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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ubechu1(m): 6:04am On Nov 11, 2014 |
Good Morning readers, I want to thank D9TY7 for sharing his lovely stories with us... I have followed this wonderful and mildly impeccable thread from the beginning, but without comments... but I was forced to by my Mother *winks* I say more ink to your pen and more ATP to your fingers . . . . . . I want to use this medium to hail tecno4life, adewealth027, bluestarry, yeshi, eniqurl, cashio, onosj & many others too numerous to mention for making this thread worthy of peeping in even without an update from our OGA @ the too.... Modified: wowwwww, first to comment on page 57....hmmm I smell blessings today... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ChyEndowed(f): 7:39am On Nov 11, 2014 |
Nice write up! Keep it flowing |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:50am On Nov 11, 2014 |
kristen12:no mind the guy.tecno4life aw old are u? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:27am On Nov 11, 2014 |
Abeg who hlp me see bros D na bluestarry nd tecno4life mak una go him haus go hijack him here |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Flakeey(f): 11:28am On Nov 11, 2014 |
hmmmmmm |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 11:29am On Nov 11, 2014 |
tecno4life ah hear say u dy cos troble 4 dis thread ..shey u knw who i be raise ma shirt up a little nd shows him ma .14mm |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 11:32am On Nov 11, 2014 |
Onemansquad:bros we don go o if u c as bro d9t7 fight tecno4life d guy don die o. Oga get powa o no try am |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 12:17pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Bluestarry:shuo !!! Mayb e jst faint ni ![]() |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 12:27pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
I never subscribe yet. As soon as I did, loads of updates are just gonna rush in. Rachel: I won't talk o but thread carefullly. Clement: get ready for ur biggest heartbreaks. Kelvin: kip it up, its ur time, enjoy! Chief Patrick: unleash d dragan. Another blood spill. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Fatalveli(m): 1:05pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Haa, techno4life don kill sergeant charles ooo, onemansquad and bluestarry, don't u think justice must be served... |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by RhAngel: 1:06pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
We r waitin, weldone D9ty7, u r one person dt mks my holiday worthwhile. Nice story, wel constructed, keep updating amma keep following. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:36pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
--continuation-- Still deep in his thought, Deoye remembered something that made his heart tremble. His heart threatened to break down but as a bad guy that he was, he stood his ground. He remembered that he forgot his gun inside his hotel room. He was thorn between going back to the hotel and picking his gun or sit back and watch as his pictures will be made public on the news at night. At once he adjusted his cloth and exited the house. "Guy, where to?" An unknown guy asked him. " what right do you have to question me?" He replied. The unknown guys smiled as he puffed the smoke of his cigarett expertly. "Anyways, get down there. Its my car and I am going out with it." Deoye continued. "E be like sey you no know me abi? Na me dem dey call expert killer." The guys bragged. Deoye knew best not to go into bragging with the guy. He could be a spy, he could be anything. "Anyways, na your brother talk sey make I dey watch you. In fact he talk sey you must not drive out of this compound." The guy explained. "Guy, you know wetin dey? I forgot something important in my hotel room downtown. I want to go pick it." Deoye explained. "I no fit allow you comot o." Deoye brought out his wallet and removed naira notes, he handed it to the guy. "See my life. You think sey I poor? Or because I no get car? No go think am o. I rich pass you." The guy said collecting the naira notes and dropping in on the floor. "I no mean am like that na. I just talk sey make you use am buy stuff." Deoye replied like the man he was. The guy faced Deoye, his eyes wide with excitement. "You be.....?" He asked. Deoye smiled and nodded slowly as he unlocked his car doors and hopped behind the wheel. His new found friend went to open the gate for him. Eighteen minutes later, he pulled up his car at a distance and walked towards the hotel where he checked out a few hours ago. The receptionist on duty then froze in fright immediately she saw him. "Excuse me." He said. The lady turned to face him all smiles. "I checked out a few hours ago and now I just realised I forgot something in the room." He explained. Without any more questions, she picked the key and handed it over to him. He took the key and walked towards the stairs. Three minutes later he had found his gun where he hid it under the mattress. He could hear footsteps from the hallway. Then a knock sounded on his door. "Who is it?" he asked. "Its me, the receptionist. You have a visitor downstairs." She replied. He walked towards the window, opened the curtain and saw two men standing beside his car. No doubt, they are policemen. The same men who came to arrest Darasimi. "Come in." He said. The door opened slowly and the receptionist walked in. "How dare you call the police for me?" He asked pushing her to the wall nearest to the door. He fastened the door lock. "You'll regret this day for the rest of your life." He said he pushed up onto the bed and stuffed her mouth with the pillow. He pushed her skirt up and dragged her panties to a side. He inserted his pistol as far as it could go into her private. She gasped even with the pillow in her mouth. "If you make a sound. I shoot." He warned. She nodded and he removed the pillow. "Which other way is the exit?" He asked. "The fire exit. There is a gate beside the generator house. Its key is among the bunch of keys that hung on the door into the generator house." She replied in pain. "Good girl. But I need more cries from you. I love to see girls cry." He said as he held his gun firmly. "Please, I am a virgin. Don't make me go through pains." She pleaded. "Well, you are no more a virgin. You wanted me dead." He said as he covered her mouth with the pillow once again as he pushed the pistol as far as he could into he private, this time with more force. He turned the gun inside her for a few seconds, then he pounded her twelve times. With this he stood up with his wet gun and walked towards the door. One last look at her, he felt guilty immediately he saw blood stains on the bedsheet. He knew he had injured her and her life will never remain the same again. He opened the door and disappeared. --to be continued-- 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:39pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
I must confess, this story is the most challenging story I have ever written. It is fun anyways. Can I finish it this month? I doubt it. Unless I do four updates per day. But hopefully before christmas, I'd have completed it. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:42pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Am glad to hear that. Thanks. Ma or sir? RhAngel: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 1:44pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Bluestarry and onemansquad. You guys shud come and carry this weakling, tecno4life. I only gave him a jab(upper cut) and he passed out. Come carry him before police start to dey question me o. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:02pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
D9ty7:no worry boss d guy go carry imself comot but ill advice to run because when im wake up na im go question u. Im fit do u wetin happen 4 1562 seff |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:07pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Fatalveli:ya it must be served and our waitress that suppose to serve the justice is dead r.i.p tecno4life. Let make a new waitress i nominate emmykul4love. Onemansquad choose urs. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:09pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Onemansquad:i d tell u wetin i c d guy die infact na me bury am. |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 2:31pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Bluestarry:no mind tecno4life im dy hospital and is responding to treatment he wil b bak soon |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 2:32pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Fatalveli:am telin u ah dnt knw why d9ty7 is eliminating those guys o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:33pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Onemansquad:chai oga d9t7 u hear wetin i hear? M d respond to treatment you still d house? Tear race o |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 2:33pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Those policemen killed that receptionist......y would dey send her to go and call Deoye knowing how dangerous he is ![]() D9ty7..............muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuah |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by donsamtex(m): 2:34pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Nice story u got there. N I love d constant update never let us go hungry. Kip it flowing |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:35pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Onemansquad:fatalveli i no die mbannu you no hear say i get 6 lives? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 2:35pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
hey none of u move or else!!! Av caught dm again o the GMRs Viewing this topic: Seanixking(m), Edipee, donsamtex(m), ogunholla, Jhymrod(f) and 3 guest(s) |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 2:37pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Hey none of u should move or else Av caught dm again the GMRs Viewing this topic: Seanixking(m), Edipee, donsamtex(m), ogunholla, Jhymrod(f) and 3 guest(s) |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:37pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
adewealth027:na only im u c kiss? Chai e no fair |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:38pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
The policemen no send her o. She went on her own. If they had sent her, they go with her and round him up while he was in the room. But they wanted to play easy with him by waiting for him outside. They'll just round him up immediately he exit the hotel building. Shey you get? adewealth027: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:39pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Hey! Get out of here. You are too young to see two adults kissing. What do you know about kissing? Bluestarry: |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 2:41pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
Next update loading. To be dropped before 5pm |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:44pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
D9ty7:you are too old to know about young boys. What do u know about tecno4life n onemansquad? |
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 2:44pm On Nov 11, 2014 |
D9ty7:e too te na |
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