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Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 1:13pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
ok so, i watched this film, cartoon actually, and i love it. i can never get tired of watching that piece. if you havent watched it, go get yours. The title is FROZEN. so i wanna narrate that film here now, in words, writing...you know, like a novel out of a film. i will start as much as i can go nd ANYBODY is allowed to continue in your own words and skill, if you have watched the movie. This lets all writers test their narration skill, Diction, use of humour and all stuff. so lets roll it. if you havent watched it, you cant write it please. just follow and love it! Ah mean, i'd love you to love it.... its not a command....lol CHAPTER 1: The stars shone brightly and so did the moon. It was a beautiful night and everyone was asleep, except Anna. she climbed unto the bed and rolled up on her 5year old sister who was sleeping. "let's play Elsa" she said in a playful tone. Elsa grunted lightly. "Go play by yourself Anna" she said pushing her 3year old sister unto the bare floor. Anna landed on her butt and rolled her really big eyes. suddenly, she remembered something and a mischievous smile appeared on her lips. she jumped up and climbed the bed again. opening one of Elsa's eyelid, she whispered with effect, " Do you wanna build a snow man"? obviously, it worked. Elsa loved that. They did it together always. jumping off the bed, she shoved aside the covers and they both scrambled out of the room screaming and laughing, disregarding the silence of the night. "shhhhhh!" said Elsa trying to bring her sister's laughter to a tolerable minimum and she herself was guilty. Entering their large ball room which was normal for a palace to have, They shut the door and Anna shouted to Elsa with pleading eyes. " Do the magic, do the magic!" " Are you ready" " yes". Elsa stamped her right foot on the room floor and snow spread out therefrom to all four corners of the room. She was heavenly endowed with the gift to freeze things with ice and make snow out of nothing. In no time, the room was a rink. Elsa built a snow man and hid behind him. " Hi, i'm olaf and i like warm hugs" she said, as if it was the snow man talking. "i love you, olaf" shouted Anna. "Jump,Anna!" shouted Elsa It was a trick they'd been practicing for ages.Anna jumped off a snow drift, and Elsa caught her in another. Anna began jumping faster and faster, and Anna practically had to shout for her to slow down. Suddenly, Elsa slipped on the ice. She fell, her short blond pigtails swinging. She pushed herself into a half sitting position, just in time to see Anna spin through the air, and was goin to land on nothing!"Anna" she cried, shooting a blast of her snow magic, meaning to make a hill of snow for her to land on. It hit the little princess in the head. Anna crashed to the ground. Elsa ran towards her sister's limp form."Mama! Papa!" she cried, cradling the unconscious Anna's head in her lap 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by Spyceeee(f): 4:36pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Its ulna nt anna am also a huge fan |
Re: Frozen by Crowny1(f): 4:55pm On Oct 12, 2014 |
Nice. But you missed something. 'Elsa, wake up, wake up'. 'Go back to sleep Anna'. 'I can't. The sky's awake. So I'm awake. So we have to play!'. That was before she pushed her off. Am so crazy about dis movie. I downloaded it into my phone. Nice work though |
Re: Frozen by Royver(m): 8:52am On Oct 13, 2014 |
As soon as the little princess hit the floor, Elsa was filled with dread. The snow in the room turned to thick ice with haphazard jagged edges, a sign of the effect of her emotions on her powers. It froze the door and windows shut. Elsa cradled Anna’s head in her arms as she knelt beside her, and noticed a silver strip of hair on her her sister’s head where it had all been golden brown before. “What have I done?” Thought Elsa, panic-stricken. She called out to for help with silver tears running down her cheeks. “Mama, Papa!” Her voice echoed dismally along the dark and massive ballroom. “It’s okay Anna, I’ve got you.” Elsa whispered into Anna’s ears. There was the sound of running feet and a crash as the doors were forced open and the king and queen hurried into the ballroom. “Elsa! What have you done?” The King gasped, picking Anna up. “This is getting out of hand!” “It was an accident!” Elsa sobbed. “I’m sorry Anna. The queen touched her daughter’s skin and gasped. “She’s Ice cold!” The king’s heart skipped a beat. He had heard about this before and he knew his daughter’s life was in danger. He racked his brain as he tried to remember the solution. Finally he remembered. “I know where we have to go.” He said. Leaving the still unconscious Anna with her mother, He ran to the royal library. He made his way to the darkest part of the shelves where the old and ancient books of magic were hidden. Tapping as much as he could from his childhood memory, he strained to remember which book he was looking for as his hands worked feverishly through the shelves, raising ancient dust that had not been disturbed in ages. Finally he found the book he was looking for. He skimmed through the pages, trying his best to be gentle as the book was very fragile. Ancient words in a strange language starred back at him. He kept turning the pages until he found a drawing of a short and dark figure with menacing eyes and raised hands , performing a certain ritual. The trolls. The trolls were the answer. The trolls would help. 2 Likes |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 3:53pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
The king jumped unto his horse riding off with Elsa,as fast as he could, leaving a trail of ice behind. The queen rode close by with Anna. The ice following dem was unusual and a little boy of about the same age as The girls, with a funny looking reindeer with him was amazed. "follow the ice" he said to SVEN, the reindeer who was driving him. Soon they reached an arena full of big stones scattered about. "please, help! its my daughter" said the king with his deep voice ringing through the forest. the stones rolled forth and revealed their "trolly' selves. The little boy who was hiding behind one of such stones was amazed nd he gasped in awe. The troll behind whom he was hiding with his pet hushed him to silence..." shhh, i am trying to listen" He prolly liked the boy and his pet and asked to keep them both. "its the king" announced the trolls. Pabbie who seemed the eldest came forward and touched Elsa. "Born with the power or cursed" He asked. "born" replied the king, dropping to one knee to come atleast more close to the small-statured troll." and they are getting stronger", he added obviously worried sick about what might be the outcome. Pabbie examined Anna who was cuddled in the Queen's arms. " You are lucky it wasnt her heart, for the heart is not easily changed, buh the head can be persuaded" "Do what yu must" commanded the King. With a wave of his short 'trolly' hands, he evacuated the memories of magic from Anna's head, leaving only the fun she shared with Elsa. That way she would rememba all they shared, fun and all, buh not that Elsa had magic. Elsa didnt like that but her father assured her it was for the best. pabbie went on to admonish Elsa that her powers would grow and FEAR would be her enemy, she had to learn to control it. Elsa was terrified, buh the king promised to protect her, teach her to control it, limit her contact with people, including Anna, keep her powers hidden from everyone and reduce the palace staff!" They left, and all that was done, which led to the gates of Arendelle shut for a really long time which seemed like forever. 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by Bosville(m): 6:42pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
Following |
Re: Frozen by tomiobj(m): 8:31pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
D movie is already stale babylolaroy: |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 8:56pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
tomiobj:last i checked, i ddnt call it fresh. Stop being a baby. A man doesnt find faults 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by tomiobj(m): 9:01pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
babylolaroy: By stale I mean I liked d movie too much then abused the movie by watching it 3 times daily for 2 weeks now it's stale to me Don't care if people say m gay. But #frozen was an epic movie Ps. Don't make the same mistake I did if you dont want to hate d movie |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 9:08pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
tomiobj:nice one. i cnt count the numba of times av watched it. however, i havent seen ur contribution. why dnt yu join us ? |
Re: Frozen by tomiobj(m): 9:35pm On Oct 16, 2014 |
babylolaroy:. Sorry. Can't type properly on nl. Tnk it's my phone. After long posts. It takes time for what I type to appear on screen. But I am following d thread |
Re: Frozen by tomiobj(m): 5:27pm On Oct 17, 2014 |
babylolaroy:. Sorry to quote again. But if you like frozen. You should like maleficient. The disney movie made for ds year. Frozen was made last yr |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 5:49am On Oct 20, 2014 |
where's the rest of the story |
Re: Frozen by Royver(m): 11:34pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
[5-Year-Old Anna:] Elsa? [knocks] Do you wanna build a snowman? Come on, let's go and play! I never see you anymore Come out the door It's like you've gone away We used to be best buddies And now we're not I wish you would tell me why! Do you wanna build a snowman? It doesn't have to be a snowman... [8-Year-Old Elsa:] Go away, Anna. [5-Year-Old Anna:] Okay, bye... 4 Years Go By... Elsa's powers grow by the day but her parents keep her hidden for fear of what might happen if she reveals her powers. Even Anna is not allowed to see her and poor Anna doesn't remember why. [9-Year-Old Anna (knocks):] Do you wanna build a snowman? Or ride our bike around the halls? I think some company is overdue I've started talking to The pictures on the walls! (Hang in there, Joan.) It gets a little lonely All these empty rooms Just watching the hours tick by... (tick-tock tick-tock tick-tock tick-tock) Another 6 years go by... The king and queen are killed in an accident at Sea. Now the two princesses are all alone... [15-Year-Old Anna (knocks):] Elsa, please I know you're in there People are asking where you've been They say, "Have courage," and I'm trying to I'm right out here for you Just let me in We only have each other It's just you and me What are we gonna do? Do you wanna build a snowman? [sniff] 3 Likes |
Re: Frozen by Jeanfortune(f): 2:48am On Oct 23, 2014 |
awww! i have not watched this though, but from ur narrations guys, its promising 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 10:53am On Oct 23, 2014 |
more please |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 10:09pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
3 YEARS LATER: ELSA'S CORONATION DAY "welcome to Arendelle" said a lanky man in an oversized coat, to the arriving guests as they trooped in from far nd near. most people had neva seen the gates opened. A lot of people came with happy faces nd excited hearts. "why do i have to wear this"? asked a cute little boy from his mother who was dressing him in a coat. "because the queen has come of age, its coronation day" she replied wth glow in her green eyes. "Thats not my fault", said the boy in a raised tone as if the coat were a punishment he had to endure for making the queen come of age. At another corner, a man with an unmanly blonde curls stood by his cart and a reindeer. "What do yu want sven"? "Give me a snack" said the man answering his own question on behalf of the reindeer. "whats the magic word"? he asked again "please" he replied himself again as would the reindeer. Then he stuffed one carrot in the reindeer's mouth nd stopped him short before he could chew it all. " uh! uh! share" he chastised, and took a bite off the carrot wic was already wholly into sven's mouth. "Arendelle, our most mysterious trade partner" announced another man to no one in particular. He had 2 scary body guards and he was such a tiny man with white hair which flipped off revealing bare skin if he took a bow. "open ur gates so i may explore ur riches", he continued, unconscious that he had said that out loud. in all, different people came for different reasons nd soon the ball room would be bustling with activities like never before. 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 10:21pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
inside her room laid Anna who was still sleeping, snoring and drooling. "princess Anna?" callee a servant outside the door. "huh? yeah?" she answered sleepily, sitting up. Her single strand of ice white hair very conspicous. "sorry to wake you ma'am" the servant apologised. " no no no, you didnt", she lied, yawning." i've been up for hours. Kpom! KPOM!, the servant knocked again when he heard her snoring again. "who is it?" she gasped. "still me, maam, the gates will open soon, time to get ready" " of course" Anna said stretching her dainty frame. "ready for what"? "your sister's conoration ma'am" "my sister's CORNERATION" She repeated still half asleep. she managed to open her eyes now nd right before her was the beautiful green dress she had hung for the occassion. the sight juggled her memory and she sprang up with enthusiasm. " Its coronation day!!". soon she was dressed, running wildly down the hall and breaking into a lovely song to celebrate the occassion of having the doors nd windows opened after a really long time since she could rememba. "The window is open, so's that door I didn't know they did that anymore Who knew we owned eight thousand salad plates? For years I've roamed these empty halls Why have a ballroom with no balls? Finally they're opening up the gates There'll be actual real live people It'll be totally strange But wow, am I so ready for this change! 'Cause for the first time in forever There'll be music, there'll be light For the first time in forever I'll be dancing through the night Don't know if I'm elated or gassy But I'm somewhere in that zone 'Cause for the first time in forever I won't be alone." 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 11:00pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
And in her room, queen Elsa was getting ready for the occassion too. she removed her gloves which she wore every moment of everyday so as to imitate how she would hold the pot and stake for the initiation before the crowd. she sang thus: "Don't let them in, don't let them see Be the good girl you always have to be Conceal, don't feel, put on a show Make one wrong move and everyone will know." But its only for today its agony to wait Tell the guards to open up the gate.... As soon as the gate was opened nd the crowd trooped in, Anna danced out of the palace so happily and while she sang, bumped into a well dressed stranger who was riding on a horse. He seemed princely and he was very courteous. "i'm so sorry, are you hurt"? he asked with concern visible all over his face. " hey uh no, em, no i'm okay" she babbled. He came down from his horse nd helped her up. He introduced himself as PRINCE HANS OF THE SOUTHERN ISLES and she introduced herself as PRINCESS ANNA OF ARENDELLE. He seemed surprised to discover that he just hit the princess and he quickly apologised again looking at her with flirty eyes which made her blush and babble more. They heard the bells and she rushed off saying she had to leave for the occassion. Once inside, The priest crowned Elsa and told her to remove her gloves, pick the stake nd pot and say the initiation vows which she was able to manage just before the stake started freezing. She was formally pronounced QUEEN OF ARENDELLE and everyone moved to the dance floor to make merry. Anna snuck off with prince Hans, whom she met a while earlier and they spoke non stop babbling about this and that together. When he asked if he could say something crazy to her nd she replied that she loved crazy, he had asked her to marry him and she had asked if she could say something even crazier. Once he had said yes, she said Yes to his proposal and they both rushed off back to the dance hall to find the queen so as to tell her about their sudden plan to marry and prolly seek her blessings. For the right reason and the obvious one, The queen wouldnt allow her sister to marry a man she just met having learnt and known nothing about him. she objected and Anna was furious. For what she thought, Elsa had shut her out all her life nd now that she found love with someone else, Elsa wouldnt allow it for her silly reason? no way! they had to settle it immediately. When Anna wouldnt listen, Elsa became angry and commanded that the gate be shut again nd the guests be dismissed. She made to move away from the crowd but Anna grabbed her hand causing one glove to come off exposing her hand. "Give me my glove" Elsa demanded, buh Anna didnt. she only kept on ranting about how she loved and wanted the gate open, and how she couldnt live as she had been. When she wouldnt stop, Elsa shouted at her to shut her up. "Enough!!" she said with a wave of the gloveless hand which caused a spiral heap of ice blades to appear on the floor of the ball room. There was pademonium as everyone murmured and whispered. It was bizzare as no one ever knew the queen had magic or any such power, not even Anna, her sister whose memory of magic had been wiped. Elsa was ashamed and afraid. she rushed out the front door meeting more crowd outside. she went through and in her fear, she froze the beautiful fountain which was situated right amidst the guests. " sorcery, i knew there was something dubious going on here" said the tiny man with 2 scary body guards...." shez a monster, grab her" he shouted. Elsa ran across the ocean which was right ahead nd it froze as she stepped on it, tranformin the water to a rink. soon, summer became winter and snow started falling. The queen ran nd ran until she came to a mountain far from town. there she would live, she thought to herself, ready to unleash her potentials now nd there in the mountains where she would be snow queen nd be not afraid of hiding from her sister, her people nd the world 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 11:48pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
babylolaroy:more please |
Re: Frozen by Royver(m): 1:15am On Oct 24, 2014 |
Dont rush it. I think you should take it scene by scene. If you clump it all together you lose the beauty of the plot. 1 Like |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 8:57am On Oct 24, 2014 |
Royver:i think not. Its not an APPRECIATION of a literary book. its just a narratiin of a good movie. I think ion have to be soooo explicit. besides, i really havent missed out anything important. buh yeah, m gon slow down |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 9:49am On Oct 24, 2014 |
In the palace; Anna announced to everyone that she had to go after Elsa, bring her back, and make ammends, and that for a leader, she left prince Hans in charge. Hans tried to dissuade her from going alone saying it could be dangerous, but Anna thought otherwise. Afterall Elsa was her sister and she wasnt a monster, so how dangerous could she get? "Elsa wouldnt hurt me, shez my sister" she told Hans with confidence and rode off on her horse to bring the ice Queen back to her home. Elsa reached a mountain, the north mountain and decided it was good for her. she unleashed her powers and potential acting like a free bird who was flying outside a cage for the first time. she threw away the other glove, sending it into the air like something that had been a bane for years. Opening her palms, she sent colorful snow sparks into the air, and built a snowman, Olaf which she and Anna built as kids. She built a castle of ice and made a stairway up to it because of its towering and tiring height. she threw away her cloak, her pretty little crown and climbed up her ice stairs assuming the role of a carefree ice queen. she made herself an ice dress and sashayed across the ice-clear floor deciding to stay there all her life, "i'm never going back, The past is in the past" she sang, slamming the back door shut. In the woods; Anna shouted her name severally, trotting through the knee deep snow which had formed since the night before. "Elsa!, its me Anna, your sister who didnt mean to make you freeze summer. I'm sorry its all my fault", she admitted shivering from cold and lack of adequate dressing because she had summer clothes on, before winter appeared as it did. A pack of snow fell, obstructing the horse who disloyally then ditched Anna and ran back to the palace, leaving her to wander alone. she came to a store with a sign post that read :"WANDERING OAKEN TRADING POST.....AND SAUNA". She entered and looked as pathetically cold as she felt. " Have you seen any lady pass here...em, the queen perhaps"? She asked the giant who was the store keeper. " No, the only one crazy enuf to be out here is YOU. He replied just as another man entered the store. He was the guy who had a reindeer, he called Sven. " you and that fellow" The giant store keeper completed seeing then that she wasnt alone. The reindeer master moved forward to where Anna stood and made as if he was going to lean over her. He wore a face cover to protect his nose nd mouth from the extreme cold. she flexed backward towards the table buh ddnt rest on it. " carrots" he said, "huh?", she asked not understanding what he meant by carrots. " behind you" he finished, making sense a bit more than he had made before. " oh yea, sorry", she said stepping aside from the table so he could pick the carrots from the shelf below. He picked a few more things and offered to pay 10pounds for all of it. The giant store keeper insisted that he could have them only for 30. He mentioned something about the north mountain and Anna became interested. " what was it like there, did it seem.....magical?", "yes", he said very abruptly, " now step aside while i deal with this crook here", he said pointing to the seated giant who then rose to his full height making him open his eyes wide. " Vhat dhidh you kal me"? he said in a rotten accent of God knows where. He picked the reindeer master up and threw him out of his store and unto the snow. " bye bye" said the giant waving lovingly at him as if he ddnt just throw him away like paper. The guy picked himself up and saw a barn just ahead. He would sleep there for the night, with his SVEN. He played a few note on his guitar and was going to close his eyes for the night when Anna barged in. " its just you" he sighed, relieved that it wasnt prolly someone wu would send him out of the barn. " Take me to the north mountain please", Anna pleaded. " i dont take people places", he eyed her, making to sleep again. " let me rephrase that" said Anna puffing up her chest in a princess-like way. she threw a bag at him which consisted of the things he wanted to buy from the store." Take me to the north mountain!", she commanded with authority. He looked into the bag and was pleased except that she didnt buy carrots. "We leave at dawn," he announced. she threw the carrots at him and commanded again " we leave NOW" She said emphasising that she meant immediately. She wasnt the bossy type buh it worked and they set off, heading for the mountain. They would bring back summer, they just must. |
Re: Frozen by Jeanfortune(f): 10:00am On Oct 24, 2014 |
more please... |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 8:32pm On Oct 28, 2014 |
They got on his sled deriven by Sven, the reindeer. Anna laid her feet on the sled as if it were some foot rest. "woooh oh oh! get ur feet off that" kristoff screamed at her, wiping the place where her feet had been as soon as she removed her leg therefrom." seriously, were yu raised in a barn?" "no, i was raised in a castle" she said, wiping a drop of snow off her face. " i see" he replied sarcastically and continued more seriously. " so what made the queen go all ice crazy" "it was my fault" said Anna sounding apologetic. "she always wore these gloves, like all the time, and i thought maybe she had a thing about dirt. she shouldav just told me about it" "what happened" asked kristoff , now interested " i got engaged to this guy i just met dat day and she got mad, nd i got mad and she tried to walk away and i grabbed her glove...." "wait, hang on!, you mean to tell me that You got engaged to someone you only just met That DAY?" he asked twisting his lips to emphasise how he thought she must be stupid if it wasnt a joke. " yes, so the queen didnt...." she began again, before he cut her off impatiently.. "woah! so you mean you only just met him and you wanted to marry him? " yes...so pay attention" she commanded, so he would hear her out. "didnt ur parents ever warn you abt strangers?" "yes, they did", she replied sheepishly moving away from him as if they havent been on the same sled. " but Hans is not a stranger"! "oh yea?". so whats his last name" she scoffed. " ....of the southern isles" "best friend's name" "probably John" "Eye colour" "dreamy" "foot size" "foot size doesnt matter as long as its true love" "have you even had a meal with him yet? what if you hate the way he picks his nose?" " picks his nose?" she exclaimed, clearly surprised as to why anybody wud do that. "....and eats it" he completed to give the effect of disgust to the habit. " excuse me sir! hez a prince!. she snapped opening her eyes wide to their limit. " All men do it" kristoff shrugged, with a devilish smile. "ewwww....look...., " she sniffed. "it doesnt matter as long as its true love!" |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 8:43pm On Oct 28, 2014 |
" it doesnt sound like true love", observed kristoff " are yu some sort of love expert?" she asked him " no, buh i have friends who are" " you do? #smilez. i dont buy that" " stop talking" no, no, no..really. i'd like to meet these your friends who.... " no, i mean it", he said covering her mouth with his big sweater-covered hand...."shhhhh!" |
Re: Frozen by Jeanfortune(f): 11:42am On Oct 29, 2014 |
pls continue... |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 5:14pm On Oct 29, 2014 |
watched it yesterday,totally awesome |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 5:36pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
mistytohcute:good job. then you should totally help out here by adding yours. one thing i like about the movie is the idea of set free by true love. Everyone wudav started thinking it wud be a kiss, as usual in disney cartoon.. |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 8:15pm On Oct 30, 2014 |
babylolaroy:yeah,by an act of true love,i was also expecting a kiss you should check out maleficient,totally awesome |
Re: Frozen by babylolaroy(f): 3:41am On Dec 02, 2014 |
kai! just as i left it. i was expecting to log in today and find the story completed by a good narrator or narrators. i was sooooo busy with school things. unilorin resumption no be shere shere. buh as it is, the story don too long. interest go don wane, so we'll just skip it. yeah? |
Re: Frozen by Nobody: 8:13am On Dec 02, 2014 |
babylolaroy:someone might still be interested |
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