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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:20pm On Oct 28, 2014
Give me the link to one of your poems.
Missmossy:

Amen o,may not write a story though as its so tasking. I write poems and
short stories. You are really trying hard i must say.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zainharb: 10:59pm On Oct 28, 2014
M still folowing. I pray kelvin doesn't get caught o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:10pm On Oct 28, 2014
I hope so too.
zainharb:
M still folowing. I pray kelvin doesn't get caught o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 11:46pm On Oct 28, 2014
Wonderful update! D9ty u 3 much.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 11:59pm On Oct 28, 2014
Emmykul4love:
Wahoooo................you people are very wicked.....wen i said wicked,i mean very very very very wicked..........no body even asked of me since friday..........even the boss,labaski,tecno, and even my darling adeh.................adeh even you that i took home after the birthday party of labaski when you were drunk,*cring*...........i have been very sick since friday,just recovering now, ALL THANKS TO GOD ALMIGHTY for my dear life..
everybody dey sick angry from D9ty7 to Tecno4life to emmykul4life God abeg ooh.


D9ty7 abeg make u beg Racheal 4 me make she no waste herself undecided
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Jeanfortune(f): 6:33am On Oct 29, 2014
Emmykul4love:
Wahoooo................you people are very wicked.....wen i said wicked,i mean very very very very wicked..........no body even asked of me since friday..........even the boss,labaski,tecno, and even my darling adeh.................adeh even you that i took home after the birthday party of labaski when you were drunk,*cring*...........i have been very sick since friday,just recovering now, ALL THANKS TO GOD ALMIGHTY for my dear life..
Emmykul4love, why wont u be sick, when u were busy drinking garri with a mixture of lacasera and 1759??... anyways thank God u r back and i hope u r better? do take good care of ya self
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:43am On Oct 29, 2014
zainharb:
M still folowing. I pray kelvin doesn't get caught o
imagine!!! A terorist but why praying let him b safe?
He is a bad guy abi av u 4goten
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:45am On Oct 29, 2014
Well said.
Jeanfortune:

Emmykul4love, why wont u be sick, when u were busy drinking garri
with a mixture of lacasera and 1759??
... anyways thank God u r back
and i hope
u r better? do take good care of ya self
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:47am On Oct 29, 2014
Help me tell her o.
Onemansquad:

imagine!!! A terorist but why praying let him b safe?
He is a bad guy abi av u 4goten
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:51am On Oct 29, 2014
Emmykul4love:
Wahoooo................you people are very wicked.....wen i said wicked,i mean very very very very wicked..........no body even asked of me since friday..........even the boss,labaski,tecno, and even my darling adeh.................adeh even you that i took home after the birthday party of labaski when you were drunk,*cring*...........i have been very sick since friday,just recovering now, ALL THANKS TO GOD ALMIGHTY for my dear life..
ahah ma bros av bin searchin 4 u since
*my guys told me u av bin lukin 4 thr troble waxup na*
Tank God u ar gud nw
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:00am On Oct 29, 2014
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 7:04am On Oct 29, 2014
Wat a good way to start dis beauriful day..........kip it up
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Missmossy(f): 7:04am On Oct 29, 2014
D9ty7:
Give me the link to one of your poems.
Don't have any one on here anymore. Use to have one previously but it has been wiped off by the tsunami. Will share some as time goes on.

Good morning.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:10am On Oct 29, 2014
Ohkay. How was your night?
Missmossy:

Don't have any one on here anymore. Use to have one previously but it
has been wiped off by the tsunami. Will share some as time goes on.

Good morning.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Missmossy(f): 7:12am On Oct 29, 2014
D9ty7:
Ohkay. How was your night?
Cool.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:20am On Oct 29, 2014
--continuation--
It has been all crying and getting emotional since early in the
morning. The two women have decided to put the past behind them and face
the future. Victoria promised to stop her bad ways and criminal
lifestyle while her mother promised to spend more time with her and
advise her occassionally.
"The table is set." Her mother said as she walked into Victoria's
room.
Victoria dropped the novel she was reading and got down from the bed.
Sitting down on the table, she was feeling on top of the world
because, as far as she is concerned, the last time she ate what she
wanted was when she gained admission into the university four years ago.
Since she dropped out, her mother has decided to make life measerable
for her and when it comes to eating, she has no right whatsoever to
enter the kitchen and fix something for herself.
"So, when are you calling your gang members?" Mrs Alice Patrick
asked her daughter.
"I am thinking maybe I should go to them personally and talk to
them. Calling them on phone is like disregarding them. I don't want to
work against protocol." Victoria replied.
"So when do you intend going to them?" Alice asked her daughter.
"I would have loved to go today, but I think tomorrow is the right
time. Because, they will be spending the whole of their day outside in a
guest house. I'll go to the private residence tomorrow." Victoria
replied.
"That's my girl." Alice said smiling.
The two women continued their meal in silence with each keeping to
her thoughts.
"What about those weapons?" Alice asked.
"I'll do something about them." Victoria replied.
"Better do." Alice said.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Rachel sat down behind chief Patrick's desk. She opened the drower
and brought out the photo diary she saw the previous day. She opened,
chief Patrick's laptop and connected in with the scanner. She scanned
all of the photographs, most especially, the conference where Khal corp
was being launched. She made two copies of the conference. She printed
them out and sswitched off the laptop and stood up to walk out of the
study.

She walked out of the study clutching the printed photos to her
chest. She ran into Onome on the staircase.
"Where are you coming from?" Onome asked suspiciously.
"I came to pick something." Rachel replied.
"But I thought, you said you wanted to take your bath and call
Uncle Clement. What are you doing here?" Onome asked suspiciously.
"Yes, I said that, but I needed to pick up these papers." Rachel
replied.
"What's in it? Do you mind showing me?"
"Its personal." Rachel said and walked away into her room where
she picked up her phone and dialled Clement's number.
"Hello sunshine." He said on picking up.
"Hello love." She replied.
The two lovers conversed for a few mintes before she hung up. Even
though, Clement still didn't tell her he was in the hospital.
She dropped the call and made to slip out of her nightie.
"Ouch!" She whinced in pain.
She held her tommy and laid on the bed. She was sure, she was not yet
due for delivery but you never can tell.
"Ouch!" She screamed again, this time louder. The pain she was
feeling in her tommy is in conjuction with the headache she was going
through and the body pains.
"What's the matter?" Onome asked as she ran into the room.
"My tommy.... My tommy o." She screamed.
"Are you due?" Onome asked.
"No."
"Okay, let me get the doctor." Onome said and walked out of the
room.
Onome ran into the kitchen where her phone was. She was scared of who to call. She can't call Clement because he was still in the hospital. She can't call Kelvin because she is yet to see him today. And calling Chief Patrick is a risk. The old man won't hesitate to yell at her and rain abuses on her.
Then she remembered the family living in the next compound. She remembered, that the house belonged to a doctor couple. Immediately she ran towards the gate with the aim of getting them to help her.

--to be continued--
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by codedbaby(f): 7:22am On Oct 29, 2014
all na circle indeed
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:46am On Oct 29, 2014
Keep your comments coming guys.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 7:54am On Oct 29, 2014
Mehn am loving this story like my day by day vitamin c
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 8:06am On Oct 29, 2014
wow d9ty7 good to have an update this Morning

just hope Rachel will b safe n she shouldn't forget carrying that paper along or else she'll b done for it
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by zainharb: 8:44am On Oct 29, 2014
Onemansquad:

imagine!!! A terorist but why praying let him b safe?
He is a bad guy abi av u 4goten
I fell in luv with his character. U knw, bad guys r usually handsome with dat killer smile nd stubborn attitude. *DATS HOW I IMAGINE KELVIN* undecided grin

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 8:50am On Oct 29, 2014
Na wah o.........dis Racheal sef,make she no go kill herself with gbeborun o
D9ty7........good job
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:55am On Oct 29, 2014
You too? First it was Hameenat94 and now you.
zainharb:
I fell in luv with his character. U knw,
bad guys r usually handsome with dat killer smile nd stubborn attitude.
*DATS HOW I IMAGINE KELVIN* undecided grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:57am On Oct 29, 2014
You and this Rachel sef. Only God knows if you knew yourself somewhere be4. You just seeem to like her.
adewealth027:
Na wah o.........dis Racheal sef,make she no go kill herself with gbeborun o
D9ty7........good job
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:12am On Oct 29, 2014
zainharb:
I fell in luv with his character. U knw, bad guys r usually handsome with dat killer smile nd stubborn attitude. *DATS HOW I IMAGINE KELVIN* undecided grin
ya i agree wit dat .sum bad guys are caring nd knws aw to mak ladies feel loved
#jst lyk Bad Guys get gud gals
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 9:55am On Oct 29, 2014
Jeanfortune:

Emmykul4love, why wont u be sick, when u were busy drinking garri with a mixture of lacasera and 1759??... anyways thank God u r back and i hope u r better? do take good care of ya self
my dear you cant blame me,i was only enjoyin myself..................thank you am better now and by God's grace i will be completely ok.........
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 9:58am On Oct 29, 2014
Onemansquad:

ahah ma bros av bin searchin 4 u since
*my guys told me u av bin lukin 4 thr troble waxup na*
Tank God u ar gud nw
dot mind those your guys,am not looking for trouble...................thank you bro for looking for me
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Emmykul4love(m): 10:04am On Oct 29, 2014
As far as am concerned,i dot feel anything for this woman or gal called rachel,if she dies i wont cry not to talk of coming to her burial...............but i dot want anything to happen to kelvin,he might have a reason for doing all the bad things he is doing,maybe he is even planning on how to stop but dot know how.....................

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:38am On Oct 29, 2014
Don't you think that's heartless? And as for Kelvin, am not sure if he is doing all these for a reason. Just keep reading, you'll know how he
became a terrorist.
Emmykul4love:
As far as am concerned,i dot feel
anything for this woman or gal called rachel,if she dies i wont cry not to talk of coming to her burial...............but i dot want anything to happen to kelvin,he might have a reason for doing all the bad things he is doing,maybe he is even planning on how to stop but dot know how.....................
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 11:03am On Oct 29, 2014
D9ty7:
I sight handie, handmaid, unlimitedbosco and stuff46.... You guys can as well drop your comments.
D9ty7, sowie bro. I wanted to catch up with dah pages before commentinq.. Nice work
Techno4life well done
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 11:06am On Oct 29, 2014
Na the unborn baby I dey pity o and her husband...........and to me,she looks kinda innocent
D9ty7:
You and this Rachel sef. Only God knows if you knew yourself somewhere be4. You just seeem to like her.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:10am On Oct 29, 2014
Welcome boss.
stuff46:

D9ty7, sowie bro. I wanted to catch up with dah pages before commentinq.. Nice work
Techno4life well done

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