segsbenks:

Just to say those two words...do u av to quote the whole post?lik seriously sister u need a tutorial...

marianneada:
FLASHBACK
********Nelson come back here, i'm talking to you, dont you ever walk out on me, i'm your father and you must listen to me, you're embezzling the company's fund and all you can tell me is that you used the money for something important, now you're telling me you're traveling back to London for your masters, what havent i done for you"? Dad spoke almost in tears.
"There's no need crying over spilt milk, right now, all i need is just 10million naira to settle down over there, chill mehnn, there's no need for the shouting," He said nonchalantly, we were all watching the drama, nobody spoke.
"Dad i need to be in charge of your company, why don't you sit your old ass at home and watch your company grow," he didnt finish talking when dad slapped him hard on his chick"this is for all the pains you have caused me and your mother"he shouted at him, dad tried to slap him again but he held daddy's hand, "bia Nelson, will you release your father's hand? Do you know that what you're doing is a taboo?" mummy fired at him, he turned to daddy fiercely, "dont you ever raise your hand on me in your miserable life," he fired at daddy, i couldn't just stand and watch Nelson insult our parents then i spoke up"Nelson you are fool, you are the biggest fool i have met in my life, are you the only one that has ever travelled abroad to study, what impression are you giving to people about their children studying abroad, infact you're a disgrace to this family"! I fired at him, he rushed at me but mummy blocked him from hitting me, he then pushed mummy down the stairs.
Mummy was in coma for two weeks, she couldn't recognize anyone at first, the doctors advised us to take things easy with her that she'll come around, my mum really suffered, she has been suffering from the fall till today, the doctors said she'll get better, that it is just a matter of time.
"By the time Chioma finished i was already crying" So where's he right now?
"He left the country immediately after the incident, he left the house without calling anyone, he only called some months ago apologizing for what he did, i guess his money has finished, he said he'll return next month, let's wait and see.
" i'm sorry for all that happened, mummy will be ok. I calmed her down.
" the doctors said all she needs now is love and care, mummy loves Nelson so much, even with what he did, she still cant stop talking about him, sometimes i feel jealous,"oya let's go to the market and buy what you need for the soup,"
I have even forgotten about the market, she took her car keys from her wardrobe and we left to check on mummy Amanda before we leave, we opened her door and met her sleeping "ooooh, thank God she's sleeping, let's hurry and leave before she wakes," she said.

marianneada:
Hey lovers of literature, i want to start a story, pls this is my first story, i need your comments, correct my errors.Thanks so much and may God bless u all as you read it.
CHAPTER1
I had slept off like a new born baby and didn't know when it was morning, i was still sleeping when my mum returned from morning mass and was shocked to see that i'm yet to sweep the compound. My mother who was already angry rushed into my room shouting my name, "Amaka!, Amaka! Why is she still sleeping by this time of the morning ,she thought to herself" immediately i heard my name i woke up and ran outside to meet my mum. "mama good morning, i'm sorry i woke up late" my mum didn't allow me finish before she embraced me and started checking my body temperature to know if i'm sick, "i'm not sick mama,i only over slept," i said, my mother did the sign of the cross and told me to carry on with my morning chores which i started doing immediately with so much joy.
***** I'm the only child of my mother, my father died when i was still a baby, my mother took it upon herself to train me, my uncles took all we had except our house and a small portion of land where we farm, i'm still grateful to them. My mother refused to marry again after my father's death, i always stayed with her to make her happy. My maternal aunty wanted to take me to Lagos where i'll continue my schooling, but my mum refused saying she needs me around her. My mother is very beautiful and hardworking, she worked so hard to make sure i lacked nothing. I grew up to be very close to my mother. My village is not far from the city, everybody wanted their children to school in the city. Immediately after my primary school in the village community school, my mother enrolled me into secondary school in the city. I grew into a very pretty girl. I am chocolate in complexion, i have a smiling oval face with a long black hair, in j. S. S, 3,men has started disturbing my mother for my hand in marriage, my mother swore over her dead body will she do that, i studied really hard to make my mother proud. Thank God i'm blessed with intelligence too. I never allowed all these attributes enter my head. I respect my elders, i turn down my admirers politely. Every mother in my village wanted me as a daughter in law, but i had my dreams, the dream of furthering my education to the University.
I wake up early everyday to be able to catch the early morning bus going go the city, this was how i struggled until i finished my secondary education.i have just finished writing my WAEC exams and has been helping my mother out in the farm. ****
Immediately i finished my morning chores, i warmed our left over soup and called my mother to eat her breakfast, i served our food in the sitting room, and sat beside my mother to enjoy my akpu and bitterleaf soup, my mother has taught me to avoid talking while eating, we ate our food in silence until the sound of her phone broke the silence, i rushed to where her phone is and checked the caller, it was aunty Amanda, i gave the phone to my mother who had already washed her hands,"give me the phone "i gave her the phone and continued with my food, i watched my mother talk with so much joy, i heard aunty Amanda telling her that her family will all return for the xmas celebration, i went to refill my drinking cup when i heard my mother scream, i ran back into the sitting room to meet my mother laughing, i heaved a sign of relief and went back, immediately my mother ended the call i couldn't wait to ask her why she was screaming i called her calmly "mama," she looked up and eyed me, she knew i wanted to hear the gist but wanted to keep me in suspense, i allowed her finish eating before i went to meet her, we were sitting outside our balcony picking our beans for lunch, "mama, how's aunty Amanda and her family doing?" i asked trying to bring in the screaming part. My mother looked at me"amibo, i know you wont rest until you hear everything , my dear, Amanda is very lucky, her family is blessed, she said they will all return for the xmas celebration. "she stopped and continued with what she was doing" mama i heard those ones already, why did you scream? "i asked a bit angry," oooooh that, my daughter, God has really blessed Amanda, her first son Nelson returned from US and she wants him to settle down."i didnt allow her finish with the gist when i hissed, i didnt know when i did that, my mother too was shocked cause she knows how much i love Aunty Amanda "bia Amaka, what was that for?, are u quarelling with your aunty?" nooooo, it's just that i thought there's something more important she said"i replied faintly, "mmmm, anyway Amanda promised to bring a lot things for us" immediately she said that i brightened up and smiled "i know that's what you wanted to hear" , my mother said smiling, pls my dear continue with this let me rush to ur uncle 's house and know why he summoned me. "she said standing up to leave." but mama why cant he come here and discuss whatever it is with you than you going to his house"my mother looked at me, "my daughter let me just go, i don't want him to report me that i disrespected him" ok bye.
I watched my mother leave our compound, i kept on wondering why uncle Amobi summoned her, i don't trust that man, i knew he has always liked my mother, i have caught him several times staring at her buttocks, i believe he has ulterior motives behind leaving our house and farmland to us, the thought of my uncle's summon couldn't leave my mind, i remembered aunty Amanda and her children, i hissed again, i don't know why i don't like her children, maybe it's their attitude.
****Aunty Amanda is my mother's childhood friend, they grew up in the village and attended the same primary and secondary school, they were more like sisters, they did everything together, Aunty Amanda got married to a very rich man in Lagos, her husband is also from our village, many rich men came to ask for my mother's hand in marriage but she refused because of the love she had for my father.My parents lived in the village and was very comfortable with life until death took away my father. Aunty Amanda has been a source of help to us, she made sure we lacked nothing, her husband has been good to us, she has begged my mother to move to Lagos but my mother who is used to village life refused, i have always wanted to go to Lagos but my mother will never hear of such. Aunty Amanda has four children :her first child Nelson, her second child, Chioma, her third child Chizara and the last Kingsley. Her children doesnt like mingling with other children in the village except the rich ones that also came from the city, as young as they were, they can drive, you can never see them walking or talking to village children like us, i maintained my distance with them, i only visit to see their mother and leave immediately, Nelson love having fun with his rich friends, he is a tall handsome boy, he is also fair complexion, all the village girls wanted him as their boyfriend, but he doesn't notice their presence, i met him last when he was in his second year in the University abroad and i was in ss1,his sister Chioma was in SS1,Chizara was in jss3,kingsley was in jss1.i never knew how saucy Nelson was, until the day i came to collect my Christmas present from aunty Amanda.
Their house is among the magnificent houses in my village with a big black gate, they have a gateman that does his job well, there is a swimming pool in their house, they have three maids, they have everything at their beck and call. It was on xmas eve that aunty Amanda called my mother and informed her of their arrival, she also told me to come and pick what she bought for us. I left our house with joy and ran to her house, on reaching there, i knocked at the gate and the gateman opened the gate, he recognized me and ushered me in, as i was about entering the house i heard a loud voice talking to the gateman angrily, "Suleman, who did you open the gate for? the gateman was about answering him when he saw me, he walked up to me," hey girl, who are you looking for? I looked at him and called Nelson, immediately i called him, he flared up and started insulting me, "ooh, u came to look for me, are u not ashamed of urself coming to my home to woo me ,shameless village girl, am I the only handsome nigga in this village?" OMG, look at how she 's smelling?you couldnt bathe before coming to see your crush! "That was when i remembered i was about bathing before Aunty Amanda called my mother, i dropped my bucket of water and dressed up and rushed to their house, but i' m not smelling, i couldn't talk, i was speechless, only drop of tears could be seen in my eyes, he turned to the gateman to mouthwash him"Suleman, are you this dumb? How can you be so stupid to allow this dirty girl into my house "i turned to leave and saw aunty Amanda standing beside the house, i ran to her and hugged her, i cried like i've never did in my life, Aunty Amanda hugged me tight, and turned to her son," Nelly why are rude to Amaka? Don't you she's the daughter of my best friend? Why are you always like this, she turned to me and comforted me, she told me to ignore all he said, i nodded my head, she then turned back to her son, "and you, who told you, she came to look for you? I called her to come and pick what i bought for them for xmas. Nelson laughed" ooh, she's not just a village flirt but also a village beggar "his father came to my rescue immediately and gave him a thunderous slap" shut up young man, is this how i brought you up? Now apologize to her "his father thundered, " but dad " he tried to talk but his father cut him short" if you don't apologize to her right now, i'll cancel all your trips abroad next year"he fired back"i'm sorry "that was the last word he said and entered inside. Aunty Amanda was really sorry for all that happened, she gave me enough food and presents for us, she begged me not to tell my mother what happened, and i promised her never to do that, after that day i dreaded going to aunty Amanda's house, and that was the last time i saw Nelson. ****
Now, he's back!!!