Qudkom:


Just went through this and I am sorry to say but I found a loophole.

1. No vo will believe your employment situation. Everyone knows being an Intern is a temporary role and doesn't guarantee your long term involvement in the organisation. Hence the employment refusal reason.

2. You had a good sponsor and obviously good financial portfolio however there was so much emphasis on your Dad and you didn't include any proof of your personal asset and finance or any personal factor that can lure you back home.


The bottom line is this, you can manage to compose a compelling loe but how do you want to convince a VO about the changes in your employment situation within a few weeks. Get a letter from a superior confirming or assuring future employment after your program.

Another notable mention would be the duration of your studies, Conestoga is famous for short 8month programs and sometimes that spooks VOs. Once again sorry about the refusal you can however order gcms note but don't rush a reapplication.

I actually feel my SOP was not good enough because i was advised to keep it simple and make sure it's not more than a page.
Thanks a lot, I will order for the GCMS note immediately.

Mudicua:
So sorry to hear this. Please share your timeline/info on your application.
When did you apply?
What did you use during applications?

As for home ties where are your family members?
Who is your sponsor?
What do you currently do (employment) and what did you fill as employment for them to say limited employment prospects?
What course were you going for?

Once you share your info, then some persons here can help you however they can.
Do not be sad, pick yourself up, and start again

Keep the Faith... it will end in praise.

Thank you, these are the Documents I submitted:
Sponsor’s documents (Dad)
Sponsor bank statement of six months
Sponsor Domiciliary account
Sponsor Remuneration Statement
Sponsor ID card
Letter of sponsorship
Confirmation letter of employment for sponsor
Reference letter from Sponsor bank
Full Tuition Receipt
Dads Landed Documents and estate valuation
Birth Certificate
SOP
Bsc Certificate
Waec print out
Admission letter

I currently work as an intern for IITA
and i planned on studying PGC Computer Application Development at Connestoga College

Submitted Online 4th of April
Biometrics 8th of April
Delay 8th of May

my application was just denied based on my travel history, home ties and limited employment prospects.
Please I need any help I can get.
School resumes in fall Connestoga college and the course I plan on studying is Computer Applications Development

Please any suggestions on what i can do to correct this will be appreciated as I plan on reapplying soon.