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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 8:47am On Nov 11, 2014
Nice update bt na wa for angela o y she no want make david see her it not fair mi feeling for david o nice work
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by myndd(m): 9:40am On Nov 11, 2014
SONIA!!!!!!!! Gud 4 ebere tho
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 10:37am On Nov 11, 2014
Hmmmmmm. Ebere will not sleep well.
Sonai sorry oo
Oga Calismart Welldone sire
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by shayomi: 5:33pm On Nov 11, 2014
Very nice story. It made me post my 1st comment on nairaland. Keep it up bro. Waiting for the next update.

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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 5:54pm On Nov 11, 2014
shayomi:
Very nice story. It made me post my 1st comment on nairaland. Keep it up bro. Waiting for the next update.
You are HIGHLY welcomeD
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 7:49am On Nov 12, 2014
Calismart hmm I say a big nice update me can't wait to c wat happens on ur next update mi *following* dis thread bumper to bumper kip it up dear
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:16am On Nov 13, 2014
Episode 34


Streams of blood oozed from Ebere's arm as she lay on her foam,motionless.
Sonia quicky ran up to her with heart beating so fast and fixed the gun into her hand to make it appear she shot herself,while making sure she avoided blood stains.

Sonia shook with fear on seeing the policemen on duty.She had thought they wouldn't be out by now.It was still too early,she thought,with an uncertain feeling all over her.She couldn't put herself together that the taxi driver noticed her fidgeting.She had passed a police checkpoint the previous day with her mother with much confidence that she wouldn't be spotted,but this morning,the feeling was different.

"Driver stop!"She finally told the taxi driver,removing her eyes from the policemen to make him believe the reason she asked him to stop was not connected to the police.

"You say make i stop?"The young man with a black-sleeveless-top asked,still moving the vehicle.

"You deaf? Stop me here!"Sonia yelled,hitting his hands.

"See me see wahala o.Sofri tell me nah.You want make we get accident?"He hissed and parked at one side of the road.
Sonia produced #200 note from her bag,gave it to him and came down from the taxi without any delay.

"Haba.wait make i give you your change na"He reminded Sonia.

"Keep the change"She replied vaguely and made her way into the bush.

"I hope say no problem sha?"He called after Ebere who was no longer in sight

"Who are you talking to,mr.man?"The horrible voice of one angry looking policeman jolted him back to his driver seat.

"Na the persenger wey i carry"He replied.

"Why did you stop the person here.Is it a man or a woman"The policeman asked again.

"Na one girl o.She say make i stop am here"

"Is this the place she told you she would be stopping?"

"Noo.Where she dey go still far"

The policeman smiled and looked into the bush.He saw her running;falling and getting back up.

"Baba Toure,Sergeant Okoro,Ibrahim. Make una show!"He called on three other policemen who came to him immediately.
He gathered the three of them together and made their eyes follow his finger as he pointed to the person running into the bush.

"Go and get her here.I suspect something"He instructed and eyed the taxi driver.The three policemen dived into thd bush with their guns.

"Mr.man,come down from that motor.You are not going anywhere until they return with her"He told the taxi driver.

"Hia! Ololoo, wetin i do na? Wetin i do sir"The young man asked with a pleading voice.He never wanted to have anything to do with 'Nigerian police'.
The popular saying' i no follow na #5000' was registered somewhere in his brain.


____
"Angela my daughter.Nwa m o"Mrs uwa ran up to her daughter with tears of joy trailing down her cheeks.Her husband was still at the door.
She ran her hands across Angela's face and body.

"Oh look at my daughter.Who did this to you? Where happened to you?"She rained endless questions on Angela who couldn't utter any word but allowed the tears that gathered in her own eyes to drop.

"i am happy you are alright"her father said,allowing a smile to cross his face for the first time in days.

"I saw hell.i was kidnapped"Angela cried.

"Kidnapped? Who kidnapped you? Did you see their face?"Her father asked.

"i saw their faces.i know them.i do.they wanted to sacrifice me to their god but my God saved me"she cried more.

"Thank God.its not my daughter they will use for sacrifice.Tell us about it"her mother urged her.

"For goodness sake.you should let her have some rest.she shouldn't be disturbed"the doctor's voice echoed as he entered the room.

Just then,the door barged open with full force and David ran into the room,with Tony closing the door after him.

"Angelaaa"he ran up to her and kissed her forehead.

"She needs rest"The doctor referred to David who paid deaf ears to his words.Here is Angela,the woman that gave him sleepless nights and restless days and there he stood telling him about rest.

"She would be fine.I guess you are her husband.I need to see you in my office"The doctor said to him and finally left,realising it would be impossibe to shoo him off his wife.

___
"Mr David.Your wife was lucky not to have sustained serious injuries from the accident and most especially,her pregnancy was not affected in any way.Its a miracle"The doctor told David with a friendly smile.

David's eyes opened wide in amazement.

"Did you say pregnancy?"He asked,not believing his ears.

"Of course.Two months pregnant.Aren't you aware of that?"The doctor asked surprised.

"Wow,God be praised.Thank you doctor"David couldn't contain his joy as he shook the doctor's hands heavily.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by kceemart(f): 8:18am On Nov 13, 2014
tanks 4 d update.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:31am On Nov 13, 2014
kceemart:
tanks 4 d update.
u're welkm.
Hw's ur nyt?
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by seunviju(f): 8:41am On Nov 13, 2014
Make we go dey buy baby things niyen o.Thanks for the update
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 8:45am On Nov 13, 2014
seunviju:
Make we go dey buy baby things niyen o.Thanks for the update
lols.u ar welcm
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 9:28am On Nov 13, 2014
Calismart u con say make u update well tnks for dat sha


Mi piting sonia o it was not her fault sha more wisdom to u dear
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:33am On Nov 13, 2014
My people o,i just saw this picture.So i decided to put it hear to hear from you.

If this is the winner,how the loser go be?

Re: The Most Wanted Maid by jaymomma(f): 9:54am On Nov 13, 2014
Going nicely
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Bagayouche: 10:56am On Nov 13, 2014
This is a very nice write up and whats best she supplied us with d details fast. I which u could get an award or a reward. More greese to ur elbow. This is how stories are written if u are not ready to write a story dnt start and keep d readers in supense.
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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 11:39am On Nov 13, 2014
Bagayouche:
This is a very nice write up and whats best she supplied us with d details fast. I which u could get an award or a reward. More greese to ur elbow. This is how stories are written if u are not ready to write a story dnt start and keep d readers in supense.

Thanks dear.I'm really encouraged by your words smiley
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 1:39pm On Nov 13, 2014
Pregnant at last?? Praise d Lord ooo... But Sonia... Y nau
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by kceemart(f): 4:02pm On Nov 13, 2014
Calismart:

u're welkm.
Hw's ur nyt?
It was fine o my broda n urs?
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:46pm On Nov 13, 2014
kceemart:
It was fine o my broda n urs?
my DAY was good
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 7:41am On Nov 14, 2014
Patience pays.i'm so happy for Angela.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 9:42am On Nov 14, 2014
EPISODE 35


Adaora's phone rang for the third time before she noticed it.She was busy running around searching for Sonia in all the places they had run to for safety earlier.
Her own house was not left out.She gathered enough courage to make it there but She was not there.Asking people if they saw her,didn't cross her mind as she quicky dashed off.

She peered at the screen of her phone and saw a certain number without name,calling.

"Hello"She spoke into the phone.

"Yes am i speaking with Sonia's mother?"The voice from the phone asked.

"Who are you?"Adaora asked,already overcome by fear.She inserted that new line into her phone recently and Sonia was the only person who knew the number.

"Your daughter is here with us at the police station.The one at williams.Division 2"The voice said and hung up.

Adaora held her forehead as she felt the sudden headache strike her.She was going to act fast.She was going to do something she never believed she would do.


____
Angela opened her eyes only to find David sitting close to her.Her parents were gone now,the drip on her arm already disconnected.She closed them back and thought for sometime.
When she opened them again,David's eyes locked with her's.There was a short moment of silence as they looked into each others eyes until Angela broke it with a slap on David's left cheek.That was the first time she dared raise a finger on him.
David's face was expressionless for a while.

"I deserve more than that,Angela.You can go on and slap me again if that would make you forgive me"David told her without any trace of anger in his voice.

Angela watched him produce a white handky from his pocket to dry the line of tears that betrayed his expressionless face.
Angela took her face off him,facing the opposite direction and battling the tears that had already gathered in her eyes.She didn't know when she started sobbing and before she knew it,her face was wet all over.

"I am sorry my dear.I am sorry"David consoled her,drying her tears.

"Why did you do it? Why? Did you do it with the intention of getting a child from her because i haven't been able to give you one?"Angela asked,amidst sobs,searching his eyes filled with sorrow.

"No.Stop talking like that.I just can't explain what came over me.I found myself doing what i never intended doing.I....i ...."The tears in his voice didn't allow him to carry on.

"It's ok.Please stop.Don't cry...i don't want to see you cry again.It will only break my heart the more"Angela said,trying really hard to keep herself from crying.She felt his face with her hands and shook her head.
How fast his face changed for worst these few days she was away.

"I'm sorry.I promise i won't leave you again"She drew his face close and kissed him passionately,tasting the salty fluids running down from his eyes.
"I missed you so much.I'd have killed myself if any happened to you"David made her understand before positioning himself very well to have a better taste of that sweet red succulent lips of hers;pure strawberries they sure tasted like.

"mhhmmm"Tony cleared his throat,standing right there in the hospital room,disengaging them from their passionate hold.They didn't notice when he entered.

"I am very sorry for disturbing you"He apologised,observing their faces to know if they wore annoyance but there was no trace of such.Instead,he saw the smiles on their faces,forcing him to smile too.He went for one of the chairs.

"Angela,you haven't told me why you attempted killing my friend.Infact,where were you hidding?"Tony gesticulated.

"She must pay for that"David added seriously.Angela smiled and hit him playfully.

Angela's face which was lit up with smiles soon turned sad as she imagined what could have happened to her.

"I was kidnapped.What pained me most was that someone whom i trusted as a friend had a hand in it.They wanted to sacrifice me to their gods"Angela expressed bitterly.

"What?"David couldn't believe his ears.

"By now,i should be a dead person if God hadn't saved me.They took my clothes and made we wear one white gown,saying i would be sacrificed this morning"She explained further.

"Tell me,which of your friend has a hand in it?"David demanded.

"It's...it...it's...Eb...Ebere"Angela stammered.

"Unbelievable!,"David shouted,"how could she?"

"Lets go after her with the police immediately"Tony suggested.

"No no.please don't.What i ask is that you don't let her know i am found"Angela pleaded.

"No way.We are going to find her"David objected.

"Pleeease.Leave her to me"Angela pleaded again.


___
Angela's mother answered the door.She was preparing another meal for Angela.
The person she saw at the door made her take few steps backwards.It was Adaora,her half sister.

"What do you want?"She barked at her.

"I have come for something more than important.It has to do with your daughter"Adaora said,not moved by Ngozi's harsh words.

Ngozi stared at her without another word.
Which daughter of hers could Adaora be talking about,she thought.

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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 2:16pm On Nov 14, 2014
Calismart! Left my heart racing!
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by chii8(f): 3:37pm On Nov 14, 2014
Ghen ghen
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 3:48pm On Nov 14, 2014
Omo see suspense..... Mmmmn, dis is getting serious ooo. Abeg, Calismart, no let me faint b4 u update ooo. Thanks 4 d update sha.... Expecting anoda one soon.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 5:18pm On Nov 14, 2014
Keep killing us with suspense o abeg cum n release us o
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by CLARIDA(f): 3:43am On Nov 15, 2014
op, am following u bumper to bumper, I love this storykiss
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Queenxstar(f): 7:18am On Nov 15, 2014
This is getting more interesting dear Candy.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Aipete2(f): 8:59am On Nov 15, 2014
I said it earlier that sonia is angela's sister
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Queenxstar(f): 11:12am On Nov 15, 2014
It gets better and better.
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 1:28pm On Nov 16, 2014
Happy sunday 'mes amis'

I know i have been as slow as snail with the story but please bear with me.
We are almost there.
I will update later today
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 6:14pm On Nov 16, 2014
EPISODE 36


With one last look at Adaora,Ngozi opened the door wide for her to enter.
Adaora took time observing the wide parlour.She couldn't remember when last she was in that parlour.
She forced out a little smile on seeing their father's old picture hanging somewhere on the wall with other frames.Ngozi had begged her husband to allow her put it there so she can always remember him with it.

Adaora reached for it and rubbed her hands across it.She developed hatred for him when he gave almost all he had to Ngozi and only but few to her.
She turned her face to Ngozi who kept staring at her and went back to where she was sitting.

Ngozi went in and soon emerged with a glass of cold water for her.She lifted the glass of water,stole a glance at Ngozi and gulped it down.


Ngozi was sitting on the large sofa while Adaora sat on a separate one.Adaora retreated to ponder in her heart whether to unravel the heavy secret.She knew it wasn't something Ngozi would take easy with.

"I must start by apologising to you.I have done you harm time without number out of envy.We both know it all started after our father's will was revealed"Adaora began.

Ngozi nodded,waiting patiently for her to bring up her daughter issue as she stressed out earlier.What is it about Angela she wants to say?

"The reason why i am here is because of your daughter"Adaora revealed again.

"Angela?"

"Not Angela"Adaora answered.

"Then who? How many daughters do i have?"Ngozi was loosing her patience.

"I know you have the right to even strangle me to death or report me to the police if you choose to be merciful but i have to say it.She has suffered untold hardship with me.I derived no joy from her suffering.I wished i could give her the better life you would have given her but instead,she work day and night,wearing herself out inorder to get money to buy me drugs......"

"Who are you talking about?"Ngozi interrupted her.

"Many years ago,a baby girl was taken away from you by some armed men.I had a hand in it"Adaora dropped the bombshell.

Ngozi stood up on her feet with eyes as sharp as the sun,coming close to her.

Adaora stood up too,not to fight her back if she comes for a fight but to defend herself from her if she does so.And just like she guessed,Ngozi fell upon her like the falling olympus,tearing and pulling at her clothes and hair.

Mr.uwa returned just then and beheld the unholy sight.He quickly drew out his wife.Adaora made no attempt of retaliation and it came clear to him that Ngozi was the one fighting her.Though she was the one shedding tears.

"What is going on here?"He demanded,looked at his wife for an explanation but when he saw she wasn't going to say anything,turned to Adaora,wondered what might have prompted her coming to his house in the first place.

Adaora composed herself together.Those punches really gave her great pains.

"I need you to undestand and forgive me,"Adaora drawled, "Your daughter's maid is your daughter but now,she is in a situation that i cannot help her... but you can.You can stop her from going to prison with your wealth and influence"

Ngozi felt her heart ache.Heat suddenly filled her body.That young woman,her daughter?



The car pulled up in front of the police station.Mr.uwa,his wife and Adaora came down and went inside the station.

One of the policemen took them to Sonia,who was surprised to see Angela's parents there.She thought they must have heard what she did.
Mrs.Ngozi held her face and looked into her eyes.Those eyes looked exactly like Angela's.Her lips look exactly like her own lips.She fought the threatening tears and locked Sonia in a thight embrace,keeping her heart racing.

Angela couldn't grab anything,her confusion got to it's climax.

"Mom what is happening?"She turned to Adaora.


"Relax.We are going to make sure you come of here.We are going to hold talks with the necessary personnels.We are also going to contact that lady behind all these"Mr.uwa assured her.

"I shot her this morning"Sonia whispered to them.

"You shouldn't have done that.You are not a murderer"Mr.uwa broke the silence Sonia words created.


"Dont worry about anything.We are going to see if she's dead or alive"Ngozi held her close again,leaving her in the wildest of imaginations,"oh your hair looks ruffled"Ngozi produced a comb from her handbag and ran it severally over Sonia's natural hair,making sure some of the hair got caught in the comb.
After that,she left with her husband.

"Mom?"Sonia looked into her mother's eyes for some sort of explanation.

"One thing i want you to know is that i am only human.but what i am doing now is for your own good.Don't worry,you would soon get to understand"Adaora said,trying to hide the guilt in her eyes.



As soon as Mr.uwa left the hospital with his wife,he brought out his phone and dialled the family doctor's line.

"Helo sir"

"Doctor Ben.I am coming over. I need you to run a DNA test for me"

"Alright sir"

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