i have finally arrived. boss ur work is quite captivating.
since we are all learning, i feel it is necessary to point out some errors that i noticed.
the most frequent is ur use of ''AM'' for ''I AM' orr shortly written ''I'M''.
also there was a place where u mispelt ''PERAMBULATE''.....tnks bos

--continuation--
Tolani has been busy with her books immediately she heard exams will be starting the following week and she has until Tuesday next week before she sit for her first paper after which she'll have two days break before a double paper exam day on Friday.
She looked over at Dolapo who slept on soundly with her lips pouted as if something amused her in her sleep. She slept like a baby who had nothing to worry about. She slept like someone who lives just the way she wants with no troubles or anything.
Maybe she has a guaranteed first class result, she seemed to care less about the upcoming exam. Their final degree exam that determines how they live the next phase of their lives. Life after the youth service.
She hissed silently as she realised she has been staring and thinking about Dolapo's unseriousness for over a minute. She returned her gaze to the textbook before her as she threw occasional glances at her sleeping friend. Ten minutes later she realised she is no longer studying because her mind is divided already. She was reading and at the same time thinking about how the exan would look like. She also took time to think about her sleeping friend who looked like someone who just wrote her final degree exam paper.
Her ringing phone united her divided mind at once. It was Tokunbo.
"Hello Toks." Tolani said.
"Are you in your room?" Tokunbo asked.
"Yes, why asking?"
"I want to borrow you textbook. I want to photocopy some notes I missed." Tokunbo replied.
"No problems."
Tola knew Tokunbo would knock on the door or barge into the room in a few minutes, if not seconds. She even prayed that she doesn't come with her manners. She should barge into the room and wake this sleeping log up.
Unfortunately, Tokunbo gently knocked on the door. Tola hissed as she asked her to come in.
"Look at her. See how she is sleeping like tomorrow no dey. She get exam on monday o. This girl is just not serious." Tokunbo said as she sat down on the only available wooden chair in the room that stood just behind the only reading table.
"Oya, give me those books." Tokunbo said.
"Which one do you want?"
"STAT and GNS." Tokunbo replied.
Tola gave the books to her friend.
"Lets go together nau." Tokunbo pleaded.
"I don't feel like going out. You know it is almost getting dark." Tola replied.
"Trust me, nothing will happen. Lets go. Its gonna be fun." Tokunbo assured.
At once Tola quickly changed into a pink top and a black jean trouser as she hurried into the bathroom to wash her face.
"What about this log of wood here?" Tokunbo asked pointing to Dolapo who seemed to be enjoying her afternoon sleep.
"Leave her jor."
The two girls exited the room and went outside to get their photocopies done.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
A police vehicle sped in and came to a halt in the middle of the road. Five policemen got down and hurried towards a cream coloured Toyota camry which was involved in an accident. The car had hit a wall by the roadside.
"Are you sure it was an accident?" The leader of the police team asked.
"Yes sir. That was all we say. He lost control and swerved off the road." A mechanic whose shop was affected by the crash replied.
An ambulance arrived at the scene and carried Sergeant Charles' liveless body out of the car and laid him on a stretcher.
"He is bleading." A policeman said.
A nurse quickly checked for the bleeding source and saw a piercing hole on his chest.
"He was shot." The nurse announced.
"That's impossible, we heard no gunshot. All we saw was the car coming straight at my shop with no control or anything." The mechanic replied.
After a series of questioning those who claimed to be eye witnesses claimed the saw a car overtake the Camry and someone from the back seat shot the driver of the camry. And immediately the car took a U-turn and took the second lane back in the direction where it had come.
Hot tears trickled down Sergeant Mike's eyes immediately he parked his car at the scene and came out to see his colleague lifeless.

--to be continued--

Fantastic
I dey follow o

Today update na bumba to bumba. *like am so*

na so Charles take die throw way? make deoye no beta kill anybody again o

d9ty7 nice update boss keep erm coming

Finally i am here.... pls spare Racheal

Update short nah

drop anoda one sharp sharp

d policeman die D9ty7 wicked

D9ty7 cum naw drop 6PM update

what of barr. Benson

Spare rachael pls, she is my future wife

tecno4life:
CHARLES REST IN PEACE

oga as u tell am rip na so person go 4lw tell u.*onemansquad my sniper*

I fear you o!

Bluestarry:
oga as u tell am rip na so person go 4lw tell u.*onemansquad my sniper*

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all dis ones are dumb.

D GUY NEEDS UR COMMENTS AND ENCOURAGEMENT TO KEEP DIS MINISTRY MOVING

C'MON COMMENT NAW OLODO raised 2 d power of 9

Bluestarry:
oga as u tell am rip na so person go 4lw tell u.*onemansquad my sniper*

*gives him anoda hard kick across his p.enis and balls and he passes out again*

* kicks onemansquad and takes sniper, hides in an undisclosed location and focuses sniper on onemansquad and bluestarry*

Oga bluestarry go update ur thread

D9ty7:
I fear you o!

boss u neva see anything. U no bin d diz thread when tecno4life kill me? If no b say i get 6 life i 4 die.

6pm update gini? I'll try and spare Rachel for a while longer.lol

tecno4life:
D9ty7 cum naw drop 6PM update

what of barr. Benson

Spare rachael pls, she is my future wife

I already dropped three updates today. My subscription is blinking red already. And its not likely I subscribe today, I'll use the remaining mb to do other things like chatting. You got it?

tecno4life:
Update short nah
drop anoda one sharp sharp
d policeman die D9ty7 wicked

tecno4life:

*gives him anoda hard kick across his p.enis and balls and he passes out again*

* kicks onemansquad and takes sniper, hides in an undisclosed location and focuses sniper on onemansquad and bluestarry*

Oga bluestarry go update ur thread

i just updated it

Bluestarry:
boss u neva see anything. U no bin d diz thread when tecno4life kill me? If no b say i get 6 life i 4 die.

6 life ke

LWKMD
CRUDE!

D9ty7:
6pm update gini? I'll try and spare Rachel for a while longer.lol
I already dropped three updates today. My subscription is blinking red already. And its not likely I subscribe today, I'll use the remaining mb to do other things like chatting. You got it?

chat ke!!!
Come update joor

SO U BEEN WAN KILL RACHAEL MY WIFE if u kill am GOD GO USE 100 CANTER BLOCK UR YANSH

Bluestarry:
i just updated it

okies make I go dat side

tecno4life:


6 life ke

LWKMD
CRUDE!

na nw u knw?

Bluestarry:
na nw u knw?

lol shekau d 2nd

tecno4life:

lol shekau d 2nd

osamibaladen the 2nd

Bluestarry:
osamibaladen the 2nd

na you

Where is mariamferanmi, Ziziola nko?
We are missing your presence here.

Keep it rollin... I give u my word... U are the next best thing...


*yawns* pls where dem dey sell weed here?

Weed? I think dats prohibited in here. The best you can smoke is Cigar or pipe.

Rounakid:
Keep it rollin... I give u my word... U are the next best thing...


*yawns* pls where dem dey sell weed here?

So u later went ahead and sacrificed Charles for peace shey? #Dials 911

who wan unravel the family secret now when you don kill my charlse. . .
Hmmmmm
racheal dey trouble already,
oga i salute your handiwork.
Techno4live i made orders i no see them.
Make i manage my remaining cigar* broz give me chilled bullet and star make i mage am with peper soup

D9ty7...........pls darling we need more updates*rubbing his chest*

tecno4life:




SO U BEEN WAN KILL RACHAEL MY WIFE if u kill am GOD GO USE 100 CANTER BLOCK UR YANSH

tecno4life which kain pikin you be sef. I fear O°˚˚˚ but I no run

D9ty7 i beg nor let Deoye kill Tolani & Dolapo ooooooo?!!!...