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Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 9:39am On Aug 01, 2013 |
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Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 11:37pm On Aug 01, 2013 |
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Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 6:41am On Aug 02, 2013 |
feedback... feedback... oh! Let me know your opinions. |
Re: Kasala by arabanibaba: 12:12pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
this is so cool and i enjoy it so much i just consult the oracle and your ifa name shall be oworinsogbe |
Re: Kasala by Clemzy16(m): 12:27pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
Lovely story it is. . . Definately a front page material. Let's call on the MOD's in this section to move this to the front page. |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 2:08pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
arabanibaba: this is so cool and i enjoy it so much i just consult the oracle and your ifa name shall be oworinsogbe Lol no be small thing oh. Owonrin Sogbe The Odu of Ogbesowonrin talks about the evils of retaliation and how this doesn't solve any problem. Wash your Ori with omi tutu(cool water). I am happy you enjoyed the story. Clemzy16: Lovely story it is. . . Thanks clemzy you always had my back. If you really want to endorse the story for front page then go ahead thats the link for that https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/12 |
Re: Kasala by DNA1(f): 3:46pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
Interesting story...waiting 4 ur next book....u av really inspired me to complete d book i started several years ago..... But d epilogue seemed as if u RUSHED it... Besides why did u kill our dear Nike and Tunde.. ![]() Waiting for your reply. 1 Like |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 6:03pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
DNA1: Interesting story...waiting 4 ur next book....u av really inspired me to complete d book i started several years ago..... Thanks DNA i hope to read the story i inspired you to complete. An epilogue is usually just used to bring closure to a story. It helps reveal the faith of a character after all the events that occured in the story.It shouldn't be expected to take thesame form as the main chapters of the story. I didn't kill NIke and Tunde the story said nothing is really known all we have is speculations all we are sure of is that she had a son. We can't confirm if they died or just decided to go their separate ways and leave their son in an orphanage. Its a tragedy dear... ![]() Hugs hugs hugs ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: Kasala by DNA1(f): 7:13pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
zubike01: ah! Tragedy ke. Biko Zuby do something for your numba one fan na....why did u allow ogunshola and princess to live happily ever after, and then u are leaving tunde and nike just like that! No oooo.....no be so ooo.....try adjust am abeg... |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 7:29pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
DNA1: DNA my number one fan. How would you have preferred it to end? Remember the curse can't be broken she has accepted it. If you can Come up with some creative suggestion that would prevent Nike and Tunde from dying but ensure that their son still grows up an Orphan.Then i would be willing to tweak it a little. Ok.... ![]() |
Re: Kasala by Ladywilyms(f): 8:43pm On Aug 02, 2013 |
Woah! This is really a nice job Though d part of d yoruba history n its culture was smhw getting me bored bt its really a great one zubike01:wat abt getting a powerful man of God 2 pray n break d curse then live happily? |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 2:03am On Aug 03, 2013 |
Thanks................ Its good you could get pass the boredom and still enjoy the story. Ladywilyms: Woah! This is really a nice job Nike is a Santeras a divinity i find it hard that she would choose to walk that path after her encounter in Valley of flames ministry. Tunde is a thief with no respect for religion, culture and human life. i didn't think it would be fair for him to have a happy ending. Never the less getting a power man of God to break the curse would make all the suspense meaningless. The joy of suspense is the inability to predict what comes next. |
Re: Kasala by DNA1(f): 8:53am On Aug 03, 2013 |
zubike01: hahaha, Zuby is dat wot u think? The suspense in this story is already strong..... So nothing can water it down....Let me show u something.... Dis is not the way the story came across to me, and i'm sure, one or two of ur readers will agree.... Firstly, u portrayed Nike as a fighter, and if anyone should have a happy ending after all the trouble, it's her. Seriously she has to be delivered from the curse. Secondly, u portrayed Tunde as a criminal that was ready to start a new life, but it could still make sense to make the curse kill him, if you really want a tragedy. As for ogunshola, he ought to have died since he FAILED his mission. And the son of tunde and nike can always be put in an orphanage, so that nike can start a new life. Infact if u want to end the story in such a way that u can write part two, then u should make the child inherit some part of the curse. I hope this helps, as a writer i know the two most difficult parts to adjust in stories are the beginning and the end.... So i'm not suggesting you change the ending, I'm just registering my ideas....it might help u in ur next story or something.... # just thinking.# |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 9:21am On Aug 03, 2013 |
DNA1: Good Point DNa1 I would give Nike a happy ending. Tunde is screwed lol I see your point. |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 9:32am On Aug 03, 2013 |
DNA1: Good Point DNa1 I would give Nike a happy ending. Tunde is screwed lol.She would live happily ever after as the great Santeras. Ogunshola is my guy oh. |
Re: Kasala by Clemzy16(m): 10:19am On Aug 03, 2013 |
DNA1:hmmm... I so so AGREE with you. *hides my face* |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 11:03pm On Aug 06, 2013 |
Clemzy16: hmmm... I so so AGREE with you. *hides my face* lol hide or no hide i see you ![]() |
Re: Kasala by Clemzy16(m): 10:50am On Aug 07, 2013 |
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Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 7:56pm On Aug 20, 2013 |
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Re: Kasala by Ormorlehwah(f): 2:00pm On Aug 27, 2013 |
Wow! Dix is a gr8 job. Tanx we appreciate dis. Short verses bt mighty. |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 6:05pm On Aug 30, 2013 |
Ormorlehwah: Wow! Dix is a gr8 job. Tanx we appreciate dis. Short verses bt mighty.UW |
Re: Kasala by Dyoungstar: 5:15pm On Jul 04, 2014 |
zubike01: Am waiting for this story to continue and finish....Pls OP come oooo |
Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 8:11am On Oct 17, 2016 |
Deep in the heart of Oshogbo Kingdom, a secret century old, evidence in a single statue is on the verge of being exposed. A secret so dangerous it could shake the foundation of Yoruba history. After a struggle with an elderly woman, a young girl becomes the victim of a curse that threatens to destroy her life and those of the ones she loves. Her only salvation lies in a statue. She joins forces with an art thief who is on the run from guards of The Lodge. A secret society; whose members are willing to sacrifice their lives in order to retrieve this statue and protect their secret. In a breathless race through the streets of Lagos, and a face-off with a deadly soldier, intent on a mission from which he cannot fail. A soldier on a mission, but also locked in a desire to be with the woman he loves. He must not return without the statue, he cannot lose his woman. Missions, aspirations, desires, emotions collide in this exhilarating tale, a blend of restless adventure, historical intrigue, mythological genius and romance. Kasala is a fascinating thriller, full of surprises, loaded with suspense at every twist … till its unpredictable end! Now available for purchase: https://www.amazon.com/Kasala-Curse-Azubike-Akinsowom-Ahubelen/dp/1533388725/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1476688121&sr=8-1&keywords=kasala+azubike https://www.amazon.com/KASALA-Curse-AZUBIKE-AHUBELEM-ebook/dp/B01L5OZ568
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Re: Kasala by zubike01(m): 7:13am On Nov 04, 2016 |
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