D9ty7: D9ty7 is pleased to announce the start of a new story for the last four months of the year.
So I call on all Nairaland users, my fans, my bosses in the story writing industry to read and correct my mistakes.

LogoDWhiz: D9ty7, keep it up.

U vex me gan o

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LogoDWhiz:

U just dey ignore me.. U no even invite me for this thread.

Are u on whatsapp?

D9ty7: sorry bro. Somethings actually came up.

D9ty7: I appreciate your coming here and I take this as a challenge. I'll try my best in making you forget about the man Chase.But wait o! Aren't you that lady who won the best writer for the month of August?

PrinceAdepoju: She no be lady oo, boss.
She be woman--happily married!

And yes, she is!!

D9ty7: My sincere apology Audrey Timms. I never knew you are married.......

D9ty7: PROLOGUE
TIME: 11:45AM
VENUE: CHIEF OBI PATRICK'S MANSION.

A yellow volkswagen drove into the compound at a very top speed of what could be described as fast and furious kind of speed. The gateman picked race (took to his heels/made a fast getaway) and ran into his gatepost for safety. A youngman (young man *notice the space*) in his late twenties came out dressed in a white t-shirt and black jean trouser and a black vickers shoe with a Rayban sunshade (dressed in a white T-shirt, a pair of black jeans trousers, a pair of black Vickers shoes, and covering his eyes was another pair of sunshades).

FULL NAME: KELVIN PATRICK
AGE: 28
GENDER: MALE
HEIGHT: 6FT 5
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN/TERRORIST
HOBBIES: PLAYING GOLF & KILLING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: CZ-97B; 45ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.


TIME: 12PM
VENUE: A CRIME SCENE AT ALLEN AVENUE.

A tall handsome youngman was talking to a younglady in a police uniform. They seem (seemed) to be in a crime scene, a blue mercedez benz was parked at the side of the road and the windscreen has (had) been shattered as a result of a gunshot at it. The occupant of the car gave up the ghost few minutes ago (earlier) when the policemen arrived with the medical team. (You should describe the victim in detail. Who was he? A young man or an old one? Was he behind the wheel or at the back seat? Was he driving when he was killed or the vehicle was already at rest? Where was he shot? Head or anus? Describe the weather too.)

"Clara, get me my phone." he said to the lady.

"Yes sir." The lady replied as she handed a mobile phone to her (I'm sure you meant 'him').

The man took the phone and left the scene to a more secluded area.

"Inspector Clement (kindly insert a comma here) sir." the man said.

"Hello Clement. What have you got on the murder?" The reciever (recipient) asked.

"Its a blue mercedez benz (It's a blue Mercedez Benz) belonging to one Mr Kingsley. As far as I can tell you, the man is dead and every possible measure has be taken to nab the perpetrator." Clement explained.

"Get you report forwarded to area F-command for review after which you start (This is quite confusing; do you mean 'as soon as you commence/end the investigation'?) the investigation." The man at the other end said.

"Yes sir."

"Feed me more after the review."

And the line went dead.

FULL NAME: CLEMENT PATRICK
AGE: 30
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: POLICEMAN
HEIGHT: 6FT
HOBBIES: READING & MEETING PEOPLE.
MARITAL STATUS: MARRIED.


TIME: 12:50PM
VENUE: LOVERS MIX GUEST HOUSE

Sitting in a big spacious room was a group of people numbering up to eight (eight people) including their leader who had her back turned to the others.

"Vicky (insert a comma here) seriously we (we seriously) need to carry out our plans and killings as from now without leaving trace or lead." A huge black complexioned (dark-complexioned) dude said.

A (use the definite article 'The') lady who turned her back to the others sitting down in the private room turned to face them.

"Its (It's) not about killing without trace, its about killing everybody involved (insert a semicolon here) and mind you, no one recieves (receives) any call except on my order. Okay?"

"Yes ma'am." They all chorused.

FULL NAME: VICTORIA VICKY
AGE: 25
GENDER: FEMALE
HEIGHT: 5ft 5inches
OCCUPATION: HIRED ASSASIN
HOBBIES: SEX & DANCING
FAVOURITE WEAPON: BARETTA (I think it should be 'Beretta') CHEETAH; 32ACP
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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FULL NAME: OSELU SANDRA
AGE: 26
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: MODELLING
HOBBIES: TAKING PICTURES & MEETING PEOPLE
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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FULL NAME: ABDUL MALEEK
AGE: 39
GENDER: MALE
OCCUPATION: TERRORIST
HOBBIES: NIL
MARITAL STATUS: WIDOWER.
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FULL NAME: JANET
AGE: 21
GENDER: FEMALE
OCCUPATION: HOUSEMAID
HOBBIES: BLACKMAILING
MARITAL STATUS: SINGLE.
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LarrySun: Rough Review.

AudreyTimms:
LarrySun, yet you say you aren't a professional editor!