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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:35am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Am sorry guys for not updating like I promised to yesterday. @Onemansquad, Eniqurl, Mimisboygreat, trendiitee, Zainharb. I'll make it up to you guys today. As soon as if finished charging my phone. Hope y'all slept well? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 7:39am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Good morning guys, how you doing? The month is gradually going to an end and it will be very bad of us if d9ty7 losses again this month. Lets vote him as our writer of the month because he's been doing well so far this month. If you know you are enjoying this story go in here https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17 and vote for d9ty7. Just type I vote d9ty7..... Hope to see your votes when next I check. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Mimisboygreat: 8:09am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Am sorry guys for not updating like I promised to yesterday.yes boss!! Hope u slept well too? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Mimisboygreat: 8:16am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Eniqurl: Abi oh itz 12:02 alrdy nahhw was ur nyt dear? 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:26am On Sep 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Dayo walked out of the hall and got outside in search of her friend, Hadiza. She searched franctically for her friend but couldn't find her, just when she wanted to dial her number she saw a body lying in between two cars. Curiosity got the better of her and she walked in the direction of the body. "Oh! my God." She exclaimed as she saw the body, a girl in a pool of blood. "Hadiza! somebody help..... Help." She screamed at the top of her voice. Her voice grew so loud that despite the loud music blaring inside the hall, people still managed to help. Hundreds of students trooped out and went to check the reason for the screams. What they saw put many away and they took to their heels while a few who are brave enough put a call through to the police but they didn't wait for the arrival of the police because they knew they'll surely pay a price which is chilling in the police cell for at least twenty four hours. That was all Dayo saw before she passed out and was rushed to the hospital by her friends before the arrival of the police. +++Back in their hostel+++ Chioma was standing near the window tears in her eyes just like everyone else in the room. They've been mourning the death of their friend, Hadiza. An easy going girl who hardly talked, she doesn't talk during lectures, she had no friend in her department neither an enemy. She was not the shy type but she was an introvert. She only talked when she is around her friends. "Seriously, am going home." Chioma announced. Everyone has been minding their business and silence has taken over the room until Chioma broke the silence. "Going home? To do what?" Tola asked. "Don't you know the school is no longer safe for any of us. Let us all leave the school for a while and let the police find whoever that is responsible for Hadiz death. But..." Chioma was saying when she broke down in tears. "I agree with you. But its late already. Early tomorrow morning we'll all leave and attend lectures from home till the time of our exams." Tola replied. Just then Dayo's phone rang. Everyone's attention turned to her. "Hello please who is this? Yes it me Oladayo." She said on picking the call. She dropped the call after three minutes. "The CSO(Chief Security Officer) wants to see me in his office now." Dayo announced. "Its almost 8pm." Chioma said. "Lemme go quickly. I'll be back before nine." She replied as she wore her flip flop slippers and walked out of the room. "Dayo wait. We'll all go with you." Tola said. "Don't bother. I'll be fine." She replied. +++At the CSO office+++ The CSO, Mr Bankole was seated in his office with the President of the Student's Union Government and two men. "Thank God you came. Dayo, I believe this man needs no introduction." Bankole began. Pointing to the SUG president. Dayo nodded in affirmative. "This is Inspector Clement and Sergeant Mike. They are men of the Nigerian police force." Bankole went on. "Good evening Sirs." Dayo greeted the two men. "Evening. How you doing Dayo?" Clement asked. "Am fine sir" She replied. "We were here yeaterday but we were told you are in the hospital. Hope you are good now." "Perfectly okay." She replied. "I learnt you are the one who discovered your friend's corpse. Tell us more about it." Clement went straight to the point. Dayo said all that need to be said about the party, the guy that took the late Hadiza outside to talk but she kept the part when Deoye sent her a message that he'll kill her. At exactly 9:15pm, Dayo was asked to go. Since her hostel is a stone throw from the CSO's office, she decided to trek down home. --to be continued-- 2 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:03am On Sep 18, 2014 |
--continuation-- Clement and Mike hopped into the police car parked outside the CSO's office and drove off. Things are begining to get complicated and interesting. First, a certain Mr Kingsley was murdered the previous week, then some gunmen attcked the police headquarters for reasons best known to them, few hours later, a terrorist disguising as a bikeman took Detective Okoro to an unknown destination. The rescue team led by Sergeant Habeeb was attacked and few policemen escaped the attack, that same night, a student was killed by some unknown killers. "Could all this be related?" Clement asked himself as he brought the car to a halt the moment when the traffic light turns red. "Seriously sir, the rate at which crime is being committed in this state is becoming alarming." Mike said to his boss. "A state which was known for peace is now becoming a shadow of its former self." "Which one do we handle first?" Mike asked. "It is very simple. Kingsley's death and the attack on the police headquaters including Okoro's abduction are all from one angle while this student's murder is a different case entirely. We'll start with the case involving the student, then hopefully it may lead us to the terrorists. You know we can't do anything concerning the terrorists now unless Ngozi returns from coma and recounts her ordeal." Clement explained. "In few days we'll be through with Hadiza's case. Thank God Dayo is co-operating with us." Mike added. Clement only smiled as he ignited the car and drove off. He knew better than his patner. +++++++++++++++ Dayo was walking on a deserted road inside the school around the engineering department building. She could hear footsteps behind her but she waved off the thougts of it being danger. She was well aware that every student must have retired to their hostels latest by 8pm for security purpose because no one wants to be a victim. But the footstep was becoming stronger and the person seemed to be catching up on her but she won't stop walking. Just then she took to her heels. "If you dare take anymore step. You'll have yourself to blame." A deep masculine voice warned. She recognised the voice pretty well and so she was less perturbed. "Deoye. You scared me." She said when she turned back to face her late friend's boyfriend. Deoye who stood at 5ft 6inches, well built, fair in complexion wore a frown as he face his late gilrfiend's friend. "So you eventually killed her right?" Deoye asked. "I didn't o. Why will I want to kill my friend who I have dined with, wined with, suffered with. We've done many thing together why will I want to kill her?" "Are you asking me?" Deoye asked brandishing a kitchen knife. "Deoye, you are scaring me." She complained. "I don't mean to scare you. I want to kill you." He replied. "But am not responsible for Hadiza's death." She said. She was begining to raise her voice. "Fine. You took her to where she was killed."This time Deoye had closed up on her. He stabbed her and dragged her body to a nearby bush where it will be conspicous by daybreak. He took to his heels since he has accomplished his goal. --to be continued-- 5 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by labaski(f): 9:30am On Sep 18, 2014 |
ahhh..wahala wa oooo. death here and dere..oga ooo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by DavidStronger(m): 9:32am On Sep 18, 2014 |
[color=#770077][/color] i av always been b shadow, but nw i step out following u D9ty7 u r 9ood |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:34am On Sep 18, 2014 |
e tire mee too o. labaski: ahhh..wahala wa oooo. death here and dere..oga ooo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:35am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Thank you boss. I really appreciate your comment. [quote author=DavidStronger] [color=#770077][/color] i av always been b shadow, but nw i step out following u D9ty7 u r 9ood[/quote] |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:39am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Am sorry guys for not updating like I promised to yesterday.ya very wel ,aw wax ur nyt boss |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:41am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Not bad broda. Onemansquad: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:43am On Sep 18, 2014 |
More updates to come later in the day because I couldn't charge my phone to the fullest. I was updating while charging and so my battery level is 50%. Let your comment pour in while we wait for the next two to three updates. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 10:09am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Mimisboygreat: hw was ur nyt dear?Splendid, urz ? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 10:13am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Am sorry guys for not updating like I promised to yesterday.YH, hw waz ur nyt ? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:21am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Not bad and yours? Eniqurl: YH, hw waz ur nyt ?Snowprince07 I sight you. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 10:34am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: More updates to come later in the day because I couldn't charge my phone to the fullest. I was updating while charging and so my battery level is 50%.Beht if all d characterz die, whu wil remain nah ? Dun kil anibdy aqain oh.....weldone sir. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:38am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Whaaaaattttt I can't believe.he stab her God wats d meaning of all d killings |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:39am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: Not bad and yours? Snowprince07 I sight you.morning boss |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:41am On Sep 18, 2014 |
We are still on chapter one. Maybe more killings and more characters ah dun know. Eniqurl: Beht if all d characterz die, whu wil remain nah ? Dun kil anibdy aqain oh.....weldone sir. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 10:52am On Sep 18, 2014 |
Guess what guys. We are few steps away from being there. D9ty7 is a few votes away from being crowned the best writer of the month. Your votes count, so do cast your votes now. Follow this link and type; "I vote d9ty7" and that's it. https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17. Hope to see your votes when next I check. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emzypaz(m): 11:09am On Sep 18, 2014 |
@Tolulopegeorge, Temmytayo20, Eniqurl, Vibra, Jummy604, Muhammad11, Snowprince07, PrinceAdepoju, Trendiitee, DavidStronger, Onemansquad, Labaski, Mimisboygreat, Zainharb, Emmabest2000, dammygoody, Popeshemoo. Go into that thread and vote for d9ty7. Don't vote if you know you are not enjoying this story. This is the link.... https://www.nairaland.com/1804027/free-n5000-writer-here-every/17... God bless you as you vote. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:30am On Sep 18, 2014 |
@emzypaz: I really appreciate what you've been doing. But believe me, if this story is good enough people will vote for me. But all the same, thanks for your contribution. @Stormybucci, samsondavid and psalmwise: I sight you guys. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 11:42am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: @emzypaz: I really appreciate whatoga i see u ooo... **commenting on d last update** ghen ghen! ghen!! ghen!!! eshin shin carry kpomo |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:50am On Sep 18, 2014 |
hw e take do am na we wan hear. [quote author=stormybucci] oga i see u ooo... **commenting on d last update** ghen ghen! ghen!! ghen!!! eshin shin carry kpomo [/quote] |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stormybucci(m): 11:52am On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: hw e take do am na we wan hear.do wetin?? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:54am On Sep 18, 2014 |
carry kpomo. No be housefly u dey refer to as eshin shin? stormybucci: do wetin?? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:56am On Sep 18, 2014 |
More comments and criticisms.... I'll be back in a few (_) to drop more updates. fill in the gap. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Psalmwise(m): 12:00pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
ride on .....we dey enjoy am |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 12:17pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: We are still on chapter one. Maybe more killings and more characters ah dun know.I kn u re too nice tu du such |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 12:19pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
D9ty7: More comments and criticisms.... I'll be back in a few (_) to drop more updates.I hope itz minutes |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:19pm On Sep 18, 2014 |
Abi naw. Eniqurl: I kn u re too nice tu du such 1 Like |
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