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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by abisco08: 6:24am On Oct 23, 2014 |
so glad i cud catch up with u guys....wat gonna happen 2 my lovly clement... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:02am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Update coming up this morning. Its likely we get up to three before 12noon. I sight everyone of you, kingphilip, jeanfortune, Abisco08, Emmykul4luv, tecno4life, Fatalveli, Boladex1, Eniqurl, mariamferanmi and others. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:05am On Oct 23, 2014 |
chideeva, d4real890, sconp, thoxyno.... You guys should endeavour to drop your comments. They go a long way in encouraging the writer. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:38am On Oct 23, 2014 |
--continuation-- The van drove into the Khal corp headquarters with about ten policemen lying in the second compartment of the van. The first compartment(the driver's seat) was demacated with an iron sheet with a little opening which allows fresh air. "Salam aleikun." Someone greeted the driver in arabic. "Its me Deric." The driver replied. The two men conversed in English. "Did you get to meet Ayo?" The man asked. "No, but he sent his greetings." The driver replied. "Ok good. Maleek is waiting for you." The man at the gate said. The driver ignited the car and drove deeper into the compound. A few seconds later, he opened the car door and made to get out. "Where do you think you are going?" Sylvester asked through the openig between the two compartment. "The boss wants to see me." He replied. "Whatever. Which is the safest way here?" Sylvester asked further. "I don't know. I am employed as a driver and all I do is drive in and drive out. I don't move around." He replied angrily. "You are raising your voice man. Keep it low." Sylvester cautioned. "Am not keeping my voice down. I'll alert everyone in this compound that the cops are here. I agreed to drive you guys down here because I know if I refuse, you'll kill me and I value my life very much. And do you think if I walk in there I won't raise and alarm?" The driver asked. "You know what? I'll get you killed now." Sylvester said as he stabbed the driver with a kitchen knife through the opening of the demarcation. "Smith ,you come with me. We'll do a quick survey of this compound. Then we get back to you guys for action." Sylvester said opening the back door and jumping out of the van, Smith followed suit and they both walked into the garage where tens of cars were parked and about five vans were parked. "Hey guys, you all come out in twos and threes, get into the vans in the garrage and await the next command." Sylvester said through the communication device. The two men proceeded towards a door that stood at the north of the garrage just when a redlight shone brightly on the two men. Then the alarm started blaring loudly. "We've been discovered. We can't face these men. Lets get out of here as fast as we could. Sylvester and Smith ran outside the garage and Smith quickly hopped behind the wheel of the car and Sylvester beside him. Smith who sat uncomfortably on the dead body of the driver who brought them powered the car and in one swift moment he made a U-turn and was directly facing the front gate. Sylvester from his seat was shooting the gunmen manning the gate. And from his knowledge of targetting, he was able to drop the three men who stood before the gate, while Smith sped towards the gate and slammed the van on the gate. Forcefully, the gate gave way and the van flew outside the compound in full speed. Sylvester looked at Smith in a bid to commend him but was suprised to see blood all over the steering wheel. The force with which the car hit the gate and coupled with the fact that he wasn't sitting comfortably made him hit his head on the steering wheel. "Smith, can you hear me?" Sylvester asked. He realised the car was heading toward a nearby oak tree and he can't afford to let that happen. In three quick pull ups, he brought the car to a halt with the help of the hand brake. "Come on guys, lets get out of here. Smith is unlikely to make it out of here alive." Sylvester said opening the door and he ran deeper into the bush, his boys followed suit and the terrorist gave them a hot chase. Even though he had no idea of where the bush path will lead him but he knew it has to lead to somewhere safe, because running through the untarred road which connects the hideout with the main road is dangerous. He knew running through the road in which they had come is a death sentence because of an ambush that lay ahead and the basecamp that provide first hand cover to the building. He knew there can't be anything of such in a forest as thick as this but he won't loose his guard. He was running with all his might, then he glanced back to see his his men are still behind him. They had drastically reduced to four. If only he would get out of this alive, he'll resign and pursue a career in music. END OF CHAPTER SIX 3 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 9:42am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Hmmmmm hope Sylvester is not gonna complicate issues here BTW nice one d9ty7 awaiting the two others within the nxt two hrs |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by almacherish(f): 9:43am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Wia's clem ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by emmabest2000(m): 9:56am On Oct 23, 2014 |
kingphilip:Sylvester is a mean dude , Keep the updates flowing .... 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 10:34am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Pls is kaymejay here,if yes kindly raise up your hand. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 11:04am On Oct 23, 2014 |
emmabest2000:no mind am make I c hw him wan take enter |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 11:15am On Oct 23, 2014 |
wherez Clement bayii ?? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by mariamferanmi(f): 12:50pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Pls D9ty7 let sylvester make it out alive of dat place ooo, he's clement only man left!! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 2:39pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
mariamferanmi:only man ke ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 3:24pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Still following....... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:05pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
CHAPTER SEVEN Rachel was in the kitchen assisting the Patrick's housemaid. "Get me the bottle of dry pepper." Rachel said to the old lady. The lady in her mid forties opened a shelf hung on the wall and brought out a bottle of dried red pepper. "Here ma." The lady, Onome replied. "Stop calling me ma. Aunty Onome. I am your kid sister." Rachel corrected. "I know you are my kid sister. Even our last born is older than you but circumstances can make one bow for one's son." Onome replied. Rachel added a little pepper to the egg she was frying then turned to face Onome. "Circumstances like? please tell me more." Rachel said pleadingly. Even though she is in her father-in-law's residence on a visiting purpose. She enjoyed chatting with Onome anytime she came visiting and Onome on the other hand is always looking forward to her visit. Rachel got to know more about Onome after she got married to Clement. The newly wedded couple spent a week at Cheif Obi Patrick's residence before they moved into their own apartment which at the time of the wedding was still under construction, interior fitting to be precise. "Look at you now, you are married to Clement, Chief Pat son. a rich and caring husband." Onome began. "How sure are you that he is caring?" Rachel asked. Onome smiled. "I have been working with the Patricks for over a decade now and I know a lot about each and every member of the family. Chief is a no nonsense man, he hates negligence and doesn't tolerate sluggishness. Kelvin is that mean looking guy who will respond to your greeting once in a month. Clement is that man who'll walk into the kitchen early in the morning to say hello to me, a mere cook." Onome explained. Rachel smiled happily. She is truly lucky to have this man. "I am a cook here and I amount to nothing. I am only placed on the high when they(the patrick) are hungry. Anything aside that, no one cares." Onome continued. Rachel decided to keep quiet and listen to Onome so that she won't judge her inlaws too quickly. "You are happily married, you hausband cares for you, you live in affluence, confortability is the order of the day. You have a car, you'll soon put to bed by the special grace of God. Everything seems to be working for you and God seems to be on your side." Onome said and swallowed hard. Rachel decided to check what she put on fire and she turned the egg being fried. "I am married too but lost my husband just three months after our marriage. I was pregnant when he died and I delivered a set of twin, a boy and a girl. What am trying to say is, your father-in-law pays my salary and you are his daughter-in-law and also his daughter. Authomatically you are my employee." Onome said conclusively. Rachel kept quiet, looking at the old lady before her with pity. As hot tears rolled down Onome's cheeks. "You have every reason to be thankful to God, at least you are alive and when there is life, there is hope. Your children are your hope. Where are they now?" Rachel asked. "The two of them are with my mother in our hometown. They are in secondary school now, ss2 to be precise." Onome replied. "They are the reason why you should always thank God...." Just then Chief Obi Patrick walked into the living room. "Anybody home?" The old man asked as he sat down on the nearest sofa. Onome quickly ran out of the kitchen to welcome her boss. "Welcome sir." Onome greeted kneeling down from a distance. "Hello." Chief Patrick replied with indifference. "Take this suitcase into my study." He said handling a suitcase to her. she took it and made to walk out of the living room. Just then a heavilly pregnant Rachel walked into the living room. "Welcome daddy." She greeted kneeling down too but her knees were not touching the ground because of her condition. "Hey, sweetheart. Come right here." Chief Patrick said opening his arms for a hug. Rachel walked towards his and hugged him on the seat. "I learnt you had a shock last night. Hope you are good now?" "Yes. Am much better." Chief Patrick smiled happily. There is this special affection he has for her, the reason to which he couldn't fathom. Maybe because he has no daughter. Or so he thought. "Hey, you come back here." He said beckoning to Onome. Onome descended the stairs and walked towards her long term employer. "Give the suitcase to her. Let her take it to my study. Its been a while we talked about politics." Onome handed the suitcase to Rachel who took it and walked towards the flight of stairs. Just then Chief Obi patrick's phone rang. "Hello." He said on picking the call. "Yes, I am his father. Any problem?" "What!?" He exclaimed. --to be continued-- 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 4:11pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
d way dem clement and slyvester dy yanka pepo dy surprise me abi dem be *monk ![]() D9ty u dy try walahi |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 4:44pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
--continuation-- He has been running for twenty minutes and his pursuers don't look like giving up yet. They kept multiplying as he covered more distances. This time, he had left the forest and was now runnig on an untarred road. A road which seemed to have been abandoned. Even though it had beach sand, there was no footpath of traces of a vehicle passing through the road. Where the road leads to, he didn't know. It not as if he was taking note of his surroundings, he was deep in the spirit of running and he was just imagining things. Just when he was about giving up, he was a group of uniformed me at different angles ahead. He knew they are his God sent messiah. He ran into their midst and his pursuers left it rather too late as they followed him, just when they wanted to escape, the uniformed men started firing Sylvester's pursuers while Sylvester kept on shouting. "I am a policeman, they are terrorists." There was an open gun fire between the two sides and one of the uniformed men took Sylvester away from the scene. The gun battle continued for minutes as more gun men kept emerging from where Sylvester had come and the uniformed men in their little number did justice to them like they had been waiting for them all day. Five minutes later, the gun battle had died down and the uniformed men were checking the casualties of the battle. One uniformed man was killed while about eleven terrorists were killed. "Get me that man who called himself a policeman." The leader of the uniformed men said. Sylvester was fetched from his hiding place. And looking at the badges on one of the men's uniform. He saw boldly written 'NIGERIA CUSTOM SERVICE.' "Thank Jah, I am in safe hands." He thought as he was brought before the leader of the patrol team. The two men conversed for a few minutes, and Sylvester explained how everything went down. "Are you sure, the rest of your team are dead?" The custom leader asked. "I am not so sure. But during the course of my running, I discovered that either one by one or at the same time, they had disappeared. Then I came to the conclusion that they had been killed." Sylvester replied. "Alright. But the problem now is that, you'll be here with us till the next patrol arrives, then you can be transported back into town." The patrol leader said. "No problem." Sylvester replied. Sylvester spent two hours with the custom officials, during whcih he saw the beauty of the job. How they seized good being transported into Nigeria illegally. Even though, they(the custom officers) have been regarded as one of the most corrupt agencies in Nigeria after the police force and the phcn. He knew the allegation were all lies in a bid to let the government scrap off the custom service. So many goods were siezed, contrabands such as indian hemp and other materials that are harzadous to health. Even legal product were siezed, simply because they were being imported illegally. The action that stole the show was when a convoy of cars, numbering up to fifteen drove into the country. The speed at which the cars moved could make an hypertensive patient suffer in shock. A custome vehicle was hot on their chase and immediately the vehicles drive into Nigeria, the occupants of the car began to shoot sporadically at the custom officials manning the boarder into Nigeria from Cotonou, Republic of Benin. The only thing that amazed Sylvester was that despite the sporadic shooting, none of the custom officers was hit. Immediately the shooting stopped, the custom officers filed into their vehicle and leaving two men behind, they drove in the direction which the smugglers went. Therefore, making it, two custom teams agains fifteen cars. Sylvester stood behind with the two officers and he was praying within him that no other smuggling team should come passing by or else, they'll be killed with ease. --to be continued-- 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:12pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Keep your comments coming guys. I have fufilled my promise about dropping three updates today. Fufill your own side of the contract by dropping your comments. We could get more update before 12am. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:24pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
D9ty7:Gr8 one Durodola, don't dull oh kip it up. Duro, I fink its high time you start publishing your works, they are 2 gr8 2 be wasted na ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:35pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Publishing you said? I have never thought of that sincerly. Am just writing because I love writing. tecno4life: 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:39pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
D9ty7:hmmmmm.........anyway it's ur choice ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 5:50pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
D9ty7................you keep amazing me with each update................God bless you |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:14pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Adeola, you keep amazing me with your comments. God bless you too.[quote author=adewealth027 post=27391218]D9ty7................you keep amazing me with each update................God bless you[/quote] |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Hameenat94(f): 6:52pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Wonderful update as usual... So Habeeb z a mole? No one z 2 b trusted @ll |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by manuel80(m): 7:11pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Hameenat94:Lyk seriously..bt I want clement to discover kelvin himself |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 8:11pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Short of fuel right now |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:32pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Thank you ma'am. Hameenat94:I swear my sister, no one is to be trusted. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:34pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Are you in a hurry? My brother, don't be. We still have a long way to go. manuel80: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:35pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Short of fuel ke? Abeg o Emmykul4love: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Hameenat94(f): 8:54pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
manuel80:u wnt him 2 experience 4 @ brk @ once... His dad, sis, wife nd bro? I pity d guy |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Hameenat94(f): 8:56pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
D9ty7:uwc bro... Ba nu so, ma be yan so(kid ur secrets 2 urself nd nt wit humans) apply here |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:03pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
You sabi speak yoruba? I bin think sey u're from the north. Katsina to be precise. lol Hameenat94: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 10:16pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Ehhhhhhh this is hotter than fire great job D9ty7 |
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