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The Day The Clouds Turned Red (crime Story) / 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] / All In A Circle...(a Crime Story)-- The Completion (2) (3) (4)
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 12:20pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Update in a bit abi cuz ur viewinq alrdy. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:21pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
lol. Eniqurl: I hope itz minutes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:22pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Why are you like this gan sef? Eniqurl: Update in a bit abi cuz ur viewinq alrdy. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 12:29pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Why are you like this gan sef?U hve no choice dn tu accept me d wae i am oh, sha update cuz dahz d mst important thing. Thanks in advance. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 1:57pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Eniqurl: Splendid, urz ?Chisos in my presence |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:03pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Hey guys, more updates to come later. Lets say in three hours time, when I must have charged and eaten..... Kip your comments and criticisms coming. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:19pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Hey guys, more updates to come later. Lets say in three hours time, when I must have charged and eaten.....bros cum update oo ...*nd no 4gt 2 cary dt fud along wit u o* winks |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:20pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- TIME: 8:30AM VENUE: OPPOSITE THE ENGINEERING DEPARTMENT BUILDING. __________________________________________ A female body was lying by the tarred road that linked the school gate to the other parts of the university. Tens of students were standing by the dead body with pity. Traces of blood were visible from her pink top and black jean trouser. "I know this girl now." A guy said. "Shut up jor. Which girl do you know? You just like setting pace in your family sha. Don't tell me you want to be the first person to be arrested by the police in your family." The girl beside him cut him short. "She was the one who screamed at Desmond's party when she saw a dead body killed by some cultists." The guy said. "I say shut up. Were you there when the cultist killed the girl. How sure are you that the girl was killed by the cultist? Kunle, you are still in 200L for crying out loud, you are two years away from becoming a graduate. Don't spend that two years in prison o. Lets go." The girl said holding him by the hand and dragging him away from the scene. "I saw the guy who killed the girl at the party....." "Kunle! Are you mad?" She asked. "Okay o. I've heard you." He said giving up. The two of them continued walking towards the school gate leaving other onlookers and sympathisers behind. Just then a group of four girl ran to the scene wailing. "Oh my God! Daaaaaaayyyyyooooo!" Chioma screamed immediately she got to where Dayo's dead body laid. She threw herself to the ground and laid beside her wailing. The other three joined. "Dayo! Please don't leave us now. We are three weeks away from our last paper. Dayo please. We've gone far enough for you to die now. Dayoooo." Tola cried. The third girl, Dolapo just stood still trying to relate the scene before her. "Noooooooooooooooo!" Dolapo screamed and fainted. Everyone left what they were doing and ran to Dolapo's aid. The reason behind Dolapo's reaction was not far fetched. All her life, she has always known pain, suffering and emotional distress. At the age of sixteen she lost both her parent at gunpoint when some gunmen attacked their home one night. Few months later, her father's family members sent her out of the house accussing her of witchcraft and she had nowhere else to go except Dayo's house, being her bestfriend. Dayo's parent accepted her like their own daughter and treated her just the way her late parents used to treat her. They both gained admission the same time, all financed by her foster parents(Dayo's parents). How will her life be now that her friend whom she refer to as her sister is dead. Dayo is the only child of her parents who at this stage are waiting to see Dayo graduate and get married to her long term boyfriend who works in an oil producing company. When she was eventually revived, she started her own version of wailing. "Dayo! wait for me, I must die with you. What's the essence of life without you? What does the future hold for me. Dayyyyoooooo! Nooooooooo." She screamed and sympathisers tried to pacify her including her two friends who were previously wailing too. Just then the school's security convoy drove to the scene and students fled for their lives. "Move back all of you." A man in their usual navy blue uniform barked at the students. Chioma succeeded in carrying her small statured friend, Dolapo away from the scene. Few minutes later, the men of the Nigeria's police force arrived with an ambulance. "Welcome Inspectore Clement." The leader of the school's security team said immediately Clement got down from his own car with Mike. "When did this happen?" Clement asked. "I guess it happened overnight." The man replied. "Wait o! Is this not the girl that came to give us some helpful information concerning her friend, Hadiza's death?" Clement asked no one in particular. "She was the one sir." Mike replied. Clement kept quiet for a few seconds looking into space. He inhaled deeply just then he realised he's been shedding tears. --to be continued-- 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by princesssusan(f): 7:43pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Chai! Diz tragedy too much o feeln dolapo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:50pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
God will definitely intervene my sister. princesssusan: Chai! Diz tragedy too much o feeln dolapo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:51pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
@Eniqurl: I don update o. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by princesssusan(f): 7:53pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: God will definitely intervene my sister.Amen o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:05pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Expect more updates between the hours of 9 and 10.... But before then, let your comments and criticism pour in, they(your comments) are always the driving force that ginger me to update. 2 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 9:39pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: @Eniqurl: I don update o.Nice update...ah pity Dolapo oh. chai ! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 9:40pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Psst 9 alrdy, m expectinq it by 10 oh |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 9:42pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
tecno4life:Hve bin lukinq for u nah. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:43pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- TIME: 9:05AM VENUE: OPPOSITE THE ENGINEERING DEPARTMENT BUILDING. _________________________________ Gradually, the crowds started dispersing after the policemen had successfully transfered Dayo's corpse to the school's teaching hospital. "Chioma, what is there for me to do in this life? Chioma answer me nau." Dolapo wailed as the three friends were trekking back to their hostel. "Dolapo, you have to be strong. Afterall, Dayo is our friend to but our wailing won't bring her back. I know how close you two are and the relationship that you've built but God knows the best and I know whosoever that did this won't go unpunished." Chioma replied in a shaky voice as she tried to hold back the tears that threatened to spill. Just then a cream couloured Toyota Camry parked beside them. "Hello ladies." Inspector Clement greeted. "Hello." Chioma replied rudely. "I understand what just happened to you guys but I think I can be of help in a situation like this. Let me give you a ride back to your hostel." Clement offered. "We appreciate your kind gesture, but our hostel is only a stone throw from here." Chioma replied. "If that is the case lets go there together. Am the officer in charge of your late friends' case." Clement introduced officially. "No problems." Chioma replied still holding Dolapo firmly like she'll fall if left to walk on her own. That moment Chioma is her pillar of support, how enemies become friends during trying periods. The two of them never seem to agree on the same thing but the friendship cord is still there waxing. +++++Inside their room+++++ Chioma offered Clement a seat just outside their room very close to the door on the corridor. "Am sorry my friends won't be able to talk to you. We are all not feeling too well, am forcing myself to talk to you." Chioma said as soon as she sat down opposite their guest. "Tell me the things I need to know about Dayo." Clement requested. "She was my friend and we've been living together from the time we gained admission. Everyone of us here met while we were in the secondary school. Late Hadiza has lived all her life here in the south-west even though she is from the north, I met her when I came for holidays in my aunty who live in Lagos. I had my holiday lesson in her school. Dolapo, Tolani and the late Oladayo all attended the same secondary school. And the two schools are neighbours." Chioma replied. Clement jotted somethings down. "Tell me, when was the last time you girls had a misunderstanding?" "We have misunderstandings alot but it is bound to happen between friends. We can't reason alike you know?" She paused. Clement nodded urging her to continue. "The last misunderstanding we had was on the day whe Hadiza was killed. Hadiza accused Tola of misplacing her eye pencil. Girl's fight sha. You understand what I mean, don't you?" Clement nodded. "No matter the misunderstanding, the last thing on our minds is getting one another killed. We don't have such minds." Chioma added. "I didn't say that. Do you have a boyfriend?" Clement asked. "Yes, I do." She replied. "What about Hadiza and Dayo?" He asked. "Dayo is engaged to a guy who works in an oil company, he do visit her here when he is in town." "What's his name?" Clement asked. "Emmanuel." She replied. "What of Hadiza?" He asked. Just then his phone vibrated. It was a text message from Sergeatn Mike. It reads, Sir, with the help of the school security, I was able to nab the guy whon Dayo said took Hadiza outside before she found her dead. He is our number one suspect. We need you here asap! Clement smiled. "I gotta run now. I'll be back later." Clement said standing up. "See you later then." Chioma replied. "Your number please, so I can tell you when I'll be coming." He requested. Chioma typed her number on his cell phone. "My regards to Dolapo and Tolani. You girls have to be strong." With this he left hurriedly. END OF CHAPTER ONE 8 Likes 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by talk2riel: 9:48pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7:Sympathisers |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by talk2riel: 9:50pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Chioma replied in a shaky as she tried to hold back the tears that threatened to spill. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 9:55pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Oya mre nah dz one z too short oh buh thnku for kipinq ur promise. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:18pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Hey guys, tell me what you think now that we are successfully through with Chapter 1. Chapter 2 starts tomorrow morning. @Eniqurl and others: The last update is now lengthier than what you saw last. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by jummy604: 10:43pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
I pity dayo o.i wonder who is causing dis commotion.this story is going to b more dan wat i thought |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:46pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
@Audrey Timms: Am yet to see you here today. @Seunviju: Where you dey? @Vibra: You are reading and running away. Won't you comment? @Everyone who will view this thread before I update tommorrow morning: As you read comment, as you notice, point out. I'll only get better. 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:03pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
*Am still in shock* Dayo please don't sleep yet,help unravel this mystery |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:05pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Lol.... Vibra: *Am still in shock* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:10pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
A piece of advice to my wonderful readers. Please don't grow to like any of th characters in this story. You know why? They can die anytime. The story is not as bloody as you think. But expect the unexpected. I will introduce some new characters to you in Chapter 2. You'll get to know Inspector Clement's wife, know more about our model, Sandra Oselu, know more about Barrister Ben(Sandra's lawyer) and their significance. Including some new characters. In AudreyTimms' voice; "so many twists and turns." 4 Likes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:16pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
@d9ty7: Why Dayo go die naw? That's by the way. I am here for one reason. Yeah. You guessed right. The voting stuff. D9ty7 is a few votes away from being crowned the best writer of the month. Your votes count, so do cast your votes now. Follow this link and type; "I vote d9ty7" and that's it. https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17. Hope to see your votes when next I check. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:26pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
I know you will all be wondering what my problem is with this best writer stuff. The reason is not far fetched. -D9ty7 is my very good friend, not an e-friend o. We started writing at the same time but now he has overtaken me because I am yet to post any of my stories here except one that I posted and stopped. To me, he deserves to win the award this month because, so far he's been doing well. Regular updates, wonderful stories, the one that just finished and this new one. Even if he won't win let him see your votes. The most suprising thing is that, the most active readers here are yet to vote for him. If he sees your votes, he will know he is loved on his own thread and not somewhere else. You are asking if he'll give me out of the prize. Yes he will. I will be able to recharge my phone and start posting my stories too. lol. Please vote for this guy. https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17. 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:27pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
I hope by the time I come back tomorrow morning I will see like 10 new votes for d9ty7. As soon as you comment here, go to the voting thread and cast your vote. 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:35pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
tbabstobadt jeanfortune weezil coonax anasbeaut wizkris Teespice Epathra hadduni Supdybaby lekinz Kingzpen Marytess itsme4u kingphilip. Are you a lover of Crime- Romance- Thriller stories? Try your hands on this and am sure you won't regret doing so. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Gracy295(f): 11:44pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
As a wonderful follwer of this story. Do you know there is a club established by me and some other great followers like you that is all about d9ty7 and his stories. Do you care to know more about d9ty7? Come into the thread and ask questions. In the thread we get first hand news about d9ty7's plans. The more we are commenting on this thread, the more we should try and participate in the discussions in the club and lets not forget to cast our votes for d9ty7 in the ongoing voting for the writer of the month. This is the link to the thread. https://www.nairaland.com/1855506/d9ty7stories-fanclub.... Signed: Gracy295, the president and ThaRuthlxx, the PRO. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Gracy295(f): 11:45pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
As a wonderful follwer of this story. Do you know there is a club established by me and some other great followers like you that is all about d9ty7 and his stories. Do you care to know more about d9ty7? Come into the thread and ask questions. In the thread we get first hand news about d9ty7's plans. The more we are commenting on this thread, the more we should try and participate in the discussions in the club and lets not forget to cast our votes for d9ty7 in the ongoing voting for the writer of the month. This is the link to the thread. https://www.nairaland.com/1855506/d9ty7stories-fanclub.... Signed: Gracy295, the president and ThaRuthlxx7, the PRO. |
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