i think u should find a style you are comfortable with , and find out how to get better with that style. no matter what, do not stop writing, that is the first rule if u must improve.
you can also  check out for writing blogs online , they are very helpful.

maybe a moses, but no American president is a saviour, just a world leader, nice poem though.

IROKO

Tall you are, the giant of African forests
Ancient, older like the soil
Than the mortal goons of Adam’s race.
I wish to share in your strength
Standing strong amidst nature’s clout
The memory of lovers’ secret moments
Bearing the stains of sacrifices and prey,
and death threats by the logger’s steps.
Your age has seen it all.
Floating mortuary of the sea, abattoir of the mill
I sit, I eat, and I drink and keep my things
Gazing at your vast empire, the rain forest
In hand, a deceased relation with a bushy head
I pick my hue from your leafy green
Lively or lying in state
And paint a picture of your beauty
Hoping to hear your sylvan tongue.

Let men be wise by instinct if they can, but when this fails be wise by good advice.



Wisdom comes with the ability to be still. Just look and just listen. No more is needed. Being still, looking, and listening activates the non-conceptual intelligence within you. Let stillness direct your words and actions.


Memory is the mother of all wisdom.


The kind of man who always thinks that he is right, that his opinions, his pronouncements, are the final word, when once exposed shows nothing there. But a wise man has much to learn without a loss of dignity.



Second thoughts are ever wiser.