduce the length of your sentences, when it's possible, as it will help you avoid certain mistakes.
You profile says "quick delivery", but your delivery time is 4 days for 500 words.. That's a bit of disparity. For a newbie, your delivery time should 1 day for 500 words.
Just do few changes and you're good to go.

I greatly appreciate this. Thanks a lot.
Will do as you suggested.

Gracias

Hi there,
I would appreciate it if you guys can spend little of your time and review this my gig probably check out my profile and the other of my gig.
Gracias

www.fiverr.com/seoleila/write-a-unique-500-word-seo-friendly-article-on-any-subject/

https://www.fiverr.com/seoleila/translate-500-words-from-english-to-spanish-or-vice-versa/

Hate it or love it, she's extreme beautiful.