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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Cashio(m): 2:44pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
i have finally arrived. boss ur work is quite captivating. since we are all learning, i feel it is necessary to point out some errors that i noticed. the most frequent is ur use of ''AM'' for ''I AM' orr shortly written ''I'M''. also there was a place where u mispelt ''PERAMBULATE''.....tnks bos |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 3:04pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
--continuation-- Tolani has been busy with her books immediately she heard exams will be starting the following week and she has until Tuesday next week before she sit for her first paper after which she'll have two days break before a double paper exam day on Friday. She looked over at Dolapo who slept on soundly with her lips pouted as if something amused her in her sleep. She slept like a baby who had nothing to worry about. She slept like someone who lives just the way she wants with no troubles or anything. Maybe she has a guaranteed first class result, she seemed to care less about the upcoming exam. Their final degree exam that determines how they live the next phase of their lives. Life after the youth service. She hissed silently as she realised she has been staring and thinking about Dolapo's unseriousness for over a minute. She returned her gaze to the textbook before her as she threw occasional glances at her sleeping friend. Ten minutes later she realised she is no longer studying because her mind is divided already. She was reading and at the same time thinking about how the exan would look like. She also took time to think about her sleeping friend who looked like someone who just wrote her final degree exam paper. Her ringing phone united her divided mind at once. It was Tokunbo. "Hello Toks." Tolani said. "Are you in your room?" Tokunbo asked. "Yes, why asking?" "I want to borrow you textbook. I want to photocopy some notes I missed." Tokunbo replied. "No problems." Tola knew Tokunbo would knock on the door or barge into the room in a few minutes, if not seconds. She even prayed that she doesn't come with her manners. She should barge into the room and wake this sleeping log up. Unfortunately, Tokunbo gently knocked on the door. Tola hissed as she asked her to come in. "Look at her. See how she is sleeping like tomorrow no dey. She get exam on monday o. This girl is just not serious." Tokunbo said as she sat down on the only available wooden chair in the room that stood just behind the only reading table. "Oya, give me those books." Tokunbo said. "Which one do you want?" "STAT and GNS." Tokunbo replied. Tola gave the books to her friend. "Lets go together nau." Tokunbo pleaded. "I don't feel like going out. You know it is almost getting dark." Tola replied. "Trust me, nothing will happen. Lets go. Its gonna be fun." Tokunbo assured. At once Tola quickly changed into a pink top and a black jean trouser as she hurried into the bathroom to wash her face. "What about this log of wood here?" Tokunbo asked pointing to Dolapo who seemed to be enjoying her afternoon sleep. "Leave her jor." The two girls exited the room and went outside to get their photocopies done. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++ A police vehicle sped in and came to a halt in the middle of the road. Five policemen got down and hurried towards a cream coloured Toyota camry which was involved in an accident. The car had hit a wall by the roadside. "Are you sure it was an accident?" The leader of the police team asked. "Yes sir. That was all we say. He lost control and swerved off the road." A mechanic whose shop was affected by the crash replied. An ambulance arrived at the scene and carried Sergeant Charles' liveless body out of the car and laid him on a stretcher. "He is bleading." A policeman said. A nurse quickly checked for the bleeding source and saw a piercing hole on his chest. "He was shot." The nurse announced. "That's impossible, we heard no gunshot. All we saw was the car coming straight at my shop with no control or anything." The mechanic replied. After a series of questioning those who claimed to be eye witnesses claimed the saw a car overtake the Camry and someone from the back seat shot the driver of the camry. And immediately the car took a U-turn and took the second lane back in the direction where it had come. Hot tears trickled down Sergeant Mike's eyes immediately he parked his car at the scene and came out to see his colleague lifeless. --to be continued-- 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by yeshi(f): 3:44pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Fantastic I dey follow o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Niwdog(m): 4:05pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Today update na bumba to bumba. *like am so* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 5:30pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
na so Charles take die throw way? make deoye no beta kill anybody again o d9ty7 nice update boss keep erm coming |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by classicuju: 5:31pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Finally i am here.... pls spare Racheal |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:32pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Update short nah drop anoda one sharp sharp d policeman die D9ty7 wicked |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:34pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
CHARLES REST IN PEACE |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:38pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
D9ty7 cum naw drop 6PM update what of barr. Benson Spare rachael pls, she is my future wife |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:41pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:oga as u tell am rip na so person go 4lw tell u.*onemansquad my sniper* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:44pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
I fear you o! Bluestarry: 1 Like |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:44pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:47pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Bluestarry:*gives him anoda hard kick across his p.enis and balls and he passes out again* * kicks onemansquad and takes sniper, hides in an undisclosed location and focuses sniper on onemansquad and bluestarry* Oga bluestarry go update ur thread |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:48pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
D9ty7:boss u neva see anything. U no bin d diz thread when tecno4life kill me? If no b say i get 6 life i 4 die. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:48pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
6pm update gini? I'll try and spare Rachel for a while longer.lol tecno4life:I already dropped three updates today. My subscription is blinking red already. And its not likely I subscribe today, I'll use the remaining mb to do other things like chatting. You got it? tecno4life: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:49pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:i just updated it |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:51pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Bluestarry: 6 life ke LWKMD CRUDE! |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:53pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
D9ty7: chat ke!!! Come update joor SO U BEEN WAN KILL RACHAEL MY WIFE if u kill am GOD GO USE 100 CANTER BLOCK UR YANSH |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 5:56pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Bluestarry:okies make I go dat side |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 5:59pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:na nw u knw? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:03pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Bluestarry:lol shekau d 2nd |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:27pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:osamibaladen the 2nd |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 6:47pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Bluestarry: na you |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Spongia1(m): 8:33pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
oga tecno, i be ur loyal fan sir |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:37pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Where is mariamferanmi, Ziziola nko? We are missing your presence here. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Rounakid(m): 10:12pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Keep it rollin... I give u my word... U are the next best thing... *yawns* pls where dem dey sell weed here? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 10:22pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
Weed? I think dats prohibited in here. The best you can smoke is Cigar or pipe. Rounakid: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:36pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
So u later went ahead and sacrificed Charles for peace shey? #Dials 911 |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by stuff46(m): 10:49pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
who wan unravel the family secret now when you don kill my charlse. . . Hmmmmm racheal dey trouble already, oga i salute your handiwork. Techno4live i made orders i no see them. Make i manage my remaining cigar* broz give me chilled bullet and star make i mage am with peper soup |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 10:53pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
D9ty7...........pls darling we need more updates*rubbing his chest* |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kristen12(f): 11:25pm On Nov 10, 2014 |
tecno4life:tecno4life which kain pikin you be sef. I fear O°˚˚˚ but I no run |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by onosj(f): 2:05am On Nov 11, 2014 |
D9ty7 i beg nor let Deoye kill Tolani & Dolapo ooooooo?!!!... |
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